The Errant Bride

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Newly married Sara can’t believe her husband is spanking her like a child, and what’s more she’s not sure she is willing to put up with it. But if not, where does that leave her except broken hearted?

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Sara Harris is newly married and thinks life is great. Well, if not great then at least good enough. All of that changes when her husband, Ethan, tells her that he does not feel the same. The biggest surprise for Sara is what he intends to do about it.

His solution certainly was never covered in premarital counseling! Sara struggles with her feelings after Ethan starts punishing her. She can’t believe she is being spanked like a child, and what’s more she’s not sure she is willing to put up with it. But if not, where does that leave her except broken hearted?

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Chapter 1

The last spanking I?d gotten was on my wedding day. It was from my father, who rarely punished me; I was his only daughter, his little princess. We had been planning my wedding for months, and I?ll admit there were times I?d gotten a bit bratty. My parents ignored it, chalking it up to pre-wedding jitters, and I grew bolder.

When the morning of my big day finally arrived, my stomach was full of fluttering, and I could barely eat. It didn?t help that there were clouds in the sky, which didn?t bode well for my outdoor wedding.

?You should eat, honey,? my mom said as we all sat around the breakfast table.

?But mom, she?s still trying to lose those last five pounds,? my older brother Russ teased.

?Well, as the dress has already been ordered I?d say you?ve left it a bit late, honey,? my father joined in, chuckling.

I glared daggers at the both of them. My weight was a sore subject with me. Even though I was a healthy 135 pounds at 5?4, I always wished I could be thinner. I just couldn?t seem to shed weight like other girls I knew, no matter how much salad I ate or how long I worked out.

?Now, now,? Mom chided as she pushed a piece of toast toward me. ?You two leave Sara alone. It?s her special day, after all.? My mom smiled warmly at me, and I thought I could see the beginnings of tears forming in her eyes. My mom was beautiful; she was slim and athletic, even though she had just hit her fifty-first birthday heads still turned when she walked by. Her hair was long and blonde, her eyes a sparkling emerald green. Her nose was cute and pert, and she had legs that went on for days.

My brother had inherited all of her beauty, which made me feel like he made a better looking girl than I did. I shared my father?s bland brown hair, and coupled with dark brown eyes I wasn?t anything special to look at. Even though my fianc?, Ethan always insisted that was beautiful I had trouble believing him.

I could feel the blush warming my cheeks, and their laughing at me had quickly soured my mood. ?I have to get ready,? I told her as I pushed the toast back across the table and stood up.

?Oh, but you really should eat something, Sara,? my mom insisted.

?I?m not hungry.?

?The wedding doesn?t start for almost five hours, baby. Why don?t we??

I could hear the pleading in her voice, but I didn?t want to give in. ?No, we can?t, Mom.? I ignored her pained expression and flounced out of the room and up the stairs. I even went as far as to slam the door behind me.

I was feeling annoyed with my family, and worried about the fact that I was going to pledge my life to another person, no matter how perfect I believed he was for me. Not to mention the fact that I worried about having rain soaking through my veil as I did so. Another peek out the window revealed that the clouds were starting to look gray and ominous.

I jumped onto my bed and buried my face into my pillow and screamed. Again and again, I let my anger, fear and frustration go into the soft down of my pillow. Without noticing, I had begun to cry.

?Sara Marie.? My mother?s voice was gentle as she shook my shoulder.

?Um,? I groaned as I pulled away from her.

?Honey, you have to wake up now.?

?What?? I asked, yawning. It took a couple of attempts before I could open my eyes. I still felt so tired, and it seemed like there was something weighing my eyelids down. Irritably, I rubbed the sleepy from them.

?Baby, you must have fallen asleep.? She smiled at me, and squeezed my shoulder affectionately. ?We have to get going soon.?

A quick glance at the clock showed me that I had been sleeping for over an hour. Tremors of panic shot through me. ?Mom! How could you let me sleep so late? You know that I have to be at the salon in forty minutes, and I haven?t even had my shower yet!?

?I?m sorry, honey. There?s still plenty of time. I?ll help you, and??

?Thank you, but I don?t need your help. I think I can find the bathroom just fine on my own.?

My father chose that moment to walk in. He seemed to take it all in: my mother?s exasperated, hurt expression, and my defiant one as I lounged on the bed, still in pajamas. I could tell by his face that he?d heard the entire exchange. ?Sara!? His voice was sharp, and even at twenty-two years old a part of me still wanted to run and hide.

?I can?t talk right now,? I huffed, glaring at my mother. ?She let me oversleep and??

?Young lady, I?ve had enough of this!? He barked. ?It is not your mother?s responsibility to watch over you every moment. You have an alarm, and you know how to use it. You need to stop being disrespectful to every member of this family, and I mean now.?

?I need to go shower,? I said stubbornly, trying to hold my ground even though I was shaking on the inside. I had extensive firsthand experience with my father?s lectures, and they always made me feel ridiculously childish. I didn?t need that, today of all days.

?No, I?ll tell you what you need,? he said, as he rolled up the sleeve on his right arm. ?What you need to do is to apologize to everyone, starting with your mother. But since you want to keep misbehaving, I?m going to give you some incentive.? With menace in his eyes he stepped toward me.

I tried to dodge him, but even as I was backing away from him I knew that I was no match for my father?I?d learned that years ago. With little effort he subdued my escape attempt. In no time I found myself facedown over his lap, staring at the pretty blue flowers on my bedspread.

?Carl, I don?t think this is the time??

?She has to learn, Lauren,? my father replied.

?It?s her wedding day. I think this once?? When my mom stopped abruptly and clamped her lips together I knew that he had silenced her with a look, like I had seen him do before on occasion.

When I felt his hands at the waistband of my pajama bottoms I began to squirm. ?Please listen to mom, Daddy. She?s right. Please, I?m sorry. I??

?Hush,? he commanded as he slid my pants down in one fluid motion. ?You had your say this morning, and I have to tell you, I didn?t like it one bit.?

?I?m really sorry??

He cuts me off with a resounding slap to my panties, and whatever excuses I would have made were replaced with a cry of pain. ?I told you to be quiet.? Those last words were emphasized with a few more smacks to my poor bottom.

My bottom was starting to sting, and I was feeling pretty sorry for myself. I was supposed to be getting married in a few hours! How could this be happening to me? This was supposed to be the happiest day of my life, and instead my dad was about to make me cry?and they sure wouldn?t be tears of joy!

?I have had quite enough of this attitude from you, Sara.? The steady stream of slaps to my backside was proof enough that he meant what he was saying. ?Everyone in this house has done everything we can to help with your wedding.?

The sternness in his voice combined with the stinging slaps he was delivering at a steady pace to my backside caused my eyes to fill with tears. My bottom was hot, but I knew better than to say anything.

?Instead of being appreciative,? he continued, ?you have been rude and disrespectful. We don?t have you to ourselves for much longer, so this behavior is going to change now.? With that proclamation, he began to pull my panties down too.

?Daddy!? I cried out, my vow of silence forgotten. ?Please, no. I have learned my lesson, I mean it! I?m sorry, I really am.?

?Not as sorry as you?re about to be,? he replied grimly.

?Please,? I begged as I stretched my hand behind me in a futile attempt to grab my panties and put a stop to this.

?You know better than that,? he growled, and I began to cry out as he delivered smack after smack to my bare thighs. He paused after an even dozen, by which point I was breathing hard as tears streamed down my face. ?Now, you?re a grown woman. I expect you to put your hand back to your side and keep it there. You know how to behave.?

I considered pointing out that if he really thought of me as a grown woman, then he shouldn?t treat me like a child, but I thought better of it. My butt was warm enough already, and likely to become warmer in the near future if I knew my dad.

He didn?t disappoint me. When I put my hand back in front of me he continued spanking my butt, even harder than before. There was no more lecturing, just swat after swat. He gave them ten to a side before he switched to the other cheek. At first I tried to count them, but eventually the pain distracted me and I lost track.

?I?m sorry, Daddy,? I whimpered, but the only answer I received was another ten swats to my left buttock. Am I going to be able to sit down tonight? I wondered. And then, with a jolt of shock I remembered my wedding photos and wondered how I was going to be able to keep my eyes from looking puffy and red.

Before he was finished, even those worries were forgotten. My world shrank to nothing but his powerful, strong hand, and the licks he kept delivering to my bare behind.

?Now,? he cleared his throat, his voice still authoritative. I?m shocked to realize that he?s stopped, and that I have been sobbing over his lap for a good minute while he?s waited for me to calm down. I tried to sit up, but he kept me pinned with his hand firmly on my back. ?I want you to apologize to me, and thank me for spanking you.?

My eyes widened in surprise. He?d never asked me do that before. ?Um?I?m sorry, Daddy.?

?For what??

I furrowed my brow. He knew for what! Why did he have to embarrass me further by making me say it out loud?

?Sara?? He prompted. It didn?t escape my notice that he did not sound patient.

?I?m sorry for upsetting you.? I blurted out the first thing that came to mind, hoping it would be enough to save my bottom further pain.

?And??

I sighed loudly. ?And?I don?t know.?

Those words were apparently the wrong ones. I felt the shift of his weight as he reached over to my nightstand. Before I could groan or offer any sort of protest, the back of my wooden hairbrush was flattening the right cheek, and then quickly flattening the left. Four more of these swift, stingy swats were delivered before he was satisfied.

?Try again.?

?I?m sorry?I?m sorry?I??

?Sara.?

His voice was firm and filled with warning, and I immediately burst into tears. ?I?m sorry, Daddy. I?ve been bratty and stubborn and I haven?t helped Mom around the house and?and you?re paying for my w-wedding. It?s going to be a-am-azing, and it?s all thanks to y-you!? I laid my head down and continued to sob for a few minutes. I felt him gently rubbing my back, and my sobs turned to sniffles. ?I?m sorry. I?ve just been making your life m-miserable!?

?Now, honey. No one is saying that. But yes, I have been working hard, pulling night shifts and working weekends to make sure you have everything you want for this wedding. You have been moody with everyone in this family, and I want you to remember that your actions impact other people. They also have consequences.?

Even though his tone had softened, and I felt like I can relax, I began to think about more than my sore bottom. I started remembering the all-nighters my dad had been working for the last three months, and it?s all been for me. I hadn?t even told him thank you.

My thoughts were interrupted by another six hard swats to my flaming rear. This time I didn?t kick my legs or cry out. I knew I deserved the punishment I?m getting.

?And your mother??

I raised my head to look at her through watery eyes. She?d been leaning on the doorway, watching with a pained expression. In that moment I was hit with an unexpected rush of love for her. I had really taken her for granted in the last few weeks. I?d been demanding, sulky and rude, and yet, it still hurt her to see me in pain, even when I deserved it.

?I?m sorry, Mom. I should be h-helping you around the house more. I should have told you how much?how much all your help m-means to me,? I sobbed.

?Oh, honey?? she made a move toward me, but my father wasn?t through with me yet.

?Did it occur to you?? SLAP! ??that this was the last time your mother would get to have breakfast with you?? SLAP! ??before you got married? Hmm? Well, did it?? The question was punctuated with a couple of well-placed smacks to the back of my thighs.

?No,? I wailed, practically choking on the word. ?No, it didn?t. I?m s-sorry.?

?Ok. Ok, Angel. I think you really are.?

My entire body relaxed as I felt him put down the hairbrush, and I burst into tears all over again. I heaved with sobs again and again. I couldn?t remember the last time I?d been like this, crying like a little girl over my daddy?s lap. At that moment, I remembered that my bottom was bare, and I flushed with embarrassment realizing that he?d seen my sexy lacy panties.

Almost as if he?d read my mind he pulled my panties up over my sore, throbbing behind, followed quickly by my sweat pants. Even though my clothing had been restored, he still didn?t help me up, and I didn?t move to get off his lap. I just continued to cry, feeling all the stress of the past months melt away as he gently shushed me and patted my back.

When I stopped crying, I tried to sit, and my dad helped me up. I winced at the pain I felt when my butt made contact with the bed.

?Luckily, you won?t be doing much sitting,? he said with a grin, managing to read my thoughts again.

?What about dinner, Daddy?? I moaned.

?What dinner?? my mom asked with a laugh. ?You?re not going to get to eat any! You can trust me on that, sweetie.?

?I really am sorry,? I said to them both, smiling shyly. Normally, I had to swallow quite a bit of pride to say those words, but after what I?d just endured, I don?t have any left.

Mom came around and joined us on the bed, being careful not to make the mattress shift when she sat down. She leaned toward me, and soon the three of us are hugging.

?Now, as for your brother,? my father began

?Dad!? I cut him off with a squeal. ?He was being totally mean to me!? There is a warning look in his eyes, so I modified my tone before continuing. ?I don?t like it when he makes fun of my weight. Sir.?

He studied my face carefully before nodding. ?You?re so beautiful, I always forget how sensitive you are. I?ll talk to him.?

?Thank you.?

?Come on, Sara, better get in the shower!? Mom urged. ?We have a wedding to get ready for.?

I bounded off the bed with renewed energy. ?Give me ten minutes. And then?I was thinking we could grab some coffee and a muffin before going to our hair appointments.?

Her smile was immediate and ear-splitting. I didn?t think I?d seen her so happy since the wedding planning began, and I felt another pang as I realizes how thoughtless I?d been.

?That sounds great, honey.?

My mom had known what she was talking about?I didn?t get a chance to sit down that night?and I didn?t really force the issue. Our wedding was a whirlwind, and it couldn?t have gone better.

I blushed when my father saw me in my floor length-wedding gown for the first time. It was a beautiful dress, decorated with intricate lace and seed pearls. Seeing him reminded me of the fact that he?d seen me in just a t-shirt earlier, but if he was having the same thought he didn?t show it. He?d taken my arm in his and even though he didn?t say anything, I could read everything he wanted to say in his eyes. In that moment it felt like our bond was renewed in a way it hadn?t been in years?I truly was Daddy?s little girl, and I knew that would never change.

My new husband, Ethan, seemed to lose his breath when he saw me. When I was beside him and my dad kissed me goodbye, Ethan touched my face gently, trailing a finger along my cheek, seeming in awe of me. ?Beautiful,? he mouthed.

I had tears in my eyes when I whispered, ?I Do,? but they were the good kind this time.

Before I knew it our reception was over. We had said our goodbyes, and ran to the car amid fond farewells and a shower of rose petals. It was at the hotel, as I shyly undressed for my groom that I remembered my sore bottom. Ethan had been horrified when he saw the marks the brush had left.

?I am going to call him first thing in the morning?hell, I?m going to call him right now!? He fumed.

?Please, don?t, baby,? I begged. ?It?s over now and??

?Sara, he hurt you!?

?It does hurt,? I admitted. ?But?I deserved it.?

He eyed me skeptically, but finally nodded. ?Alright. But he better never do that again. You?re mine now.?

I shivered at his words, and he grabbed me in a gentle, protective hug.

?That?s not ever going to happen to you again, Sara,? he murmured, his voice husky in my ear.

I took deep breaths, breathing in the smell of him: pine, and all spice.

?Since you?re um?in pain??

I looked up at him, wondering where he was going with this.

?Well, I just thought, ah?would you rather be on top??

We just started at each for a long moment before both bursting into laughter.

He promised me, I thought bitterly as I came out of memories of happier times. He told me I didn?t have to worry about that stuff anymore. He said he?d never hurt me.

Even as the thoughts occurred to me I was aware that my accusations were?at least a bit?unfair. I pushed that nagging thought away, though, because I didn?t want to be won over by reason. I was determined to stay mad. It was the only thing that would save me from feeling scared, hurt and miserable because my husband had just called to tell me that he was going to spank me when he got home.

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  1. Pooky

    Pooky (verified owner)

    Very sweet love story. Strong hero with determination, what\\\’s not to love? Dinah McLeod takes you through a multitude of emotions from lust to laughter. Of course, you\\\’ll have to feel some regret and shame and the heat of a paddle before the book is over, but then that is what you are looking for, right? Yes Dinah will definitely be one of my favorites.

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  2. KArc

    KArc (verified owner)

    This is a nice story about a couple who start into bad habits shortly after they are married. Ethan decides that domestic discipline is the answer. Sara is horrified and fights him every step of the way, until she sees her marriage ending. I liked Ethan; he is strong and determined but caring and very mindful of Sara\\\’s feelings. Adding Sara\\\’s parents into the story made for some new and interesting scenes that I haven\\\’t seen in another spanking story.

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  3. Cindy

    Cindy (verified owner)

    Really good. Great to see both perspectives.

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  4. jeanped

    jeanped (verified owner)

    A really touching and sweet story about a newly wed couple trying to do the best in the marriage they have committed to… Although Ethan loved his new wife Sara, he felt that the way things were going, in time, their marriage would end up like other marriages, in divorce, so he wanted to introduce DD into their relationship… Sara, like any young woman, was resistant to this kind of relationship… This is a story on how this couple deals with this… I nice read for people into this sort of story…

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  5. jeanped

    jeanped (verified owner)

    A really touching and sweet story about a newly wed couple trying to do the best in the marriage they have committed to… Although Ethan loved his new wife Sara, he felt that the way things were going, in time, their marriage would end up like other marriages, in divorce, so he wanted to introduce DD into their relationship… Sara, like any young woman, was resistant to this kind of relationship… This is a story on how this couple deals with this… I nice read for people into this sort of story…

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  6. Felicity Nichols

    Felicity Nichols (verified owner)

    The Errant Bride crossed a personal line for me. I struggled to finish reading this. Sara is a newlywed who is trying to form into a wife. Stubborn and full of herself she makes many mistakes. She becomes even more bullheaded when her husband, Eithan spanks her for not taking care of the house and other chores.

    I was disappointed in this story because I felt like it was more forced than enjoyed. I didn’t enjoy her father spanking her because she is a grown woman and shouldn’t be bent over her father’s knee. I wouldn’t recommend this story to anyone because of that fact. I do like Dinah Mcleod just not this story by her. The spankings were a turn off because of the forced nature of them.

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  7. Felicity Nichols

    Felicity Nichols (verified owner)

    The Errant Bride crossed a personal line for me. I struggled to finish reading this. Sara is a newlywed who is trying to form into a wife. Stubborn and full of herself she makes many mistakes. She becomes even more bullheaded when her husband, Eithan spanks her for not taking care of the house and other chores.

    I was disappointed in this story because I felt like it was more forced than enjoyed. I didn\\\’t enjoy her father spanking her because she is a grown woman and shouldn\\\’t be bent over her father\\\’s knee. I wouldn\\\’t recommend this story to anyone because of that fact. I do like Dinah Mcleod just not this story by her. The spankings were a turn off because of the forced nature of them.

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  8. Rhonda

    Rhonda (verified owner)

    This was a good story about Domestic Discipline and how a couple struggles with if and how to incorporate DD into their lives and marriage. At the beginning of the story you also learn that Sara had grown up in a DD home, even though she hadn’t really understood the dynamics. I felt the very end of the story eas a little disappointing as it ended with a tease of sorts. I would have liked it better if the author had delivered the spanking and shown not just talked about Sara’s true acceptance of her husband’s place as HOH.

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  9. Rhonda

    Rhonda (verified owner)

    This was a good story about Domestic Discipline and how a couple struggles with if and how to incorporate DD into their lives and marriage. At the beginning of the story you also learn that Sara had grown up in a DD home, even though she hadn\\\’t really understood the dynamics. I felt the very end of the story eas a little disappointing as it ended with a tease of sorts. I would have liked it better if the author had delivered the spanking and shown not just talked about Sara\\\’s true acceptance of her husband\\\’s place as HOH.

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  10. Merna

    Merna (verified owner)

    This story kept me engaged all the way through. I felt more empathy toward Ethan than Sara because he really seemed to be trying to figure out how to make their new marriage work, while Sara just seemed to want to get her own way no matter what, and didn’t always think about how she was affecting her husband. Good story and depictions of the interrelationships between friends and family. Would have liked to actually read about that final spanking though!

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  11. Merna

    Merna (verified owner)

    This story kept me engaged all the way through. I felt more empathy toward Ethan than Sara because he really seemed to be trying to figure out how to make their new marriage work, while Sara just seemed to want to get her own way no matter what, and didn\\\’t always think about how she was affecting her husband. Good story and depictions of the interrelationships between friends and family. Would have liked to actually read about that final spanking though!

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  12. Danicady

    Danicady

    This story was well written and flowed easily. When Sara and Ethan got married she never dreamed she would be spanked by her husband. But guess what? Yep! Although I enjoyed the story, it seemed a little one-sided to me. To me, it was a little bit over the top on the portrayal of her immature behavior that led to the DD. And I like my heroes to be a little less flawed – it is fiction, after all!

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  13. Danicady

    Danicady

    This story was well written and flowed easily. When Sara and Ethan got married she never dreamed she would be spanked by her husband. But guess what? Yep! Although I enjoyed the story, it seemed a little one-sided to me. To me, it was a little bit over the top on the portrayal of her immature behavior that led to the DD. And I like my heroes to be a little less flawed – it is fiction, after all!

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  14. Han van Meegeren

    Han van Meegeren (verified owner)

    Sometimes you discover a gem between the rocks and stones. This gem describes domestic discipline so direct and so pure and so… honest I think is the good word, that you start reading the book and keep on reading it unil its two in the morning and you realize you have finished it. Just like a good movie you know. The End too soon. I had a little trouble getting trough the fist chapter, but then. OMG, then… Ms. Mc Load is one of those writers that make writing seem so easy. She wraps you around her little finger and all you have to do is follow her thoughts. Some nauhty thoughs and quite a few very exiting ones. When you stumbled apon a gem like that you want to find more. But The Errant Bride is just the fist and only one by ms. McLeod. Oh, how I a long for the second. I suggest you join me for keeping a eye out for more of miss Mc. Loads books. You don’t want to find out that she has released her second book and someone else has caught the gem before you.

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  15. Han van Meegeren

    Han van Meegeren (verified owner)

    Sometimes you discover a gem between the rocks and stones. This gem describes domestic discipline so direct and so pure and so… honest I think is the good word, that you start reading the book and keep on reading it unil its two in the morning and you realize you have finished it. Just like a good movie you know. The End too soon. I had a little trouble getting trough the fist chapter, but then. OMG, then… Ms. Mc Load is one of those writers that make writing seem so easy. She wraps you around her little finger and all you have to do is follow her thoughts. Some nauhty thoughs and quite a few very exiting ones. When you stumbled apon a gem like that you want to find more. But The Errant Bride is just the fist and only one by ms. McLeod. Oh, how I a long for the second. I suggest you join me for keeping a eye out for more of miss Mc. Loads books. You don\\\’t want to find out that she has released her second book and someone else has caught the gem before you.

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  16. KArc

    KArc (verified owner)

    This is a nice story about a couple who start into bad habits shortly after they are married. Ethan decides that domestic discipline is the answer. Sara is horrified and fights him every step of the way, until she sees her marriage ending. I liked Ethan; he is strong and determined but caring and very mindful of Sara’s feelings. Adding Sara’s parents into the story made for some new and interesting scenes that I haven’t seen in another spanking story.

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  17. Evelyn

    Evelyn

    Very good stroy about a young couple where the husband decides they are going to have a DD relationship. Definitly showed the ups and downs that come from this decision and the problems that very realistically will arise.

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  18. Pooky

    Pooky (verified owner)

    Very sweet love story. Strong hero with determination, what’s not to love? Dinah McLeod takes you through a multitude of emotions from lust to laughter. Of course, you’ll have to feel some regret and shame and the heat of a paddle before the book is over, but then that is what you are looking for, right? Yes Dinah will definitely be one of my favorites.

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  19. Cole

    Cole

    A wonderfully written truly engaging story! The emotions and responses of domestic discipline were accurately communicated, honest, and real, expressed in an entertaining way. It was a great read and I look forward to more!

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  20. Lauren

    Lauren

    A wonderful story! I will absolutely be looking for more of her work. Highly recommended.

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  21. Lauren

    Lauren

    A wonderful story! I will absolutely be looking for more of her work. Highly recommended.

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  22. anon

    anon

    I felt like I was reading through the working stages of entering and deciding on a DD relationship. The insecurities of both parties were so open I felt I was one of the pair. Good work. I look forward to more.

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  23. anon

    anon

    I felt like I was reading through the working stages of entering and deciding on a DD relationship. The insecurities of both parties were so open I felt I was one of the pair. Good work. I look forward to more.

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  24. Alicia

    Alicia (verified owner)

    Nice story that really shows the fluctuation of emotions a couple face as they enter into a DD relationship. Very realistic with some very funny parts to lighten the mood.

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  25. Alicia

    Alicia (verified owner)

    Nice story that really shows the fluctuation of emotions a couple face as they enter into a DD relationship. Very realistic with some very funny parts to lighten the mood.

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  26. Cole

    Cole

    A wonderfully written truly engaging story! The emotions and responses of domestic discipline were accurately communicated, honest, and real, expressed in an entertaining way. It was a great read and I look forward to more!

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  27. Evelyn

    Evelyn

    Very good stroy about a young couple where the husband decides they are going to have a DD relationship. Definitly showed the ups and downs that come from this decision and the problems that very realistically will arise.

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  28. Arleen

    Arleen (verified owner)

    I couldn\\\’t put this book down. till I finished it. It was very well written and full of insight on the emotions of a couple starting a DD relationship.The author presented the story in a very realistic yet positive fashion. I do think she needed to put in a chapter between the wedding and the first spanking showing how they got there.We needed to know what led up to Edward\\\’s decision to talk to Sara\\\’s father. I went from one to the other thinking I had missed something.I will be looking for more stories by this author!!

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  29. Arleen

    Arleen (verified owner)

    I couldn’t put this book down. till I finished it. It was very well written and full of insight on the emotions of a couple starting a DD relationship.The author presented the story in a very realistic yet positive fashion. I do think she needed to put in a chapter between the wedding and the first spanking showing how they got there.We needed to know what led up to Edward’s decision to talk to Sara’s father. I went from one to the other thinking I had missed something.I will be looking for more stories by this author!!

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  30. Jaycee

    Jaycee

    An interesting story about a young couple beginning a DD relationship. I thought the writing was very well done and the emotions that the characters was going through was very realistic. I did feel, however, that Sara was made out to be the problem in the relationship and I didn\\\’t care for that. Ethan\\\’s attitudes and actions didn\\\’t always come across as caring. He walked out on Sara twice because of his anger – and the first spanking was not at all loving if he spanked her so harshly that she was bruised! I didn\\\’t care for the fact that he didn\\\’t talk to her first or that he went to her father without talking to her. I know this was addressed in the story, but when Ethan felt betrayed because of Sara talking to her friend, I wanted Sara to say Yes, this is exactly how I felt when you went to my father. Inconsistencies like this – Sara not feeling like she could speak her mind bothered me and Ethan dismissing her feelings at times, made it difficult for me to empathize with the characters.

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  31. Jaycee

    Jaycee

    An interesting story about a young couple beginning a DD relationship. I thought the writing was very well done and the emotions that the characters was going through was very realistic. I did feel, however, that Sara was made out to be the problem in the relationship and I didn’t care for that. Ethan’s attitudes and actions didn’t always come across as caring. He walked out on Sara twice because of his anger – and the first spanking was not at all loving if he spanked her so harshly that she was bruised! I didn’t care for the fact that he didn’t talk to her first or that he went to her father without talking to her. I know this was addressed in the story, but when Ethan felt betrayed because of Sara talking to her friend, I wanted Sara to say Yes, this is exactly how I felt when you went to my father. Inconsistencies like this – Sara not feeling like she could speak her mind bothered me and Ethan dismissing her feelings at times, made it difficult for me to empathize with the characters.

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  32. JK

    JK (verified owner)

    This was a really good story! I thought it was a really good example of Domestic Discipline. I found the characters to be very fun and exciting to read about! A very enjoyable read!

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  33. JK

    JK (verified owner)

    This was a really good story! I thought it was a really good example of Domestic Discipline. I found the characters to be very fun and exciting to read about! A very enjoyable read!

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  34. Cindy

    Cindy (verified owner)

    Really good. Great to see both perspectives.

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