Old-Fashioned Family

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Melissa Mitchell is going to be alone at the holidays, at least until her new friend Terri Coleman takes pity and invites her to the family home in rural North Carolina for an old-fashioned family holiday. It sounds wonderful, and to top it all off, Terri has a single and very eligible brother, Richmond police detective Joe Coleman.

Then Terri drops her bombshell: the Coleman family is old-fashioned in more ways that one, and Terri has recently fallen afoul of her brother, who took care of the situation in the time-honored way. Could it happen again? There are issues unresolved between Terri and her brother, and Terri feels she needs to warn Melissa that no-nonsense Joe just might resort to spanking if he thought the situation warranted it. And that’s not all: Terri’s other brother and his wife are in a domestic discipline relationship, and are very open about it.

As irritated as Melissa is that Terri has dragged her into family drama, Melissa also has a secret of her own: she’s been fascinated with tales of old-fashioned over-the-knee-discipline forever, and the idea that that could occur in real life seems too much to believe. At first, the holiday celebration couldn’t be better. Melissa and Joe feel an instant attraction, fueled by the fact that Joe quickly figures out that Melissa’s interest in what had recently happened to Terri goes beyond mere concern for her friend.

But Melissa has another secret, a dark terrifying reality from her past. Just when she feels the most safe, through an innocent mistake, the secret is revealed endangering everyone in the family. And Joe will do anything to protect his family. . .

Publisher’s note: “An Old-Fashioned Family” is an erotic romantic adventure featuring the spanking of adult women. It is intended for adults only.

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Sample Chapter

Friday Afternoon

“So, it’s down to the wire.”  Melissa Mitchell looked up to see her co-worker’s eager face poking around the corner of her cubicle.  “C’mon, Melissa, what do you say?”

Melissa sighed.  Weeks ago, Terri Coleman had invited Melissa to spend Christmas with her family at her parents’ home outside of Asheville, North Carolina, but Melissa had not yet given Terri an answer.  Since this was the last day before the Christmas break began, and Christmas was in five days, Melissa knew she owed Terri a response.  Melissa was tempted.  More than tempted.

St. Therese Elementary School, where Melissa worked as a secretary, was closed for two full weeks at the holiday, and if Melissa didn’t go with Terri, her choices were limited.  She could be by herself in an apartment in a city where the few friends she’d made – like Terri – would be either out of town or with their families.  Or she could go to a hotel somewhere and… What?  If she went some place warm, she guessed, she could work on her suntan, but that didn’t seem much like the holidays.  And, when it came right down to it, she’d still be alone.  At Christmas.  Which would give her way, way too much time to be pissed off about why she was alone in the first place.  Hell yes, she was tempted.

Melissa looked at Terri.  “Are you sure?  I mean, Christmas is the number one family time of the year.  You’re really sure your family’s going to want a complete stranger around?”

“How many times do I have to tell you?  Of course you’re welcome.  And honestly, I want you to come.  I need you to come.  You can run interference for me.”

Melissa turned fully around, her chair squeaking in protest.  “Interference?  You haven’t mentioned that before.”

Terri yanked a chair away from the desk next to Melissa’s, which was currently unoccupied, and pushed it up to Melissa’s desk.  “I’m joking.”  She paused.  “Mostly.” She cleared her throat.  “Well, kind of.”  Another pause for reflection.  “OK, OK, so I’m not joking.”  At Melissa’s exasperated expression, she went on, not quite meeting Melissa’s eye.  “Look, I’m the little sister.  With three big brothers.  Who have too much time on their hands at Christmas to try to micromanage little sister’s life.  With you there, it’ll be a lot easier to get away from it.  We can go shopping, take a walk.  Go to a movie or two.”

Melissa’s eyes narrowed.  Terri had talked about her big brothers before, and Melissa knew she was crazy about them.  Still, Melissa had the distinct impression that there was more to the story, but when Terri did not elaborate, Melissa let it drop.  “The truth comes out,” she teased her friend.  “Ulterior motives.”

Terri shrugged, unapologetic.  “So will you do it?

Melissa hesitated one more moment, then nodded her head.  Really, what were her choices?  If she didn’t say yes to this, her Christmas would be awful.  She really liked Terri; her family was probably just fine.  “OK.”

“Yay!”  Terri’s smile was infectious.  “We’re going to have so much fun.  My mom’s cooking is the best, though you’ll gain fifty pounds, I swear it.  My brother Don and his wife Joannie have three of the cutest kids; it’s so much fun to watch them open their presents.  And my brother Carl and his wife?  Well, they don’t have any kids, but Carl’s wife Marie is tons of fun.  I cannot wait!”

“What about your third brother?”  Melissa noticed that Terri had not mentioned him in her description of all the holiday joy.  “Or is he not going to be there?”

“Oh, Joe?  Yeah he’s going to be there.  He’s actually the middle brother. Carl is the youngest.”

“Is he married?”  Melissa asked.

“No,” Terri laughed, though Melissa thought she sensed a bit of sourness in her demeanor.  “I don’t think any woman would put up with him.”

“Why, what’s wrong with him?”

Terri screwed up her face.  “There’s nothing wrong with him, exactly.  He’s just a stick-in-the-mud.  Old-fashioned.  He’s a cop, a detective, actually, in Richmond, Virginia.  I guess that’s a tough town, and I know he’s seen a lot, but man, if he can’t find something real to worry about, he just makes something else right up.  He’s like an old granny.  ‘Do you lock your doors?’  ‘Do you have a security system?’  ‘Do you wear your seatbelt?’  ‘Are your friends responsible?’“ she mimicked. “Non-effing-stop.”  She looked at Melissa.  “But don’t worry. He won’t bother you.  Much.  Just make sure you wear your seatbelt,” she laughed.

“I’ll do that.”

Out in the hall, a bell jangled loudly.  Terri rolled her eyes.  “Back to the salt mines.  Last afternoon before break.  Yup.  Christmas party for twenty-two third graders.  Ho ho ho.”

Melissa watched her friend’s back as she left the school’s central office, then turned back to finish the report she was typing for Sister Mary Joan, the principal and St. Therese’s last remaining nun.  She’d gone into the convent in 1962 before “all the changes,” (which was all she’d ever say about Vatican II) and she didn’t care who knew it.  Sister Mary Joan was, to put it mildly, an old-school nun, and no one slacked around her, even on the last day before Christmas break.

As much as Melissa tried to work efficiently, she couldn’t keep her mind off of what she had just committed to do.  She knew she was waffling again but she couldn’t help it.  She liked Terri well enough, but they’d only known each other for four months, just since the beginning of the school year.  It wouldn’t be like having Christmas dinner with some new folks, where you could bail after the peach pie if things were awful.  It was a five-hour drive from Charleston, SC to where Terri’s parents lived near Asheville NC, and Terri said she’d planned on staying at least a week.  Since they’d drive together, Melissa knew she’d be stuck if things weren’t great.

Terri was great fun to be with, and Melissa winced as she thought about a couple of Saturday nights when the two of them had gone out and had perhaps too much fun.  However, just because Terri was enjoyable to spend time with, did not mean that her family would also be fine. What if the Coleman family’s idea of a great night of entertainment was to sit around and sing show tunes together?  Yuck.

The office door opened behind her, and Melissa, sure it was Sister Mary Joan, increased her typing speed.

“Miss Mitchell!  What are you doing in here?”  Melissa turned… and just about dropped her teeth.  It wasn’t Sister at all, but Father Pat in a Santa suit.  Since Father Pat weighed about 92 pounds soaking wet, the effect was a bit off, but it was Santa, nevertheless.  “Come with me to the classroom parties, Melissa.  Mrs. Wilcox, Harry’s mom?  Fourth grader?  She just brought in an entire tray of her famous almond cookies.”

“But Sister Mary Joan…

“… Is already going from classroom to classroom.  You’re off the hook.”

Melissa thought for a moment.  “So is she dressed like an elf?

“Uh, no.”  Father Pat chuckled.  “That would be something to see.  Maybe next year.” He winked at Melissa.  “We can always hope, right?  Anyway, come on.  Work’s over.  You want to be my elf?”  At her inquiring look, he explained, ”I hand out presents in each classroom.  I could use an elf.”

Melissa gamely shut down her computer and followed the old priest.  Sister Mary Joan’s report would just have to wait until after Christmas break.  And as she went from classroom to classroom, helping Father Pat give a small wrapped packet of candy and fruit to each child, the misgivings about the trip she’d committed to take with Terri slipped out of her mind.

 

 

Friday Night

 

Melissa sat on her apartment’s small balcony, wrapped in a fuzzy shawl, gazing at the lights of Charleston, South Carolina spread before her.  She needed to pack, but since Terri didn’t want to leave until midday tomorrow, there would be plenty of time to do it in the morning.

She guessed she’d done the right thing in agreeing to go to the Coleman family’s Christmas.  Ironically, though, at the last minute, she’d gotten another invitation.  Sister Mary Joan had family in Charleston, and she’d invited Melissa to join them for Christmas dinner as well.  Father Pat had seconded the invitation, claiming that nothing beat the spread that Sister’s niece would put on the table.  Melissa had gracefully declined, telling Sister Mary Joan about her plans to join Terri’s family.

The elderly nun had patted Melissa’s hand.  “That’s good.  I’m glad you’re getting away.”  Then, unexpectedly, she’d given Melissa a small hug.  “You’ve done a good job here with us Melissa.  We’re glad to have you.  I know this has been hard for you.”

Melissa’s eyes had filled with tears at the unexpected compliment from a woman who reminded one of a drill sergeant more than anything else.  “Thank you, Sister,” she’d said.

Melissa took a sip of her wine, thinking about Sister’s comment that it had been hard for her.  She wondered just how much Sister Mary Joan knew.  Melissa was in the Witness Protection Program, and while no one… no one… was supposed to know that, it seemed like Sister Mary Joan knew, or at least suspected, something.  She must have been given some information by the agent who placed Melissa in this job; otherwise, Melissa guessed, she would never have been allowed to work around children without a background check. Plus, part of Melissa’s cover story was that Sister Mary Joan was Melissa’s aunt.  She must have been told that.

Unlike many – perhaps even the majority – of people in the Witness Protection Program (or WITSEC as it was officially known), Melissa was not a criminal.  Most protected witnesses were giving testimony in exchange for not being prosecuted themselves, but Melissa was in the minority.  About six months previously, completely by chance, she’d been in a really bad place at a very bad time, and she’d witnessed a murder.  She still didn’t know all the details about who was murdered or why.  All she knew was that, three days later, there was an attempt on her life, which only through sheer coincidence and a massive piece of random luck, failed.  The co-worker who had borrowed her car had not been so lucky.

A tip had come in from a low-level informant in the Gambino crime family.  There was currently a vicious turf war going on between the old-guard Italian mafia families and the new, ultra-violent Albanian families.  The chatter was that the top person in the Duraj group had been personally present at a high level hit, the murder of a top family member who had sold out and had been informing for the Gambinos… and the hit had been witnessed.  The FBI, who’d been trying to infiltrate the Duraj family for years – unsuccessfully – put two and two together.  Melissa, who was still reeling from witnessing a murder in the first place and then having an explosion almost take off the front of her office, was still being questioned by the police regarding the explosion when she was picked up by federal marshals.

Under heavy guard, Melissa had been taken in the middle of the night to her apartment, where no fewer than four U.S. Marshals helped her pack her things, getting her in and out in under an hour.  She was taken to a safe house somewhere in the Smoky Mountains.  For four weeks she pored over photos and video, trying desperately to identify the man she saw.  She never could.

She worked with several criminal artists, and although she could see the man as clear as day in her own head, she proved a disastrous failure at communicating this to the artist.  The astonishingly life-like sketches that one saw in the movies and on TV did not happen in real life, or at least in Melissa’s real life.

Finally, her handlers conceded defeat.  She had looked at thousands of photos of criminals and businessman, of senators and diplomats, and had come up blank.  They couldn’t keep her isolated in a cabin forever, and they couldn’t let her go back to her old life.  So one sunny morning in August, she was handed a list of cities.  She’d never been to any of them for more than a few days’ visit in her life.  She knew no one in any of them.  Pick one, the agent in charge had said.

“Can I visit first?” she’d asked.

“No,” the agent had answered, seeming surprised at the question.  But, he’d allowed, she could look at pictures on the Internet for a few minutes if she wanted.

Numb, Melissa did, and made a decision.  Charleston, South Carolina.  She’d driven through a couple times as a child and remembered it being nice.  Considering the other two options were Binghamton, New York and Kenosha, Wisconsin, well, in the end it hadn’t really been a “choice” at all.  At least South Carolina was warm and had an ocean.

As she was being driven to her new home, the agent explained how it would be.  She’d have a job, a new modest car, a furnished apartment and a new identity.  She wouldn’t have to change her first name; in the past they had found people had too many problems with that.  So she would still be Melissa, but beyond that nothing would be the same.  She’d have income from a job and a stipend from WITSEC; she would not have financial problems.  She’d have an ID, a valid driver’s license, and it would be legal; she could drive.

She’d asked about a passport, but been told no, at least for now, that would not be possible.  Whether it was because they were tricky to obtain even for WITSEC or whether it was because they didn’t want their witnesses disappearing into the mountains of Brazil, Melissa did not know.  Hopefully, he reassured her, things would resolve in a few months… a year at most.  If they did not, after that point, if Melissa desired to travel overseas, they would “make arrangements.”  She didn’t even ask what that meant.

She’d have a contact in WITSEC, and a phone number she could call 24 hours in any emergency.  She’d be provided with an instant alert device as well (like the alert devices advertised on TV for the elderly) and she was encouraged to wear it all the time, though it was not required.  Through a contact, she could exchange letters and gifts with her family, maybe even do a videoconference a few times a year.

She had to be careful… constantly.  Not only to protect herself, but to protect her family.  It was not impossible, the agent warned Melissa, that whomever was trying to kill her would be watching her family, her mother and her stepfather, even her young half-siblings.  Hacking into their computers.  Stealing their mail.  If anyone even suspected that they might know where she was, their lives wouldn’t be worth two cents.  But the converse was also true.  If her family did not know where she was, the last thing anyone would want to do was act against her family, as that would only serve to drive her deeper underground.  The best way to keep them safe was for her to be absolutely scrupulous about never attempting to contact them.

Her handler told her that virtually every time a witness’s cover was pierced, it happened because the witness himself thought he could outsmart the system and tried to “secretly” contact family or friends.  Melissa, in reality, didn’t need much encouragement.  Not even two months before, she’d witnessed a murder and then three days later, a co-worker had been blown to bits in Melissa’s car.  Melissa hardly needed anyone to frighten her into compliance.  These people would kill.  They would kill her.  Period.

She shouldn’t travel much, he warned her.  Facial recognition software, the agent explained matter-of-factly, was getting better and better and cameras were ubiquitous.  The top criminal cartels had informants and moles everywhere; even something as innocent as going through a tollbooth, while not exactly forbidden, was something she should avoid if possible.  When she did go out and about, she was encouraged to change her appearance in little ways as often as possible.  A pony tail this week, a bun next.  Wear big cheap sunglasses unless it was night and change the style of the glasses weekly.  Stick your hair under a ball cap if you could, or wear a hoodie.  If you went somewhere with friends, get them to drive.  Melissa had listened to the agent explain all this, speechless with horror.

Eventually, though, she’d adjusted.  Charleston, South Carolina was actually a very nice city, a lot nicer than Raleigh.  Ironically Melissa had been struggling to make it as a real estate agent, with the economy so poor.  Between the job she’d been given as a secretary at a Catholic elementary school and the relatively generous stipend she got from WITSEC, she had plenty of money; that was a definite improvement.  Her initial fear, when they told her what her job would be, which was that she’d be alone in a sea of nuns, turned out to be inaccurate.  In fact, St. Therese only had one nun, Sister Mary Joan. The rest of the staff were, like Melissa, mostly young women, a nice mix of singles and young newlyweds, and, somewhat to her surprise, Melissa had a small but good circle of friends very quickly.

She missed her family, but not as much as one might have expected.  Her father had been a busy, successful surgeon who, unfortunately, had an eye that wandered too regularly to the next young nurse.  Her mother had been that next nurse, once, when her father had divorced his second wife when he was forty and her mother twenty-four.  Unfortunately, nine years later Melissa’s mother was on the other side of the coin, and the “next” Mrs. Moffett had been only twenty-two to her father’s nearly fifty.  Melissa’s mother became Dr. Moffett’s third ex-wife, with seven-year-old Melissa at her side.

Her father always had been busy and distant, and this hardly improved after the divorce.  He’d already had two children from his second wife, and those children, now in their teens, had more interesting activities than a seven-year-old.  When Melissa was with her father on “his” weekends, it tended to be a long boring round of going to her half-siblings’ sporting events.  Her father’s new wife was not unkind to her, but her weekends were filled with tennis dates and spa appointments and she made it clear she was not a babysitter for a seven-year-old.

Her “every weekend with Dad,” soon became “one weekend a month.”  He had continued to support her, but when her mother had remarried two years later, and Melissa’s stepfather had been transferred from California to New York, Melissa knew that deep down, her father was happy to see her go.  She continued to have phone conversations with her dad, but by the time she’d been taken into WITSEC, those calls had diminished to a couple of long chats each year.

Melissa’s mother’s second marriage, fortunately, had been happy and stable.  She and Melissa’s stepfather, Frank White, had had three more children, all of whom were more than ten years younger than Melissa.  It had provided Melissa with a relatively stable home life during her high school years, but now those siblings, at 11, 13 and 15, were still in middle and high school, and her mother was totally consumed with PTO and bake sales, soccer and swim team, softball and cheerleading.  Melissa knew that her mother loved her and was very worried about her, but the life she had with her new family did not readily include an adult daughter from a failed marriage now eighteen years in the past.  Melissa wondered occasionally, alone in the dark, if what had happened to her might not actually be a secret relief to her mother.

Melissa had gotten a business degree in college, and after she graduated, moved to Raleigh, North Carolina, but when, due to the economy, a finance job had not panned out, she had ended up in real estate.  Over the last few years, she’d only seen her family a couple of times a year – but still they’d always spent Christmas together.  She hadn’t missed them much until now, but as she looked down over Charleston and could see many homes with Christmas lights and brightly lit decorations, the tears she’d fought back for so long came full force.  As awkward as it had been at times, Christmas had always been good.  Her mother had loved Christmas and always decorated; almost in rebellion, this year Melissa had not even bought a tree.

As Melissa sat on her balcony, sniffing through her lonely tears, she pushed down any misgivings she’d had earlier about spending Christmas with Terri and her family.  In spite of everything, she did not want to be alone.  And although she was not particularly religious and had little faith that her own prayers did any good, she had a great deal of faith that Sister Mary Joan’s were definitely heard by whatever higher power existed.  When she got back from Christmas, she’d ask Sister to light a candle for her every day; maybe by next Christmas she’d be back with her own family.

 

 

Saturday Morning

 

Melissa sat back in the front seat of Terri’s Camry, letting her friend drive, watching the miles pass behind them, glad for the break.  It had turned out to be a hectic morning.  She’d assumed that she’d have plenty of time to pack, but after waking up that morning, just a bit fuzzy-headed and grumpy from one too many glasses of wine the previous night, she’d realized belatedly she could hardly go to the Coleman home empty-handed.  She had a gift for Terri, of course, but nothing for the family.  She’d made a quick trip out when the stores opened and picked up a few bottles of wine, some scented candles, and a gourmet cheesecake… just to have a few hostess gifts.  She’d barely made it back to her apartment in time to throw her clothes in a suitcase and grab her laptop and phone charger before Terri was tooting the horn out front.

She was almost dozing, letting the sound of Terri’s chatter soothe her, when suddenly she was aware Terri had stopped talking.  “Did you hear what I said?”  Terri asked.

“No.  I’m sorry, Ter.  I almost fell asleep.”

Terri turned her head sharply and shot Melissa a quick glance.  “I’m trying to explain something.  This is important.”

Melissa could hear just a touch of an edge in her friend’s voice.  Blinking, she sat up a bit straighter and reached for her coffee cup sitting in the cup holder.  It had now grown cold, but she took a swallow and tried to wake up.  “What?  What’s wrong?”

“Nothing’s wrong.  I just wanted you to know more about my family.  There’s something I need to tell you, Melissa.  This is a bit, I don’t know, awkward.”

Melissa felt some of the doubts and misgivings she’d had about spending the holiday with strangers come back.  Staff at St. Therese’s was not required to be Catholic, but teachers were supposed to be, at least nominally, practicing the faith.  Which meant, of course, that Terri and the rest of the Coleman family was Catholic.  Melissa remembered her earlier speculation that maybe the Colemans entertained themselves by singing show tunes, but now she realized it could be worse than that. There were some very conservative Catholic families out there, Melissa knew.  What if their idea of an evening’s entertainment was sitting around reading about the lives of saints or saying the rosary in Latin?  Melissa was as respectful of others’ beliefs and practices as anyone, but she did not really want to spend a week of her Christmas break in that sort of environment!  “What do you mean?” Melissa asked carefully.  Suddenly, she had a flash of insight, and she remembered Terri’s evasiveness when she was discussing her brothers the previous day.  “Does this have something to do with your brother?” Melissa fumbled for the name, “Joe?”

Terri shot her another quick glance.  “How did you figure that out?”

Melissa shrugged.  “I don’t know.  Yesterday when I asked about him, it seemed like you didn’t want to talk.”  She waited, and Terri didn’t respond.  “So does this have something to do with him?” Melissa prompted.

“Kind of.  Sort of.”  Terri let out a deep sigh.  “I just… Yeah, it does.”  She stopped talking.

Melissa started to get more concerned.  Whatever the problem was that was making Terri uncomfortable, Melissa wanted her to spit it out.  “Terri, come on.  We’ve come this far.  You need to tell me.”

“Something happened between me and Joe last summer.”  Since this was the first inkling that Melissa had gotten that there was anything wrong between Terri and anyone in her family, she was a bit annoyed at the timing, but she stayed quiet as Terri continued to speak.  “It might come up.  Joe might mention it.  Or my dad…  Jesus, my dad.”  She sighed.  “Melissa, my family is, well, old-fashioned.  Old-fashioned values.  You know.”  She paused.  “Old-fashioned.”

Melissa was becoming completely exasperated.  “I know what old-fashioned means, Terri.  You need to be a little clearer.  What, is your family Amish or something?”

She laughed, breaking the tension.  “No, we’re not Amish.  But, last summer, I did something that wasn’t so smart.  I spent a week with some friends at a beach house on the Outer Banks.  More like friends of friends.  I knew one girl pretty well and the rest of them… not so much.”  Before Melissa could ask, Terri answered:  “No, you don’t know her.  I don’t see her much anymore.  Well,” she clarified, “I don’t see her at all anymore.  Some pretty wild stuff went on.  Stuff that wasn’t good.  I mean, let’s not mince any words here.  There were some drugs, and not just weed, a few other things.  And, of course, my friend posted some pictures to her Facebook.  I didn’t know anything had even been put up, but I got tagged.  My brother Joe was my friend on Facebook, and in one of the pictures, there were a couple of people in the background.”  She swiveled her head to look over at Melissa.  “Doing lines of coke.”

“Oh shit.”  Melissa could see where this was going.  “Your brother Joe the police officer.”

“Oh shit is right.  It wasn’t really obvious, but when you know what to look for, it was right there behind me, plain as day.  And of course, Joe knows what to look for.  He saw the pictures, called me up.  I didn’t know he’d seen the pictures, and he was all casual.”  She paused, then muttered, “Asshole,” under her breath.  “He acted like he didn’t know a thing.  He told me he was coming to Charleston to visit, and so like a dunce, I told him I was out of town.  I told him where I was, and who I was with, and when I would be back.”  Melissa could see the muscles in Terri’s throat work as she went on.  “I don’t know how he did it, but he found me.  I hadn’t said anything else but that we were at Kitty Hawk and my girlfriend’s name, but, somehow, by God, he found me.  Came to the door by eight o’clock that night.”

“Bet you were surprised.”

Terri gave a short cynical bark of laughter.  “That’s the understatement of the century, believe me.  He didn’t say a word to anyone there, got me, got my stuff.  When one of the guys tried to stop him, Joe broke his nose.  He… threw me in his car, drove me back to Charleston.  Didn’t hardly speak to me the whole way.  Eight hours.  When we got back, he told me to go to bed and he crashed on my sofa.  Ten o’clock the next morning, when I came out he was still there, waiting for me.”  She took a deep breath and looked side long at Melissa, biting her lip.  “This is where the old-fashioned part comes in.  My dad, well both my parents, were big believers in corporal punishment.”

Melissa felt the breath leave her chest.  She gripped her paper coffee cup so hard that she crushed it and the cold coffee sloshed over the top onto her hand.  Her voice sounded strangled, even to herself.  Though she now could immediately see that there was an obvious end to the story, somehow, she had not seen it coming at all.  “Corporal punishment?”

“Yeah, corporal punishment.  You know.  Spanking, OK?  And we’re not just talking a few swats over jeans.  We’re talking pants down, bare ass, no foolin’ around.  The kind of spanking you might think no one gets anymore.  Well, we did.  My mom and dad had a paddle hanging in the washroom and it got used on me.  Back talk, lying, not doing your chores.  You name it, they spanked.  And my dad had a strap in the garage for my brothers.  So, in my family…”  She let out a deep sigh.  “Well, let’s just say my brother Joe was waiting for me that next morning.”

Melissa’s mouth was dry.  “He…?”  She couldn’t even complete the question.

“Oh, yeah.  And let me tell you, it made every butt whipping I’d ever gotten from my dad look like, well, like kid’s play.  He yanked my sweats down, and put me over his knee, and spanked me with his hand, and then when his hand got sore, he used a wooden spoon he’d found in my kitchen.  And when the wooden spoon broke, he took off his belt.  Told me if he ever saw anything like that on the Internet again he’d take me home to my parents’ house, lock me in a closet, and to hell with my job.  Told me I had to cancel my Facebook page.  Told me he’d be watching me.  Told me a lot.”  She snorted.  “I didn’t hear the half of it because I was hollering so loud.  My neighbors called the police.  They actually called the cops.”

“What happened?  Did Joe get arrested?”

“Not hardly.”  Terri snorted again.  “When they got there, Joe showed them his badge, told them he was ‘disciplining his sister,’ told them exactly why, and they left.  They fucking left.  And then he left.  I could hardly sit down for three days.  And I haven’t talked to him since.”  She sighed deeply.  “So you can see why I am just a bit nervous about Christmas this year.  It’s going to come up.  I have no idea what, if anything, Joe told my parents.”

After a long second, Melissa saw where Terri was going with this.  “You don’t think your dad?”

“Paddle’s still hanging there, Melissa, as far as I know.  And if my dad were pissed enough, hell yeah, he’d take another shot at me.  As far as I know, there’s no statute of limitations with Dad.”

“You’re twenty-six years old!”

Terri shook her head.  “Didn’t stop Joe last summer.  I know for a fact that Carl spanks his wife, and she’s thirty.  Or at least he has in the past.  Don’t know about Don….  But age isn’t that important.”  She snorted.  “My parents didn’t think there’s a thing wrong with spanking teenagers.  Unfortunately.  And I guess my brothers think you’re never too old.”

“Good grief, Terri.  Are you sure I should have come?”  Melissa didn’t know if she should be shocked by what most people would consider abuse, or pissed that Terri was bringing her into a potentially awkward situation with no warning, or laughing hysterically at the concept that her twenty-six year old friend got her bare ass spanked by her big brother as recently as the previous summer.  The truth was, Melissa was feeling none of those things.  What she was, was fascinated.  “Do you really think your dad will…  you know…?”

Terri glanced over at Melissa again and quickly rolled her eyes before turning her attention back to the road.  “No,” she conceded.  “Joe probably didn’t say anything to my parents.  It’ll be fine.”  She paused.  “But I thought I needed to warn you anyway.  Because I’m sure Joe will find some reason to bring it up.  So… Merry Christmas.  Welcome to the Coleman family.  Ho. Ho. Ho.”

 

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72 reviews for Old-Fashioned Family

  1. Laurel (verified owner)

    I read part of this on her woodshed (13 chapters) and wondered what happened. At last I read the completed story and was quite satisfied with the rest., great plot, lots of action, adventure and spanking. It was worth waiting for.

  2. Laurel (verified owner)

    I read part of this on her woodshed (13 chapters) and wondered what happened. At last I read the completed story and was quite satisfied with the rest., great plot, lots of action, adventure and spanking. It was worth waiting for.

  3. JC (verified owner)

    I love the characters! This book is great. There is lots of action, spanking and sex.

  4. JC (verified owner)

    I love the characters! This book is great. There is lots of action, spanking and sex.

  5. KatD (verified owner)

    Well I liked the story enough to keep me up reading it…but I was very disappointed in the ending..it felt like the author was building up then decided to finish the book …for the next book…blushing books should really look at what they are doing…@!

  6. KatD (verified owner)

    Well I liked the story enough to keep me up reading it…but I was very disappointed in the ending..it felt like the author was building up then decided to finish the book …for the next book…blushing books should really look at what they are doing…@!

  7. Adele (verified owner)

    There are some books that should get more then five stars, this is one of them. But did it have to leave me hanging lol. I was drawn in right from the start and my interest did not let up. Joe although a bit of a hard a** where his sister was concerned, i knew it was out of love. He and Malssa were just plain hot togethe. Cannot wait for the next book.

  8. Adele (verified owner)

    There are some books that should get more then five stars, this is one of them. But did it have to leave me hanging lol. I was drawn in right from the start and my interest did not let up. Joe although a bit of a hard a** where his sister was concerned, i knew it was out of love. He and Malssa were just plain hot togethe. Cannot wait for the next book.

  9. anon

    This story hooked me from the first. I enjoyed the way Joe and Melissa marveled and reveled in their desire for each other. They were having fun and I was with them every step of the way. Terri\\\’s family was filled with wonderful characters, full of life. Even the back story was enticing. Again, I was hooked from the first and the hook went deeper as I read. The problem was the story just ended! Did Flynn just get told to put her pen down…time was up? At least another chapter was needed to settle the characters. Are we being set up for another book? The other members of the family are definitely worth their own book.

  10. anon

    This story hooked me from the first. I enjoyed the way Joe and Melissa marveled and reveled in their desire for each other. They were having fun and I was with them every step of the way. Terri’s family was filled with wonderful characters, full of life. Even the back story was enticing. Again, I was hooked from the first and the hook went deeper as I read. The problem was the story just ended! Did Flynn just get told to put her pen down…time was up? At least another chapter was needed to settle the characters. Are we being set up for another book? The other members of the family are definitely worth their own book.

  11. SL

    I loved this story. I would have given it 5 stars if it didn\\\’t leave us hanging. It had wonderful DD and play spankings and all the old fashioned go to the woodshed type of charm. There was a good amount of sex scenes as well. I can\\\’t believe the characters felt that strongly after only two days, but they fell into bed and intimacy rather quickly. It had good chemistry between Joe and Melissa though. The scenes were believable and the plot was great. Even Terri and Seth have promise. I just hate cliff hangers….and the next part won\\\’t be out until February. So we have to wait and see what happens. The author did an excellent job of telling the story, and it had a good plot. It was a full 220 some pages so it was a full story……..and lots of details and action. I really enjoyed it.. Melissa is in witness protection and her situation is compromised. She just happens to fall in love which I guess isn\\\’t supposed to happen when you are in hiding. It ended ok, but didn\\\’t have a conclusion…we just have to wait I guess. I hope there is more. I could see a whole second book on identifying the bad guy, the love interest of Joe and Melissa, the love interest of Terry and Seth….So many things, so little time.

  12. SL

    I loved this story. I would have given it 5 stars if it didn’t leave us hanging. It had wonderful DD and play spankings and all the old fashioned go to the woodshed type of charm. There was a good amount of sex scenes as well. I can’t believe the characters felt that strongly after only two days, but they fell into bed and intimacy rather quickly. It had good chemistry between Joe and Melissa though. The scenes were believable and the plot was great. Even Terri and Seth have promise. I just hate cliff hangers….and the next part won’t be out until February. So we have to wait and see what happens. The author did an excellent job of telling the story, and it had a good plot. It was a full 220 some pages so it was a full story……..and lots of details and action. I really enjoyed it.. Melissa is in witness protection and her situation is compromised. She just happens to fall in love which I guess isn’t supposed to happen when you are in hiding. It ended ok, but didn’t have a conclusion…we just have to wait I guess. I hope there is more. I could see a whole second book on identifying the bad guy, the love interest of Joe and Melissa, the love interest of Terry and Seth….So many things, so little time.

  13. K (verified owner)

    I really enjoyed this one. I trust the saga will continue. It doesn\\\’t seem finished.

  14. K (verified owner)

    I really enjoyed this one. I trust the saga will continue. It doesn’t seem finished.

  15. Miss contrite

    I liked the story it was quite intense and had a good plot for me personally I didn\\\’t like the sex scenes there were too many and it was a bit unbelievable plus there was no need for the swearing joe threatens to wash his sisters mouth out when she swears yet it\\\’s \\\’f\\\’ this that and the other from him the story was good enough on its own for that. I will read nxt book as it\\\’s left you hanging

  16. Miss contrite

    I liked the story it was quite intense and had a good plot for me personally I didn’t like the sex scenes there were too many and it was a bit unbelievable plus there was no need for the swearing joe threatens to wash his sisters mouth out when she swears yet it’s ‘f’ this that and the other from him the story was good enough on its own for that. I will read nxt book as it’s left you hanging

  17. Christine (verified owner)

    This was a great story with an unusual circumstance as the main plot. Melissa is in the WitSec program for witnessing a murder when she decides to go home with her friend Terri to spend Christmas with her family. She meets Joe, Terri\\\’s brother, and falls in love. I really liked how all the characters were well developed. Joe was sexy and very alpha and Melissa was kind and caring but also quite interested in what really goes on behind closed doors at the Coleman house.
    The only negative for me was the long scene when Melissa is finally located by the Mob. It seemed to go on and on then the story ended rather quickly.

  18. Christine (verified owner)

    This was a great story with an unusual circumstance as the main plot. Melissa is in the WitSec program for witnessing a murder when she decides to go home with her friend Terri to spend Christmas with her family. She meets Joe, Terri’s brother, and falls in love. I really liked how all the characters were well developed. Joe was sexy and very alpha and Melissa was kind and caring but also quite interested in what really goes on behind closed doors at the Coleman house.
    The only negative for me was the long scene when Melissa is finally located by the Mob. It seemed to go on and on then the story ended rather quickly.

  19. Artsy1 (verified owner)

    This was a great story with an unusual circumstance as the main plot. Melissa is in the WitSec program for witnessing a murder when she decides to go home with her friend Terri to spend Christmas with her family. She meets Joe, Terri\\\’s brother, and falls in love. I really liked how all the characters were well developed. Joe was sexy and very alpha and Melissa was kind and caring but also quite interested in what really goes on behind closed doors at the Coleman house.
    The only negative for me was the long scene when Melissa is finally located by the Mob. It seemed to go on and on then the story ended rather quickly.

  20. Artsy1 (verified owner)

    This was a great story with an unusual circumstance as the main plot. Melissa is in the WitSec program for witnessing a murder when she decides to go home with her friend Terri to spend Christmas with her family. She meets Joe, Terri’s brother, and falls in love. I really liked how all the characters were well developed. Joe was sexy and very alpha and Melissa was kind and caring but also quite interested in what really goes on behind closed doors at the Coleman house.
    The only negative for me was the long scene when Melissa is finally located by the Mob. It seemed to go on and on then the story ended rather quickly.

  21. Krista Strickland

    Fantastic doesn\\\’t begin to describe it! Not only was this a fabulous Christmas book, it is also one of the best stories I\\\’ve read this entire year–and I read a lot! Author Nickie Flynn takes you through a range of emotions in this suspenseful romance that will leave you begging for more! I\\\’d give it 10 stars if I could!

  22. Krista Strickland

    Fantastic doesn’t begin to describe it! Not only was this a fabulous Christmas book, it is also one of the best stories I’ve read this entire year–and I read a lot! Author Nickie Flynn takes you through a range of emotions in this suspenseful romance that will leave you begging for more! I’d give it 10 stars if I could!

  23. DNF

    A great story. The plot is original and well written but it hasn\\\’t a conclusion; I\\\’m looking forward to read the sequel. I hope the sequel will talk about Joe – Melissa and Seth – Terry.

  24. DNF

    A great story. The plot is original and well written but it hasn’t a conclusion; I’m looking forward to read the sequel. I hope the sequel will talk about Joe – Melissa and Seth – Terry.

  25. Ann (verified owner)

    Great plot, not another cheesy romance with spanking thrown in. It had an actual adventurous story line, which drew you in and very ingenius ending to make you anticipate the next book!

  26. Ann (verified owner)

    Great plot, not another cheesy romance with spanking thrown in. It had an actual adventurous story line, which drew you in and very ingenius ending to make you anticipate the next book!

  27. Jaycee

    I must be honest, I had mixed feelings about this story. I loved the plot – Melissa as a WITSEC, and Joe as a strong, no-nonsense detective who does his all to protect both his new love interest and his family. The action during the last third of the story was intense and kept me reading until the end. The characterizations were good as well – I really enjoyed reading about the family dynamics. But I didn\\\’t care for, nor could I get into, the fact that Joe felt it was OK to spank his grown sister on the bare. Even when at home, when the father should have been taking care of discipline, Joe took it upon himself to curb Teri\\\’s behavior. I think that part that bothered me the most, aside from the bare aspect, was that Joe never showed Teri any brotherly love or forgiveness. He was constantly berating her, scolding, threatening, etc. And the fact that he brought the spanking up in front of the family, and a visitor, just seemed unkind and uncaring. With 3 older brothers who think they can punish her at will, it is no wonder that Teri is a rebellious, rather abrasive young lady!
    As another reviewer stated, Joe took Teri to task for her language at one point, but he uttered the f word many, many times. Those type of inconsistencies make it difficult to really enjoy a story at times.

    I will certainly read Flynn\\\’s next story, but hope that it has a more satisfying conclusion. I am eager to know how things work out for Melissa and hope that Teri can find happiness with Sean.

  28. Jaycee

    I must be honest, I had mixed feelings about this story. I loved the plot – Melissa as a WITSEC, and Joe as a strong, no-nonsense detective who does his all to protect both his new love interest and his family. The action during the last third of the story was intense and kept me reading until the end. The characterizations were good as well – I really enjoyed reading about the family dynamics. But I didn’t care for, nor could I get into, the fact that Joe felt it was OK to spank his grown sister on the bare. Even when at home, when the father should have been taking care of discipline, Joe took it upon himself to curb Teri’s behavior. I think that part that bothered me the most, aside from the bare aspect, was that Joe never showed Teri any brotherly love or forgiveness. He was constantly berating her, scolding, threatening, etc. And the fact that he brought the spanking up in front of the family, and a visitor, just seemed unkind and uncaring. With 3 older brothers who think they can punish her at will, it is no wonder that Teri is a rebellious, rather abrasive young lady!
    As another reviewer stated, Joe took Teri to task for her language at one point, but he uttered the f word many, many times. Those type of inconsistencies make it difficult to really enjoy a story at times.

    I will certainly read Flynn’s next story, but hope that it has a more satisfying conclusion. I am eager to know how things work out for Melissa and hope that Teri can find happiness with Sean.

  29. Mattie (verified owner)

    In this book Melissa gets what she has always been interested in, a spanking. I think Melissa and Joe make a great couple and the whole family is warm and loving. Of course not everyone in the family appreciates their brother\\\’s love.

  30. Mattie (verified owner)

    In this book Melissa gets what she has always been interested in, a spanking. I think Melissa and Joe make a great couple and the whole family is warm and loving. Of course not everyone in the family appreciates their brother’s love.

  31. Kathy (verified owner)

    I really liked this book as much as I really didn\\\’t like the ending.I never saw a cliff hanger coming.I would have waited to read the book until the sequel was out. But I did like the story. I also agreed with an earlier review about spanking his sister bare. A little uncomfortable for me but I will definitely read this author again

  32. Kathy (verified owner)

    I really liked this book as much as I really didn’t like the ending.I never saw a cliff hanger coming.I would have waited to read the book until the sequel was out. But I did like the story. I also agreed with an earlier review about spanking his sister bare. A little uncomfortable for me but I will definitely read this author again

  33. BL Froman (verified owner)

    I would give this book more stars! I can\\\’t wait for the 2nd one (and the continuation!!) to come out in February! This book is wonderfully long, it has a great plot and is truly engaging! Great work, Nickie Flynn, thank you for the wonderful read.

  34. BL Froman (verified owner)

    I would give this book more stars! I can’t wait for the 2nd one (and the continuation!!) to come out in February! This book is wonderfully long, it has a great plot and is truly engaging! Great work, Nickie Flynn, thank you for the wonderful read.

  35. Linda (verified owner)

    Very good but the ending left you hanging. I hope Flynn finishes the story.

  36. Linda (verified owner)

    Very good but the ending left you hanging. I hope Flynn finishes the story.

  37. Joanie (verified owner)

    There is no ending to this book. The reader is left hanging for the next book, which should have been noted in the book description. I would not have wasted my money and time reading this book. I read for enjoyment; not to be left frustrated!!

  38. Joanie (verified owner)

    There is no ending to this book. The reader is left hanging for the next book, which should have been noted in the book description. I would not have wasted my money and time reading this book. I read for enjoyment; not to be left frustrated!!

  39. Tara (verified owner)

    I really enjoyed this and hope there will be a sequel — too much was left up in the air. I loved the family dynamics throughout, but found the action scenes a bit overdone.

  40. Tara (verified owner)

    I really enjoyed this and hope there will be a sequel — too much was left up in the air. I loved the family dynamics throughout, but found the action scenes a bit overdone.

  41. Margaret (verified owner)

    Well written. Good story. Ended without finishing. Is there more!!!!

  42. Margaret (verified owner)

    Well written. Good story. Ended without finishing. Is there more!!!!

  43. Arleen

    This was an outstanding book. It was one of the I can\\\’t put it down kind. The characters were great and the story had a great plot. I will agree that the ending could have been a little better but I had to give this one 5 stars anyway.

  44. Arleen

    This was an outstanding book. It was one of the I can’t put it down kind. The characters were great and the story had a great plot. I will agree that the ending could have been a little better but I had to give this one 5 stars anyway.

  45. DKT

    This is an outstanding story. It\\\’s full of suspense, adventure, and lots of twist. I dynamic of Melissa and Joe was very amusing. The character development and plot are beautifully done. I couldn\\\’t put this book down. I do which the ending would have been a little more conclusive and not ended so abruptly. I am looking forward to the sequel that will hopefully answer some questions

  46. DKT

    This is an outstanding story. It’s full of suspense, adventure, and lots of twist. I dynamic of Melissa and Joe was very amusing. The character development and plot are beautifully done. I couldn’t put this book down. I do which the ending would have been a little more conclusive and not ended so abruptly. I am looking forward to the sequel that will hopefully answer some questions

  47. KArc (verified owner)

    I enjoyed the family dynamic in this story. The interaction between all family members was very close and caring. Once the story got more into the chase scenes I found it to lose its realism. The reasoning behind some of the actions didn\\\’t make sense and seemed to be thrown in just to make the next scene work. Also the lack of an ending is just wrong. I paid for and thought I was getting a story not a partial story that I will have to pay more for if I want the complete story.

  48. KArc (verified owner)

    I enjoyed the family dynamic in this story. The interaction between all family members was very close and caring. Once the story got more into the chase scenes I found it to lose its realism. The reasoning behind some of the actions didn’t make sense and seemed to be thrown in just to make the next scene work. Also the lack of an ending is just wrong. I paid for and thought I was getting a story not a partial story that I will have to pay more for if I want the complete story.

  49. Corinne (verified owner)

    I literally could not put this book down from the moment I picked it up. The plot, the writing, the characters were all spot on for me. There was great action, loving family discipline, & a hot & steamy budding romance. I cannot wait to see what the next installment has in store for me.

  50. Corinne (verified owner)

    I literally could not put this book down from the moment I picked it up. The plot, the writing, the characters were all spot on for me. There was great action, loving family discipline, & a hot & steamy budding romance. I cannot wait to see what the next installment has in store for me.

  51. SH

    I put off purchasing this book as I didn\\\’t know the author and that was a huge mistake! My only consolation is it is closer to Valentine\\\’s Day and part two now! This book is well written with a great story line that dragged me in at the beginning and never let go. I read it in one sitting and was sorry to see it end. Great job!

  52. SH

    I put off purchasing this book as I didn’t know the author and that was a huge mistake! My only consolation is it is closer to Valentine’s Day and part two now! This book is well written with a great story line that dragged me in at the beginning and never let go. I read it in one sitting and was sorry to see it end. Great job!

  53. JK (verified owner)

    What a great book! I loved the very different way this one started! It has many great and memorable characters! The whole family spanks! Fun to read and very enjoyable!!

  54. JK (verified owner)

    What a great book! I loved the very different way this one started! It has many great and memorable characters! The whole family spanks! Fun to read and very enjoyable!!

  55. Rhonda

    While this was an interesting story about a family that practiced DD and I liked the relationship between Melissa and Joe I had a real problem with Joe spanking his grown sister Terri\\\’s bare bottom and the way his brother\\\’s joked about it. Too, I absolutely hated that the ending was a
    cliff hanger. I think that should have been disclosed up front.

  56. Rhonda

    While this was an interesting story about a family that practiced DD and I liked the relationship between Melissa and Joe I had a real problem with Joe spanking his grown sister Terri’s bare bottom and the way his brother’s joked about it. Too, I absolutely hated that the ending was a
    cliff hanger. I think that should have been disclosed up front.

  57. S.L. (verified owner)

    This story is about a family that practices domestic discipline. I loved the family interaction and it was fun to read. There are a lot of layers to the story but beware there isn\\\’t an ending. I was very disappointed with the ending.

  58. S.L. (verified owner)

    This story is about a family that practices domestic discipline. I loved the family interaction and it was fun to read. There are a lot of layers to the story but beware there isn’t an ending. I was very disappointed with the ending.

  59. vicki

    Wonderful book, action, intrigue, spanking, hot alpha male. However, be prepared, this is not the ending of their story, just the beginning or first half. I believe there is going to be another one coming out soon according to Goodreads.

  60. vicki

    Wonderful book, action, intrigue, spanking, hot alpha male. However, be prepared, this is not the ending of their story, just the beginning or first half. I believe there is going to be another one coming out soon according to Goodreads.

  61. Annie (verified owner)

    Great book – lots of adventure, suspense, romance, and spanking! When is the next book coming out? Can\\\’t wait to find out what happens next!

  62. Annie (verified owner)

    Great book – lots of adventure, suspense, romance, and spanking! When is the next book coming out? Can’t wait to find out what happens next!

  63. Cassie

    Enjoyable. The characters were good (though the friend was a bit on the annoying side sometimes). I liked the interaction between the hero and heroine, and the spanking and what followed was pretty hot. Liked that they both admitted to a fetish for it, and that he was unrepentant about being kinky. The suspense plot was well-done, if a bit melodramatic at times, and I didn’t like that things were left unresolved at the end, though I will definitely read the sequel.

  64. Cassie

    Enjoyable. The characters were good (though the friend was a bit on the annoying side sometimes). I liked the interaction between the hero and heroine, and the spanking and what followed was pretty hot. Liked that they both admitted to a fetish for it, and that he was unrepentant about being kinky. The suspense plot was well-done, if a bit melodramatic at times, and I didn??t like that things were left unresolved at the end, though I will definitely read the sequel.

  65. Denise (verified owner)

    Wished there was a sequel to this…want more of this couple

  66. Denise (verified owner)

    Wished there was a sequel to this…want more of this couple

  67. Cirkeline

    I don\’t advice to buy the book because Nicki promised book 2 in february and it never came. there is a cliffhanger and I think you don\’t respect the reader when you don\’t care to give any update. I looked everywhere on the net and wrote to Nicki but nobody knows anything. Really a pity because the book is good, action, suspense, romance, funny and hot but I am disappointed to not know what will happen to Melissa

  68. Cirkeline

    I don’t advice to buy the book because Nicki promised book 2 in february and it never came. there is a cliffhanger and I think you don’t respect the reader when you don’t care to give any update. I looked everywhere on the net and wrote to Nicki but nobody knows anything. Really a pity because the book is good, action, suspense, romance, funny and hot but I am disappointed to not know what will happen to Melissa

  69. Ann (verified owner)

    Can Blushing Book follow up with this author to find out when or if a sequel is going to be released? The book leaves you hanging. This book gets a 5 while rolling downward without any info about the next book.

  70. Ann (verified owner)

    Can Blushing Book follow up with this author to find out when or if a sequel is going to be released? The book leaves you hanging. This book gets a 5 while rolling downward without any info about the next book.

  71. beatrice

    Wow what a novel & it is a full length novel full of twists & surprises. A BDSM mystery for sure. One needs to read it to appreciate it so well written & kept me riveted. Looking forward to more novels from this author.

  72. beatrice

    Wow what a novel & it is a full length novel full of twists & surprises. A BDSM mystery for sure. One needs to read it to appreciate it so well written & kept me riveted. Looking forward to more novels from this author.

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