The Brides of Barragowan

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The brides of Barragowan spend a great deal of time having their bare bottoms spanked by their loving husbands who teach them two things: to submit and to have respect. But a madman comes – to claim one of the brides as his own.

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The population of the Isle of Barragowan are honest and God-fearing people, who live their lives according to the scriptures. The man is the head of the home. A wife must respect and submit to her husband in everything. That is the creed that they live by. The four MacKechnie brothers are powerful men, in every sense of the word. Their brides come to Barragowan bringing all the baggage of their dysfunctional childhoods with them. These ladies spend a great deal of time having their bare bottoms thoroughly spanked by their loving husbands who are determined to teach them two things: to submit and to have respect. Respect for others but also for themselves. But unknown to them, a madman roams the island with one thought on his mind – to claim one of the brides as his own. Which one will he choose? The bride of fire, the bride of ice, the bride of the earth or the bride of the air?

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The Isle of Barragowan was dominated by the castle, which stood high upon a hill overlooking the cool blue waters of the loch and the foaming waters of the sea beyond. The castle had been owned by the God-fearing MacKechnie family for centuries.

On one side of the loch was a folly, built by the Laird, Jeremiah Hosea MacKechnie, during the 18th Century, to resemble a castle. Folly Castle had stood empty, alone and neglected for many years, until the present owners, tired of living in a cold and dreary castle, had the folly renovated, updated and modernized, to create four comfortable dwellings inhabited by the four MacKechnie brothers, each one occupying a wing of the converted folly.

The old castle with its priceless store of treasures was then handed to the National Trust for tourists from all countries to visit and enjoy at their leisure.

Barragowan was a castle of many moods. On a dull, grey day when the wind screamed its fury around the ancient walls and the rain lashed its coral colored stone, it stood silent and moody, glowering forbiddingly at the village, which lay on the opposite side of the loch.

On a day, which was sunny and warm, the mood of the castle changed and became benevolent and peaceful, smiling serenely upon the loch and the village.

It was on one such day that MacDaell, returning from fishing on the loch, narrowed his eyes as he saw Jack Dawes skulking through the trees. What was the fellow up to? MacDaell didn?t trust him. Not one little bit! But there was no use speaking to Zak MacKechnie about it. MacKechnie would just laugh at him telling him that Jack was a harmless simpleton who wouldn?t hurt a fly. No, MacDaell would have to keep an eye on him himself. And if the fellow was up to no good, well, he would find out about it or his name wasn?t Alastair Angus MacDaell!

Zakeriah Josiah MacKechnie?s name was deceptive. On hearing it, one pictured an elderly gentleman, with ruddy cheeks, long silver hair and eyes that were rheumy with age; an ancient philosopher to whom younger members of the community would turn for advice in times of trouble or uncertainty.

On the contrary, Zakeriah was neither ancient nor particularly philosophical. He did not have ruddy cheeks and silver hair and his eyes were definitely not rheumy. He was a tall, well-built man of twenty-five, with broad shoulders and powerful arms. His handsome features exuded confidence and self-assurance with eyes as blue as a crystal loch, thick jet-black hair and a humorous mouth which could split into a wide smile, revealing strong white teeth. In short, Zakeriah Josiah, in spite of his name, was a catch in any woman?s language and he could have had just about any woman that he wanted, even without his considerable wealth.

The woman that he wanted was Julia Ramsey, daughter of Euan Ramsey, a wealthy and powerful businessman, highly successful and well respected in the business world. Julia, with her flashing green eyes and avalanches of flame red hair, had caught his eye when Zak had been doing business with her father. Rich, spoilt, indulged and yet also strangely vulnerable, she had captured his heart and taken it prisoner.

The lovely Julia both captivated and tantalized him unbearably. Many was the time he had eyed her alluring little bottom, covered as it was by skin tight jeans and had fantasized pleasurably about seeing it naked and helpless, while he first caressed and rubbed its rounded contours and then smacked it long and hard until its creamy whiteness had turned a fiery red. How he would enjoy taming this little tigress! He would never be harsh, of course, that was not the way that Zakeriah MacKechnie worked. But he would be firm and when it came to discipline, unyielding.

In the beginning Julia had led Zak a fine old dance and at times had nearly driven him crazy with her teasing and flirtatious manner. She had blatantly flaunted her sexuality, fluttering her eyes beguilingly at the stable hand, purring kittenishly at the pizza delivery man, gazing coquettishly at the church bishop, leaning seductively towards the bank manager and laughing delightedly when she saw Zak?s mouth set in a hard, disapproving line. Such behavior would be dealt with if and when she ever became his wife!

In time, Julia had agreed to marry him, and how beautiful she had looked on their wedding day in her dazzlingly white wedding dress, which had been embroidered with pearls and crystals. Nothing but the best for the daughter of Euan Ramsey! All her life Julia had been given everything she could ever have wanted; everything except for the one thing that she wanted the most, the love and attention of her father. Euan Ramsay had been far too busy making money to have much time for his motherless little daughter. Consequently, Julia had grown up spoilt and indulged, rich materially beyond the dreams of most young girls, but emotionally neglected and deprived, craving male attention and flirting outrageously in order to get it.

Zak had taken his new bride to an exotic island for their honeymoon; a romantic place designed for newly weds to sample the delights of marriage in peace and seclusion. The plush, luxurious hotels, the tall palm trees and the pristine white beaches with warm temperate water to bathe in, were a honeymooner?s dream!

Zakeriah arrived at the hotel feeling somewhat tired and jaded. He has slept poorly the last few nights before the wedding and the flight had been long and tiring. A short forty winks before he performed his husbandly duties was surely in order? After which he would be refreshed and ready to pleasure his bride to her heart?s content. He lay on the bed and drifted off into a pleasant relaxing sleep while Julia headed off to the little village to see what treasures she could gather from the local shop.

After a happy hour?s shopping, she headed back to the hotel room to find her newly wedded husband fast asleep, his muscular chest bare, his lower half covered by a pair of silk boxer shorts. Half amused and half annoyed, she began by tickling his bare feet. With a grunt, Zak pulled his feet up and continued to sleep, snoring gently with his mouth open. Julia was tempted to pop something into his mouth but then thought better of it. Zak had mentioned something about spankings when they were married. He was joking, of course! But looking at the size of his hands, she decided that it wasn?t worth the risk. Bored, she looked around the room and her eye fell on the dream catcher she had bought that morning. Plucking one of the feathers, she began to gently tickle his face. Mumbling something that sounded like Mpppffffmmmrrrmm, Zak turned on his side and pulled the pillow over his face. After a few seconds, his deep even breathing resumed which told her that he was still fast asleep.

Julia did not like to be ignored. She wanted her husband?s attention and she wanted it now! She wanted him to make love to her, to claim her, to become one with her. She stripped off all her clothing and laid stark naked next to him, her bare breasts against his back. Gently she began to nibble his ear. He covered his ear with his hand and continued to sleep. Nothing she could do would rouse him. Frustrated she walked through to the sitting room area of their hotel suite. It had large windows with magnificent views of the ocean.

Julia stood looking out of the window and noticed a young man walking by on the pavement below. She giggled as he glanced up and registered shocked surprise at seeing a stark naked woman framed in the window. She waved to him and he waved back, deciding to sit on a nearby bench and see what this delightfully naked nymph would do next. Julia turned her back and wiggled her bare bottom at him, glancing seductively over her shoulder. Within minutes a crowd of men, who couldn?t believe their luck, had gathered, delighted by the unexpected show.

Julia was having so much fun, that she failed to notice the knock at the door. It seemed that the hotel manager, noticing the commotion outside, had gone to investigate. What he saw had him marching hastily back into the hotel and up the stairs to ask that Madame please desist from such behavior.

A sleepy Zak, eventually roused by the persistent knocking on the door, was informed that there was a naked woman whose antics from this very suite were causing mayhem in the street below and would Monsieur please take care of the matter? Monsieur assured him that indeed he would take care of it without delay.

So it was that Julia was confronted by her a grim-faced husband, wearing only his boxer shorts, who was clearly not impressed. ?Just WHAT do you think you are doing?? he demanded.

She pouted her lips seductively at him, continuing to wiggle her very sexy bottom much to the delight of the bunch of gawking voyeurs on the street below, who cheered and clapped. She waved to them laughing merrily as she was pulled away from the window by her outraged husband.

?You need to be taught a lesson, young lady,? he muttered. ?And the time is right now!?

Before she knew what was happening, he had sat on the bed and pulled her across his lap, her naked bottom perfectly positioned to be spanked. She wriggled and fought like a wild cat, but it was no use. He had her in a vice like grip that she could not escape.

He waited until her struggles subsided and then rested his hand on her rounded bottom. Gently he began to rub the smooth soft skin and as he rubbed he spoke calmly, quietly. ?Julia, do you remember a little discussion we had before we got married?? he asked still rubbing her soft bottom gently.

?What discussion?? she asked, trying to turn round and look at him. It was difficult to have a sensible conversation lying with her bare bottom fully exposed and totally at the mercy of her new husband.

Using his other hand he held her firmly in the small of her back, all the time rubbing, caressing, stroking. ?The little talk we had about your flirting and flaunting yourself before other men. Do you remember now??

The gentle rubbing continued. There was something very arousing about lying across one?s husband?s lap and having one?s bare bottom rubbed. She agreed that she did remember something like that. Not all the details, of course, but yes, she did have a vague memory?

?What did I say I would do if you behaved like that after we were married??

?Well, um, I don?t remember,? she said slightly alarmed now. ?What did you say you would do??

?I said that I would spank you, Julia. Don?t tell me you?ve forgotten that already!?

Now she was really alarmed and began to struggle again. ?You can?t be serious!? she said fighting to free herself from his grip of iron.

?Oh, but I am serious,? he assured her. ?In fact I have never been more serious in my life!?

?You can?t do that!? she gasped still struggling valiantly to get free. ?I?ll tell my father. He?ll kill you if you lay one finger on me!?

He laughed. ?You no longer live under your father?s rules, Julia. You live under mine. And my rule is that that kind of behavior will earn you a good spanking. Now lie still or it will be worse.?

?I will not lie still,? she screamed. ?If you think I am going to just lie here and let you spank me, you must be insane!?

He had stopped rubbing now but his hand still rested on her bottom. ?Let me tell you how this is going to work,? he said. ?Naughty girls get their bottoms smacked. When you stop fighting and you lie still, your bottom is going to be smacked. I am going to start timing you. Every minute that you struggle and fight, will be an extra minute that you are spanked. If you fight for two minutes, you bottom will be smacked for an extra two minutes and so it will go on. Do you get the picture??

She lay still now, unable to believe this was happening.

?Are you ready for your spanking?? he asked, his large hand still covering her bottom.

She didn?t answer.

?Julia! Are you ready for your spanking??

Something in his tone made her realize it was useless to resist and foolish not to answer. ?Yes,? she muttered sulkily.

16 reviews for The Brides of Barragowan

  1. Miss contrite (verified owner)

    I loved this book about 4 very different brides and their husbands who are brothers and the spankings they recieve. I would like to see a follow on with the brides all getting into mischief together

  2. Miss contrite (verified owner)

    I loved this book about 4 very different brides and their husbands who are brothers and the spankings they recieve. I would like to see a follow on with the brides all getting into mischief together

  3. KArc (verified owner)

    I was disappointed that this was more like four separate stories that came together at the end than one longer story. The four stories were good but much to short for my taste.

  4. KArc (verified owner)

    I was disappointed that this was more like four separate stories that came together at the end than one longer story. The four stories were good but much to short for my taste.

  5. anon

    No story but short synopsis of four couples. I enjoyed the stories, but they were stories of people I didn\\\’t know. The stories, without a plot, were like examples of why to spank. I would have preferred a more involved story of each couple even if it meant four separate books. I\\\’d like to get to know these people as they did appeal to me.

  6. anon

    No story but short synopsis of four couples. I enjoyed the stories, but they were stories of people I didn’t know. The stories, without a plot, were like examples of why to spank. I would have preferred a more involved story of each couple even if it meant four separate books. I’d like to get to know these people as they did appeal to me.

  7. TG (verified owner)

    This was a fun and a little different type of story. Very cute and enjoyable.

  8. TG (verified owner)

    This was a fun and a little different type of story. Very cute and enjoyable.

  9. Cassie

    A bit strange. Much of the action was written in broad outline. It summarized a story rather than telling it in any detail. Also, the Scots dialogue was distracting and rather eyeroll-inducing (example: “Ye canna wear-r-r those torn jeans and that tatty shairt!”). Aside from the writing, I had a couple other issues. One, the villain is odd, and his actions/motivations make no sense. Two, I just don’t care for books like this where all the men are wise and well-adjusted and always use good judgment while all the women have issues that cause them to behave irrationally and thus need correction.

  10. Cassie

    A bit strange. Much of the action was written in broad outline. It summarized a story rather than telling it in any detail. Also, the Scots dialogue was distracting and rather eyeroll-inducing (example: ???Ye canna wear-r-r those torn jeans and that tatty shairt!??). Aside from the writing, I had a couple other issues. One, the villain is odd, and his actions/motivations make no sense. Two, I just don??t care for books like this where all the men are wise and well-adjusted and always use good judgment while all the women have issues that cause them to behave irrationally and thus need correction.

  11. Karen

    I really like how we got to know each bride individually and then the story focus switches to bringing everything in together.

  12. Karen

    I really like how we got to know each bride individually and then the story focus switches to bringing everything in together.

  13. Rhonda (verified owner)

    I didnt feel the story had much plot or character development. I usually enjoy books that try to set tge stsge with regional dialect but the Scots dialogue just didn\\\’t work for me.

  14. Rhonda (verified owner)

    I didnt feel the story had much plot or character development. I usually enjoy books that try to set tge stsge with regional dialect but the Scots dialogue just didn’t work for me.

  15. Connie (verified owner)

    A series of short stories about the brothers MacKechnie and the women they fall in love with. They all believe in domestic discipline as do all the families that live on this small island. These are their stories and one story where they all have to pull together for the common good. Enjoyed all the brothers and their vastly different wives.

  16. Connie (verified owner)

    A series of short stories about the brothers MacKechnie and the women they fall in love with. They all believe in domestic discipline as do all the families that live on this small island. These are their stories and one story where they all have to pull together for the common good. Enjoyed all the brothers and their vastly different wives.

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