Personal Shopper

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Laura McCaffrey is teetering on the edge. Her venture as a personal shopper is "almost" taking off, and when she gets a brand new client - a very wealthy man with the ability to get her the contacts she needs - things are looking very good. And Laura needs a break, with her ex-husband refusing to pay child support, and bills and tuition due.

Then Laura makes a decision which at first looks just a bit irresponsible, but quickly escalates into a catastrophe. And she’s forced to confess what she’s done to her newest client, who, she’s certain, will surely fire her. And that’s if she’s lucky.

But Max Greenway is a "different" sort of man, and he sees in Laura an incredible combination of toughness and vulnerability. He thinks he knows how to deal with both of those sides, and when he suggests to Laura a "different" sort of way to handle Laura’s carelessness, she’s intrigued in spite of herself.

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48 reviews for Personal Shopper

  1. KB (verified owner)

    I thought the story was too short. It didn\\\’t have good character development. And it was unrealistic that she would get spanked, have her ex-husband try to steal her son and then introduce her new boyfriend to the kid in one day. And he spanked her and rewarded her for stealing.

  2. KB (verified owner)

    I thought the story was too short. It didn’t have good character development. And it was unrealistic that she would get spanked, have her ex-husband try to steal her son and then introduce her new boyfriend to the kid in one day. And he spanked her and rewarded her for stealing.

  3. Julie H. (verified owner)

    I liked this story. I was short, but I thought the plot came together well and I liked the main characters. Thanks ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Julie H. (verified owner)

    I liked this story. I was short, but I thought the plot came together well and I liked the main characters. Thanks ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. KArc

    I really liked this story. I loved the honesty of both characters. My one complaint is that I found the story to be too short

  6. KArc

    I really liked this story. I loved the honesty of both characters. My one complaint is that I found the story to be too short

  7. SH (verified owner)

    I liked the premise of this story but felt it could have been much longer. It did not live up to it\\\’s potential which made this story seemed rushed and unrealistic.

  8. SH (verified owner)

    I liked the premise of this story but felt it could have been much longer. It did not live up to it’s potential which made this story seemed rushed and unrealistic.

  9. Lavata (verified owner)

    I enjoyed the story line but just when the story started it was over. I was left wanting more.

  10. Lavata (verified owner)

    I enjoyed the story line but just when the story started it was over. I was left wanting more.

  11. mlb (verified owner)

    Very good story. I loved the plot and the characters. There is definately enough detail provided to get a full picture. I would have liked a further look at the relationship of the main characters.

  12. mlb (verified owner)

    Very good story. I loved the plot and the characters. There is definately enough detail provided to get a full picture. I would have liked a further look at the relationship of the main characters.

  13. Su Lin (verified owner)

    In spite of the many typos, this story captured me. The main characters, Max and Laura, were very well thought out, and the end of the book marks only the beginning of their true DD relationship. The emotional responses were very well written, and the single spanking scene was a good first spanking. As it stands, for a piece of erotica, this book teases the reader– all the elements are there, and just as the DD relationship begins, the book ends. As a piece of fiction, it is a story unto itself. Sequel?

  14. Su Lin (verified owner)

    In spite of the many typos, this story captured me. The main characters, Max and Laura, were very well thought out, and the end of the book marks only the beginning of their true DD relationship. The emotional responses were very well written, and the single spanking scene was a good first spanking. As it stands, for a piece of erotica, this book teases the reader– all the elements are there, and just as the DD relationship begins, the book ends. As a piece of fiction, it is a story unto itself. Sequel?

  15. Sarah (verified owner)

    Too short…. I really liked it though. Max and Laura seem like the perfect fit for one another. This story left me waiting more.

  16. Sarah (verified owner)

    Too short…. I really liked it though. Max and Laura seem like the perfect fit for one another. This story left me waiting more.

  17. Alicia

    This was a very short story but very romantic one. Laura is a personal shopper and is working for Max when she finds out her ex hasn\\\’t paid for their sons school tuition. Since she is broke she steals the money from Max but feels so guilty she confesses right away. MAx is upset but sees something he likes in her so he gives her a choice he call the authorities or she can submit to a spanking. Needless to say she takes the spanking and her life changes completely after that.

  18. Alicia

    This was a very short story but very romantic one. Laura is a personal shopper and is working for Max when she finds out her ex hasn’t paid for their sons school tuition. Since she is broke she steals the money from Max but feels so guilty she confesses right away. MAx is upset but sees something he likes in her so he gives her a choice he call the authorities or she can submit to a spanking. Needless to say she takes the spanking and her life changes completely after that.

  19. Marybeth (verified owner)

    This is a short story. Laura is a personal shopper who is down on her luck. Max is a businessman who hires her to do his shopping for Christmas. He gives her cash to start out the shopping, but Laura uses the money to pay for her son\\\’s tuition so he doesn\\\’t get kicked out. She promptly tells Max what she did and the rest of the story is about how he tries to find out if she is submissive and wanting a relationship with him. It was a little strange that he was having her buy a paddle before he even had a relationship with her. But, not too bad. Very short though.

  20. Marybeth (verified owner)

    This is a short story. Laura is a personal shopper who is down on her luck. Max is a businessman who hires her to do his shopping for Christmas. He gives her cash to start out the shopping, but Laura uses the money to pay for her son’s tuition so he doesn’t get kicked out. She promptly tells Max what she did and the rest of the story is about how he tries to find out if she is submissive and wanting a relationship with him. It was a little strange that he was having her buy a paddle before he even had a relationship with her. But, not too bad. Very short though.

  21. Marion (verified owner)

    Enjoyed greatly this lovely story. From beginning to end it was fast paced and full of great moments. This book is a terrific read for anyone.

  22. Marion (verified owner)

    Enjoyed greatly this lovely story. From beginning to end it was fast paced and full of great moments. This book is a terrific read for anyone.

  23. anon (verified owner)

    I feel like I\\\’ve been pushed off a cliff! I was completely involved in this story when — splat–it ended. I was stunned. The story was not a new concept. It\\\’s been done many times, but this one was done well. I wanted the complete story not just the introduction. Yes, it\\\’s a good read, but I wanted more.

  24. anon (verified owner)

    I feel like I’ve been pushed off a cliff! I was completely involved in this story when — splat–it ended. I was stunned. The story was not a new concept. It’s been done many times, but this one was done well. I wanted the complete story not just the introduction. Yes, it’s a good read, but I wanted more.

  25. Sassy (verified owner)

    This was a short romantic story. I was a little put off by the heroine\\\’s behavior, but she was very much put in line. Possibly unrealistic, but a good read either way.

  26. Sassy (verified owner)

    This was a short romantic story. I was a little put off by the heroine’s behavior, but she was very much put in line. Possibly unrealistic, but a good read either way.

  27. kitty-ranma (verified owner)

    i loved this want more. our hero was very fair with his punishment. he wasn\\\’t abusive at all beautifully done. short.

  28. kitty-ranma (verified owner)

    i loved this want more. our hero was very fair with his punishment. he wasn’t abusive at all beautifully done. short.

  29. Evelyn

    Very nice but very short story about a woman who does something completely out of character for her to save her son from being kicked out of school. She owns up to her mistake and takes her punishment that is due very well.

  30. Evelyn

    Very nice but very short story about a woman who does something completely out of character for her to save her son from being kicked out of school. She owns up to her mistake and takes her punishment that is due very well.

  31. Crystal (verified owner)

    Cute fun read. Wasn\\\’t really what I had expected.

  32. Crystal (verified owner)

    Cute fun read. Wasn’t really what I had expected.

  33. Arleen (verified owner)

    I loved this book. It was very well written. The story held my interest. I was only sorry it ended instead of continuing on and sharing a bit of Laura and Max\\\’s life together. This book is definitely worth reading.

  34. Arleen (verified owner)

    I loved this book. It was very well written. The story held my interest. I was only sorry it ended instead of continuing on and sharing a bit of Laura and Max’s life together. This book is definitely worth reading.

  35. JC (verified owner)

    This is a nice short story. Laura is a single mom trying to pay the bills. She makes a mistake and Max helps her deal with it. I loved the characters but would like to know more about them.

  36. JC (verified owner)

    This is a nice short story. Laura is a single mom trying to pay the bills. She makes a mistake and Max helps her deal with it. I loved the characters but would like to know more about them.

  37. Andrea (verified owner)

    I\\\’ve enjoyed reading this book a lot. I liked the story and the characters of Max and Laura. They complemented each other well and I thought they deserved to be happy together. Laura is a single mom who found it very hard to rebuild her life after her divorce. Her business is successful but she still struggles financially because her husband doesn\\\’t help at all with their child and she\\\’s a bit of a pushover. Max is the opposite of Laura. He\\\’s definitely not a pushover and he\\\’s been looking for the perfect woman for him for a lot of time and he finds her in Laura.

  38. Andrea (verified owner)

    I’ve enjoyed reading this book a lot. I liked the story and the characters of Max and Laura. They complemented each other well and I thought they deserved to be happy together. Laura is a single mom who found it very hard to rebuild her life after her divorce. Her business is successful but she still struggles financially because her husband doesn’t help at all with their child and she’s a bit of a pushover. Max is the opposite of Laura. He’s definitely not a pushover and he’s been looking for the perfect woman for him for a lot of time and he finds her in Laura.

  39. K (verified owner)

    Cute but short and a little predictable.

  40. K (verified owner)

    Cute but short and a little predictable.

  41. Young Lady

    I thought this story was ADORABLE!! I\\\’d read a full length book about the characters! I loved how sweet and honest the heroine was, and how the man really gave her a chance and cherished her rather than just being a brute. It was lovely!

  42. Young Lady

    I thought this story was ADORABLE!! I’d read a full length book about the characters! I loved how sweet and honest the heroine was, and how the man really gave her a chance and cherished her rather than just being a brute. It was lovely!

  43. Jennifer (verified owner)

    wish it was longer

  44. Jennifer (verified owner)

    wish it was longer

  45. Deena (verified owner)

    Wish it was longer

  46. Deena (verified owner)

    Wish it was longer

  47. Cindy (verified owner)

    Sweet and interesting and realistic.

  48. Cindy (verified owner)

    Sweet and interesting and realistic.

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