The Mercies of Cinderella

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Cinderella is about to marry Prince Charming. Her evil Step Mother and Stepsisters have been convicted of high treason for their conspiracy to prevent the Prince from finding his true love.

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Payback is a bitch, and so at times is Cinderella. Cinderella is about to marry Prince Charming. Her evil Step Mother and Stepsisters have been convicted of high treason for their conspiracy to prevent the Prince from finding his true love, and are awaiting sentencing. Before the Prince passes sentence, Cinderella asks to take them into her custody for a year to determine whether she may speak on their behalves. The Prince grants her request, and remands the Step relations to one year under the tender mercies of Cinderella.

During this year, while Cinderella basks in the boundless love of the Prince and the joy of her first pregnancy, she applies the hard lessons she learned growing up to her Stepsisters, expressing her concern for their moral edification and well being with various paddles, straps, and even the scopula of a giant trap-door spider. Step Mother, who taught her that nothing in life is free, has to pay for her keep with sexual favors for all who provide her with any goods or services.

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Chapter One

?Is there anyone here who would speak well of the prisoners??

For such a glorious time in the kingdom, when the Prince was engaged to a beautiful maiden of unsurpassed virtue, everyone save three found joy at the thought of the forthcoming nuptials. Rather, Al-m?ta and her daughters, Grizelda and Nadezhda (the young maiden?s stepmother and two stepsisters), were filled with naught but trepidation. The air was sweet with the scent of honeysuckle, and everywhere, everyone was filled with joy. However, those aforementioned abject three stood quaking in the throne room dressed in the filthy, tattered remains of their hand-me-down, ballroom gowns – awaiting judgment from the Prince.

?Again, I ask, is there anyone here who would speak well of the prisoners??

Although the throne room was filled with dozens of visiting dignitaries and courtiers and other guests, each of whom paid rapt attention to the deep mellifluous baritone of the Prince?s every spoken word, no one ventured so much as a single kind word on behalf of the convicted threesome. Of course, until just recently, although the three had affected the most pretentious airs, they were well beneath the notice of even the lowest born of those assembled in the throne room. In fact, as to those villagers who actually knew the three, no one had come forward on their behalf, despite the rare opportunity to appear with full honors at Court.

?I ask a third and final time. Is there anyone here who would speak well of the prisoners??

Once more, and for the final time, silence rang throughout the room. Had one arrived late, one might have expected any of the three to turn and plead for a single kind word from the young maiden whom they had wronged most grievously. Surely, despite their foul transgressions, she would have interceded on their behalf. However, they had previously sought her intercession without leave of the Prince to speak, and were informed that any such further exclamations without the Prince?s express leave would result in a delay of the proceedings, sufficient to remove the tongue of the offender. Accordingly, the three could only plead with their eyes. Unfortunately, as chance would have it, their sole potential savior was not looking in their direction, but rather was fully occupied in the selection of a treat from a tray of fine berries and grapes.

The Prince shook his head. ?It seems that none will speak on your behalf before I pronounce my sentence. Therefore,? the Prince thundered, pausing for effect, ?I will now allow each of you a brief moment to speak in your own defense, beginning with the eldest and continuing to the youngest. Al-m?ta, widow of Joseph, Smith of West Southampton, mother of Grizelda and Nadezhda and stepmother of Cinderella Smith, step forward and tell the Court one thing that you ever did for the benefit and welfare of my beloved Cinderella.?

Having been found guilty of high treason for their conspiracy to prevent the Prince from finding his one true love in an expedited but eminently fair trial, a death sentence was a foregone conclusion. While there are relatively quick and easy ways to die, there are other less pleasant means as well, such as the inadvertent consumption of a Devil?s Fire mushroom, which burns right through one?s stomach (a fate which befell Cinderella?s poor father a mere fortnight after his marriage to the now convicted prisoner; who just happened to inherit his house, a successful smithy, a mule, three goats, and a newly penurious stepdaughter). The Prince was bending as far towards leniency as possible by giving the condemned woman an opportunity to earn a simple beheading or hanging. This was, in truth, only because he had not yet come to terms with the entirety of the facts as presented. As a paragon of virtue, the Prince continued to cling fervently to the hope and belief that, in the last twelve years – while the woman had raised Cinderella – there were many instances of step-motherly beneficence, at least one of which would ease his tortured soul.

Al-meta slowly took two small steps forward, then shifted her feet and cleared her throat several times to buy a few more precious seconds to think. ?By your leave, Milord, I, um, I…why, Milord, there are just so many. It is very hard to pick a particular instance.?

The Prince took a deep breath, then exhaled slowly. Even a paragon of virtue?s patience is not infinite. ?Choose one, or step back and I will inquire of your daughters.?

?Of course, Milord, I ? I ? I taught her always to tell the truth.?

Cinderella daintily wiped a bit of strawberry from the corner of her mouth, and smiled. Indeed, she had always told the truth. Always! But more often than not, she was beaten for it.

The Prince nodded, and took a moment to consider the woman?s response. ?Step back. Grizelda, step forward. As the eldest sister in the house, surely you had experience that would benefit your younger siblings. Tell the Court of one lesson that you shared with my beloved Cinderella.?

?By your leave, Milord, um ? um … er … I taught her, uh, to ? um ? well to ? uh, respect other people?s things! That?s it! I taught her to respect other people?s things.?

Cinderella smiled again. Curiously, respect for other people?s things was not the first thing that jumped to the forefront of her mind when she thought of the many lessons that her elder stepsister had taught her. In fact, respect for other people?s things was well down on the list – behind avarice, duplicity, and self-aggrandizement. However, she had to admit that it was still a lesson well learned, taught through her stepsister?s incessant tattling and her stepmother?s immediate and disproportionate punishments.

?Step back. Nadezhda, step forward. Tell the Court of one time when you did something kind for my darling Cinderella.?

The younger stepsister stepped forward slowly. Her eyes remained downcast. Her voice, though soft, was firm and certain. ?I gave her bread, Milord.?

?You gave her bread??

?Yes, Milord. When Cinderella was sent to bed without her supper, I would try to sneak her a crust or two. Sometimes, I even brought her soup.?

?And how often did this occur – that my poor angel was sent to her bed without supper??

?Often enough, Milord. Perhaps once a fortnight.?

?And did you bring her food each time??

?No, Milord. Only sometimes – when I thought I would not be seen.?

Cinderella did not smile this time. Rather, her eyes glistened. The younger stepsister was only a year older than Cinderella, and while it would be a significant overstatement to say that they were friends, she had experienced certain kindnesses at times from the girl. Up until this moment, she had looked forward to seeing her stepmother and stepsisters hanging with the other ornaments in the Great Hall at her wedding reception. Only now, she was less certain of her feelings. Given her uncertainty, Cinderella?s virtue compelled her to intercede.

?Milord?? Cinderella asked, her intonation rising tentatively to ask for leave.

?Yes, my darling??

?Thrice you asked whether anyone would speak on behalf of the accused. And thrice I remained silent, for there was naught save ill that came to my mind. However, there is plain truth in what she says. Indeed, though it takes some fine sifting, there is some small grain of truth in what each of them has said. As is true whenever any truths are revealed, what was once assumed or believed must give way to new assumptions and beliefs. Though I once believed that only a painful death could justly reward my step-relations for their past misdeeds, now I am beset with doubts. This is a time of miraculous changes and wonderment. How else could I have found you, my beloved?? Cinderella paused, and fixed her gaze on the Prince?s steel grey eyes. ?So, I crave a boon, Milord.?

?But speak, and it is granted, Milady.?

Cinderella took the Prince?s huge left hand in both of her own. ?What you would give me solely out of love, Milord, in this instance I cannot accept. You must first hear my request. Then, if in the name of justice, as Prince and Lord of the Realm, you deem my request reasonable, I would ask you to grant me this favor.?

?Then as Prince and Lord of the Realm, I will hear your petition, Milady.?

?Thank you, Milord. I beg you, Milord, to stay the delivery of any sentence on the prisoners for one year, until a fortnight prior to our first anniversary. During this coming year, commend my step-relations to my keeping so that I can better surmise whether I might speak well on their behalves prior to sentencing.?

?Your request is in accordance with the dictates of justice, and pleases the Prince and Lord of the Realm. Therefore, for the next year, I commend the prisoners to the keeping and tender mercies of Cinderella.?

The younger stepsister curtsied, but did not raise her eyes. The stepmother and elder stepsister almost cried out in relief, but were able to bite their respective tongues before they lost them. Cinderella smiled, and reached behind her, retrieving a small wooden box.

?Milord, may I address the prisoners??

?Milady, they are no longer before the Court. They have been commended to your keeping. They are your chattels. You may address them at any time and in any manner you deem fit.?

?Thank you, Milord. Henceforth, for the time you are in my keeping, you shall be known only as Step Mother, and Elder and Younger. Younger, when is the last time you ate??

Without raising her eyes, Younger replied softly, ?Two days past, Milady, at dusk.?

?Are you hungry, Younger??

?Yes, Milady, frightfully so.?

?Step forward, Younger, and take one of these fine strawberries, gifts from our great friends, King Randolph and the fine people of the Silver Plains.?

?Thank you, Milady.?

?You are most welcome, Younger. There now, is that not wonderful??

?It is most wonderful, Milady.?

?When you finish that one, you may take another then step back for a moment. I would like to have a word with Step Mother and Elder.?

Younger curtsied, then took a second large bite out of her strawberry. Juice trickled down her chin. Cinderella smiled, and wiped Younger?s chin with her own hand towel. Younger curtsied a second time, then took a strawberry the size of her fist and withdrew. As Cinderella called Step Mother and Elder forward, it was all they could do to keep themselves from dashing up to the tray of strawberries.

?Now then, Step Mother. You told the prince that you taught me always to tell the truth. Do you value the truth, Step Mother??

?Of course, Milady.?

?Then what happens to naughty girls who do not tell the truth??

?I suppose they are punished.?

?Elder. Elder!? Cinderella?s voice was a bit more strident than she had intended. It took her barely a moment to recognize the tone as one that she had heard countless times as a prelude to a prolonged tongue-lashing. Cinderella promised herself that regardless of the provocation, she would never use that tone again.

Elder, also recognizing the tone, snapped to attention, abandoning her fixation on the dwindling remains of Younger?s second strawberry.

?M-milady.?

?You seem distracted. Am I boring you??

?No, Milady, I was just, uh, just, sorry Milady!?

?Ah, I see. You were interested in Younger?s strawberry. Perhaps you were recalling one of the many lessons that you taught me regarding the importance of respecting other people?s things. A lesson involving strawberries, perhaps? As I recall, there once was a bowl of strawberries in the kitchen of the house my father built that we shared after his death. They were woodland strawberries, nowhere near as glorious as these fine berries from King Randolph, but sweet and pleasant enough. Step Mother forbade anyone from taking any of the berries until after dinner. Yet when dinner came, half of the berries were gone. Do you recall the incident, Elder??

?Vaguely, Milady.?

Cinderella crossed her arms. ?Hmm, vaguely. Well, let me help you recall it then. Step Mother was quite angry. Do you recall the incident, Step Mother??

Step Mother recalled the incident, and did not like the direction the conversation was turning. ?Yes, Milady.?

?Step Mother, you summoned Younger, Elder, and myself to the kitchen. You demanded to know what happened to the missing berries. Younger and I both denied knowing what had happened.? Cinderella turned back to Elder to make sure she was still paying attention. ?Then, Step Mother asked you, Elder, to tell her what happened. And you did. You told her how you saw me in the kitchen reaching for the berries. You told her how you warned me that it was wrong to take things that do not belong to you, and how as soon as you turned your back, I went right after the strawberries. Now do you remember the incident, Elder??

?Yes, Milady.?

?Step Mother, what did you do when Elder told you that I took the strawberries??

?I asked you whether you took the strawberries, Milady.?

?And when I denied taking them, what did you do, Step Mother??

?I slapped you, Milady, and promised to teach you a lesson for lying and stealing.?

Cinderella popped a cherry into her mouth and thoroughly chewed it, allowing the Court a moment to recover from its collective gasp, and taking a moment to compose herself before continuing with the inquisition. ?Then what actions did you take, Step Mother, to teach me this fine lesson more fully??

?I made you undress and stand naked before me, Milady.?

?Please do not stand on ceremony, Step Mother. Tell us all that transpired that evening.?

?When you stood naked before me, Milady, I lectured you about the evils of lying and stealing. Then I sent you to fetch my hairbrush.?

Cinderella paused, considering her response. She opened the small box on her lap and withdrew a fine ebony hairbrush made of Black Justice wood, a wood so hard that no man-made blade could ever cut it. The wood could only be shaped by elves, and even then only with the wood?s consent for a just and proper reason. Since the time of the Prince?s great-great-grandfather, all gallows in the kingdom were made of Black Justice wood as a form of final appeal. The trap door on a gallows made of Black Justice wood simply will not open to allow the hanging of an innocent man or woman.

Cinderella held the brush high for all to see. ?Do you mean this Black Justice wooden hairbrush that was given to my father for his only daughter in thanks for risking his life to save an elfin child during the Great Flood?”

?Why yes, my hair … I mean your hairbrush, that I was keeping for you, until you reached an age when you could take care of such a treasure properly.?

?And once I retrieved the brush, what did you do with it, Step Mother??

?I turned you over my knee, and gave you several gentle swats with the brush to teach you a lesson. As I recall, Milady, it did not even make you cry out.?

14 reviews for The Mercies of Cinderella

  1. Laurel (verified owner)

    I loved this book! Cindy was a bit harsh however, after the way her step mother & step sisters did to her, they deserved what they got. Cindy was also forgiving and just a the CP was a wonderful bonus.

  2. Laurel (verified owner)

    I loved this book! Cindy was a bit harsh however, after the way her step mother & step sisters did to her, they deserved what they got. Cindy was also forgiving and just a the CP was a wonderful bonus.

  3. CC (verified owner)

    Nice disciplinary twist on a classic.

  4. CC (verified owner)

    Nice disciplinary twist on a classic.

  5. Kzoo

    I loved it! I love the author\\\’s vocabulary. I have a fairly extensive vocabulary myself, and I get so tired of the same old words and descriptions being used and reused and overused. It\\\’s really amazing when I actually have to look a word or two up in the dictionary! This author has a wonderful way with words. We read to be entertained. We read to escape for a time, and fantasize. This book delivers. I will definitely be looking for more by this author.

  6. Kzoo

    I loved it! I love the author’s vocabulary. I have a fairly extensive vocabulary myself, and I get so tired of the same old words and descriptions being used and reused and overused. It’s really amazing when I actually have to look a word or two up in the dictionary! This author has a wonderful way with words. We read to be entertained. We read to escape for a time, and fantasize. This book delivers. I will definitely be looking for more by this author.

  7. Vera Dunn (verified owner)

    I will start out by saying that this is NOT a bad story. However, I am not overly fond of this novella. The idea is very well-thought-out, and the writing style is very lovely to read. I love the idea of a fairy tale – especially such a well-known fairy tale – being a story on this site. But the majority of the scenes with Stepmother were very uncomfortable for me to read, and Cinderella\\\’s personality seemed to flop constantly (for me) from kindly princess to something much crueller. If that was what the author intended, he did a very good job.

  8. Vera Dunn (verified owner)

    I will start out by saying that this is NOT a bad story. However, I am not overly fond of this novella. The idea is very well-thought-out, and the writing style is very lovely to read. I love the idea of a fairy tale – especially such a well-known fairy tale – being a story on this site. But the majority of the scenes with Stepmother were very uncomfortable for me to read, and Cinderella’s personality seemed to flop constantly (for me) from kindly princess to something much crueller. If that was what the author intended, he did a very good job.

  9. Tia (verified owner)

    This was a very interesting take on a classic story. It was a little out of my comfort zones, as some of the punishments were harsher than I lean towards. That being said, I thought it was masterfully written, and enjoyed the idea of rewriting fairy tales. Hope we will see more of this type of thing.

  10. Tia (verified owner)

    This was a very interesting take on a classic story. It was a little out of my comfort zones, as some of the punishments were harsher than I lean towards. That being said, I thought it was masterfully written, and enjoyed the idea of rewriting fairy tales. Hope we will see more of this type of thing.

  11. Gayle (verified owner)

    An interesting and original take on a beloved fairy tale, this story is not a classic romance. It is more of a revenge fantasy where the evil stepmother gets her just due and the stepsisters are punished and finally redeemed. Well done, I look forward to more from this author.

  12. Gayle (verified owner)

    An interesting and original take on a beloved fairy tale, this story is not a classic romance. It is more of a revenge fantasy where the evil stepmother gets her just due and the stepsisters are punished and finally redeemed. Well done, I look forward to more from this author.

  13. Jennifer (verified owner)

    It was lacking

  14. Jennifer (verified owner)

    It was lacking

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