Odyssey: The Story of L Book One

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Everything that happens to you, will be an extension of my own hand, and remember, I love you. Would his words be enough to help her get through the scrutiny and disciplinary measures of becoming a slave, his slave?

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The Story of L, is a recounting of a woman’s odyssey that will make “The Story of O” pale in comparison.

Stories within a story that will make readers hot with desire, wickedness, and envy giving them the impetus to overcome the repression of their most secret fantasies, prompting them to allow their desires to become realities…

Trey loves her submissive heart, but he wants more from her. He wants her to be his slave. He arranges to offer her as a pledge to his secret society. L knows little of what she is about to experience, but she knows that Trey loves her and she wants to make him happy any way she can, even if it means enduring two weeks of slave training at The Inn.

At The Inn, one of the Masters takes a special interest in L. He knows it could cost him his job, but something grips him deeply about her, driving him mad, and he too, wants her… to be his.

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L sat, fully dressed to perfection, wearing exactly what she had been instructed to wear, at a little white table, on a little white stool, in a small room with white walls, no windows, and two doors. One door, through which she had entered, the other, by which she may, or may not leave, contingent upon her signature to the papers set on the table, which read.

Thank You, L, for having considered our offer. We expect that you have showed up, precisely on time. If not, please read quickly. The door facing you will un-lock at precisely 10:05 pm. If you should sign the document before you, you are expected to exit this room, by means of that unlocked door. You will have thirty seconds, L, from the time it un-locks to walk through it, then, it will be locked again. If you sign this document and do not exit by means of the door facing you, the document will be burned and we will NOT contact you again.

Please read the attached with careful consideration. If you agree to ALL terms and conditions, we, the members of the: Sacred Sacraments of Service?, invite you, L, to become a sub-member of our elite group of members. Know that this IS a legal and binding contract, that, when signed, you will be held responsible and accountable for your signature.

S.S.S

L turned the page, her laced gloved fingers being ever so careful not to bend, or crease the corner of the parchment. Following the cover page were the stipulations of what would constitute ?The Contract!

I,-her legal name-, being of sound mind and body do hereby relinquish any and all rights that I may currently have regarding my existence of, ?Her legal name-, while in the care, or company of the S.S.S. I agree to be known only as L, to be treated only as the S.S.S sees fit. To be used, only as the S.S.S sees fit, to be governed and controlled to the extent in which the S.S.S sees fit.

As L: I agree to obey and oblige every command issued by the S.S.S. I agree that I am to be punished, if I do not. I agree that any use of my body no longer belongs to me and that the S.S.S may use any or all of my body in whatever manner they see fit.

I agree that I am no longer allowed to make my own choices in regards to anything concerning myself. I agree that I will not speak, unless asked, or otherwise forced to make utterance. I agree to surrender my mind, body and soul, utterly and completely to, any and all members of the S.S.S at anytime it is requested of me from this day forth.

Furthermore, when I am not in the care, or company of any member of the S.S.S, I agree, that if I am contacted, requested or required, that I will appear promptly and presentably on time and without hesitation or excuse. I agree to keep the S.S.S informed at all times of any updated information about my whereabouts and ways in which I can be contacted day or night.

Lastly, I agree that I shall not speak of the S.S.S to anyone who is not also a member or sub-member thereof. In breach of this, my contract shall be destroyed and my services shall no longer be indemnified.

All Civil and Constitutional rights shall be returned to me while not in the company, care, or companionship of any member of the S.S.S.

I accept these terms and conditions and agree to be bound by them until such time as the S.S.S releases me of obligation from them in writing.

Signature:___________ Date:__________

L anticipated the terms of the contract simultaneously with the amount of time she had left before she heard the lock on the door click.

The material of the startling, long sleeved, heavily decorated, sparkling white wedding dress was making L very warm. She wished to remove the delicately laced gloves from her hands and undo at least two of the satin buttons near her throat that closed so tightly around it. Every time she swallowed, she could feel it slide past the buttons. The long ruffled petticoat under it caused L?s thighs to become itchy. She looked at the black elegant ink pen that had been placed above the documents on the table.

The stiff thick material of the gown seemed to creak as she moved, extending her hand for the pen. It was slippery under the lace gloves as she slowly picked it up. She could feel her fingers shaking, the closer she drew her hand to the paper.

She knew that for at least the next two weeks her body would be used in every way a body can be used. She knew that when she signed her legal and full given name at the bottom of the document that her fate would become sealed, that she would then belong not just to Trey, but to every member of the Sacred Sacraments of Service.

Whether Man, or Woman, she would be at their disposal and required to comply and do without question or hesitation, anything they wished. For a moment she almost felt regret for having asked Trey if they would ever be married.

He had smiled that dark tight-lipped grin of his, as he spilled himself into her core. She had whispered ?Marry me, make me yours forever,? as he plunged so deeply into her, gripping her hair tightly.

When he had finished with her, he told her that he would do better than marry her. He would give her something deeper than marriage. He would give her a placement in his secret society. That it would do him an honor greater than being his wife, if she would accept his proposal.

He explained what it meant to be accepted into the S.S.S. How great the privilege was and how refined she would become by her submission into the ?lite group of its members. He told her that the journey into their passage would not be an easy one, that at times, she may even pray and beg for her former freedom, and that such requests would not only be ignored, but that she would probably be punished for them.

He kissed her wet cheeks with the utmost of tenderness and cradled her naked body close to his while he held her in his lap. If she were to be accepted, she would have to sign legal papers giving her consent to all that would happen to her, as part of becoming such an ?lite member herself.

For the first two weeks after signing those papers, she would go through the placement process. She would be examined, judged, and tested in a wide variety of skills, at the levels at which she was personally able to handle them. That the Elder members of the S.S.S would, at the end of her two weeks, inform her of her place and what level in that placement she had earned. Only then, would she wear his mark. A mark on her body that showed she was owned, belonging to him, and at times every member of the S.S.S.

Unlike a wedding ring that can be taken off and unlike a marriage certificate that can be undone by means of a divorce, this mark was more permanent than either of those two things. This would be their bond and their marriage for life because once she had earned her mark it would not, and could not, ever be completely removed.

?Trey,? she sobbed, ?I only want to be owned by you.?

He brushed her hair from her eyes and tilted her chin to face his. ?My love, my darling sweet and precious gem, I know that you do not fully understand the scope of that which I am offering you, at least not right now. And I am not at liberty to go into explicit details of the society in which I belong until you also become a part of it, legally. But you must trust me and know how very much I love you, how much I am truly in love with you.

?The members of our society do not live by means of traditional wedding ceremonies. We are governed by higher principals; we live by different standards and laws. Because I am already a member of the S.S.S I cannot now, nor ever, make the proposal of a traditional marriage to anyone.

?The offer I am making you is far greater and means a great deal more to me, than putting a ring on your finger to signify that you are mine. As you know, I am thirty-nine years old, you are only twenty-seven. This is an offer I have never extended to any woman in my life, until now. Should you accept it, I will never be allowed to offer it to another for as long as I live. So you see, it is in fact, a bond, and a decision, I must not make lightly.

?I feel that you have promise and sincere desire to serve me the way I enjoy and demand to be served. You have denied me no part of you at any time over the last year. Not your heart, not your body, or your mind, and now I will ask of you one more thing, I want your soul, my love.? He paused to kiss her forehead.

?In choosing to allow me that, I promise to you, that you will indeed be cared for and protected in every possible way for the rest of your life, even when I am no longer around. The members of the S.S.S are like family; we always take care of our own. It would honor me greatly to have you marked as such. Know this however,? he paused, looking deeper into her eyes, ?I will always be your first or Grand Master because I am the one granting you this great privilege.

?There will be others, especially in the beginning, that will help to mold and train you into what I wish for you to become, and probably on occasions thereafter as well in which you will be used or conditioned to and for my liking. During such times you are to remember that everything you experience and receive are extensions of my very own hand. That I wish for it and that I myself am allowing it.?

It was just then that L heard the click of the door facing her, meaning it had just un-locked. She gasped, pulling herself from her thoughts and signed the document quickly but carefully.

Her heartbeat started to increase with anticipation as she stood up, lifting the heavy white material of the wedding gown and the petticoat. Her white open-toed heels clicked with each of the six steps it took her, before she placed her gloved hand around the shiny gold knob and opened it.

When she opened the door she was greeted with a much darker room. The walls were painted a dark blue. On the floor was a low Berber grey carpet, which silenced the click of her heels as she stepped over from one room to the other.

Trey was sitting comfortably on a black suede loveseat. In the corner, behind the loveseat, hung a globe lamp suspended from a chain, the only source of light in the room. A small mahogany table to his right held a bucket with a chilled bottle of champagne and a single fluted clear crystal glass. He watched with careful eyes as she closed the door behind her. Their eyes met and he smiled at seeing the trepidation in hers as she lowered herself to her knees, greeting and offering herself to him as she had graciously done so many times before.

Trey wore what would almost constitute as a black tuxedo. His ruggedly handsome face was cleanly shaven with the exception of his mustache. His broad shoulders squaring off his black jacket and the white shirt under it had the first five buttons undone, showing off his masculine well-muscled chest. His seductive smile gripped her as she eased into her position, lowering her eyes just slightly as if waiting for his approval, or his order for her to come to him.

?You’ve passed your first test, and have embarked on the voyage of your training to pleasure me. You have followed my command, which is to be the first of many that you will be expected to follow without hesitation. You have obeyed without question and verified your desire to participate voluntarily into the induction of the Sacred Sacraments of Service, as my proffered pledge,? he said calmly, as he admired the lovely full-length sparkling wedding gown she was secluded under.

?This night is to constitute your official declaration to embark on the journey of becoming my complete and utter slave, L. You have done me the greatest honor a man in my position could ever ask for. You have entrusted me from this day forward, to claim you as my own. To do with whatever I so wish, at any given time, and without the scarcity of a word or breath of refute.? He stood up from the loveseat and walked mannerly over to L until he stood right before her. Being 6?4?, he bent slightly as he offered her his open palm.

?Thank you, Sir,? L said easily, accepting his hand.

?NO L, you will no longer call me Sir. Tonight, I become your Master as does every other man or woman in the society in which you have just so shortly ago agreed to become a part of. I am going to forgive you only this one time because it is a very special night. But need I remind you L; you no longer have a voice. There is no longer any need of your thanks or your gratitude in words. You are no longer my submissive companion, L, you are now my slave. Your thanks and gratitude will now be shown explicitly in actions alone. Please show that you understand this with a short nod of your head.?

After hearing this, L simply nodded.

Trey helped his symbolic bride to her feet and walked her over to the black suede loveseat where he then instructed her to sit down in the very middle of the plush cushioned fabric.

L sat squarely without crossing her legs as Trey had taught her long ago she must not do while in his presence. She placed her hands in her lap and folded one over the top of the other and waited for what he would say or do next.

He walked around behind the loveseat and bent over, taking first her left hand, pulling it to his dark Italian mouth, he kissed it softly before attaching her wrist to the black suede cuff attached somewhere behind the loveseat. A mild tremor crept up her left arm. He also did the same with her right hand and after the cuffs were secure, he tightened them, making sure she could not move her hands or arms more than a couple of inches forward or back.

He then took the open champagne and poured the crystal glass full. He stood before her holding the glass and said. ?Welcome to the S.S.S, L. Let us celebrate this once in a lifetime occasion and opportunity, a consummation of a Master to his slave.? He then took a mouthful of the bittersweet bubbly, moved over the top of L, tilting her head back against the loveseat and offered her a sip directly from his mouth to hers.

His olive toned, large Italian hand, pressed into the top of her shoulder as he leaned over her. The tiny pearl sequins near her collarbone making their presence known as he pressed his thumbs into them. She stared up into his pale blue, well-spaced eyes, as she opened her mouth to receive his offering.

The cool sparkling liquid streamed into her mouth at the rate of a trickle, oozing slowly down the back of her throat. When his mouth was empty he kissed her savagely, filling her mouth with his tongue, pulling a soft little moan from her as his reward. He pulled abruptly from the kiss but kept his face close to hers. In a soft and mild mannered voice, he told her this would be the last night they were going to spend together for the next two weeks.

40 reviews for Odyssey: The Story of L Book One

  1. Kim (verified owner)

    I enjoyed this book a lot. I actually read it in one day though it isn\\\’t short because I couldn\\\’t put it down. The middle got a bit slow but the picked back up quickly. Definitely recommend reading this!

  2. Kim (verified owner)

    I enjoyed this book a lot. I actually read it in one day though it isn’t short because I couldn’t put it down. The middle got a bit slow but the picked back up quickly. Definitely recommend reading this!

  3. Kim (verified owner)

    I enjoyed this book a lot. I actually read it in one day though it isn\\\’t short because I couldn\\\’t put it down. The middle got a bit slow but the picked back up quickly. Definitely recommend reading this!

  4. Kim (verified owner)

    I enjoyed this book a lot. I actually read it in one day though it isn’t short because I couldn’t put it down. The middle got a bit slow but the picked back up quickly. Definitely recommend reading this!

  5. Kim (verified owner)

    I enjoyed this book a lot. I actually read it in one day though it isn\\\’t short because I couldn\\\’t put it down. The middle got a bit slow but the picked back up quickly. Definitely recommend reading this!

  6. Kim (verified owner)

    I enjoyed this book a lot. I actually read it in one day though it isn’t short because I couldn’t put it down. The middle got a bit slow but the picked back up quickly. Definitely recommend reading this!

  7. SH (verified owner)

    This is my first book by this author and I was not disappointed. Great story concept and great characters!

  8. SH (verified owner)

    This is my first book by this author and I was not disappointed. Great story concept and great characters!

  9. Alicia

    Very good book with an interesting plot was reallt well developed and a great charaters that really make it good.

  10. Alicia

    Very good book with an interesting plot was reallt well developed and a great charaters that really make it good.

  11. Evelyn

    Good stroy with a very interesting plot and good characters that really make the story move along at a good pace. Will read more by this author.

  12. Evelyn

    Good stroy with a very interesting plot and good characters that really make the story move along at a good pace. Will read more by this author.

  13. KArc (verified owner)

    I loved the beginning of this story. Trey loves L and asks her to be trained by the S.S.S. to serve him. However as L is being trained we discover that Trey has another woman. Trey believes that as a slave L knows that his pleasure is all that matters. I thought this cheapened the story and made it all about sex instead of the beauty of her submission to him.

  14. KArc (verified owner)

    I loved the beginning of this story. Trey loves L and asks her to be trained by the S.S.S. to serve him. However as L is being trained we discover that Trey has another woman. Trey believes that as a slave L knows that his pleasure is all that matters. I thought this cheapened the story and made it all about sex instead of the beauty of her submission to him.

  15. Merna (verified owner)

    Interesting story. The training aspect was different than other stories I have read, and I quite liked it. The inter-relationships were a bit confusing to me, but showed that everyone is human, even Doms, which will lead me to reading it again.

  16. Merna (verified owner)

    Interesting story. The training aspect was different than other stories I have read, and I quite liked it. The inter-relationships were a bit confusing to me, but showed that everyone is human, even Doms, which will lead me to reading it again.

  17. Kendra Trafton

    Definitly an interesting story even though not a favorite of mine. Really has an interstign plot with good characters that are very well developed and who make you want to know more about them.

  18. Kendra Trafton

    Definitly an interesting story even though not a favorite of mine. Really has an interstign plot with good characters that are very well developed and who make you want to know more about them.

  19. Elisa (verified owner)

    I didn\\\’t like this story at all. I wanted to but the deliberate naming of it, so close to the Story of O forced me to compare it very unfavourably to the original classic. This is a poor copy of the style. The punishments were poorly described and the plot very boring. Nothing hot about this.

  20. Elisa (verified owner)

    I didn’t like this story at all. I wanted to but the deliberate naming of it, so close to the Story of O forced me to compare it very unfavourably to the original classic. This is a poor copy of the style. The punishments were poorly described and the plot very boring. Nothing hot about this.

  21. MT

    Edgy and intense BDSM, I couldn\\\’t put this one down and lost a little sleep the night I read it. Good character development and unique story line. I\\\’m not sure how I feel about Trey though. He is one of those love to hate kind of characters, but makes the story what it is. However, I think there is more to him than meets the eye. Can you spell sequel? I read LA\\\’s other book, Abduction, Seduction and Making of a Slave, both are intense with dark plot twists that give you insight into this author\\\’s mind. I definitely recommend it.

  22. MT

    Edgy and intense BDSM, I couldn’t put this one down and lost a little sleep the night I read it. Good character development and unique story line. I’m not sure how I feel about Trey though. He is one of those love to hate kind of characters, but makes the story what it is. However, I think there is more to him than meets the eye. Can you spell sequel? I read LA’s other book, Abduction, Seduction and Making of a Slave, both are intense with dark plot twists that give you insight into this author’s mind. I definitely recommend it.

  23. anon (verified owner)

    I enjoyed experiencing these events through the thoughts of L as she undergoes a new phase of her relationship with Trey and submissiveness. As if the training wasn\\\’t rough enough, L finds out even more about herself. I enjoyed this journey and hope for another trip.

  24. anon (verified owner)

    I enjoyed experiencing these events through the thoughts of L as she undergoes a new phase of her relationship with Trey and submissiveness. As if the training wasn’t rough enough, L finds out even more about herself. I enjoyed this journey and hope for another trip.

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  27. Star (verified owner)

    Great book lots of bdsm. Loved the characters.

  28. Star (verified owner)

    Great book lots of bdsm. Loved the characters.

  29. Marybeth

    I wasn’t going to buy these books. It didn’t sound like anything that I would like. I like BDSM, but the thought of being a slave was a little too much for me. But, I finally broke down and bought them and was pleasantly surprised. Yes, it is consensual non-consensual. What that means is that L consents to whatever the trainers would like to do to her. Once she said yes, she lost all her rights. Still, that was a hard concept for me. But, I persevered and it was a really good book. This book covers the time it takes for her to be trained, there is some reminiscing about how L and Trey met. There are lots of spankings and punishments and I always enjoy reading about that.. I really do recommend this book.

  30. Marybeth

    I wasn??t going to buy these books. It didn??t sound like anything that I would like. I like BDSM, but the thought of being a slave was a little too much for me. But, I finally broke down and bought them and was pleasantly surprised. Yes, it is consensual non-consensual. What that means is that L consents to whatever the trainers would like to do to her. Once she said yes, she lost all her rights. Still, that was a hard concept for me. But, I persevered and it was a really good book. This book covers the time it takes for her to be trained, there is some reminiscing about how L and Trey met. There are lots of spankings and punishments and I always enjoy reading about that.. I really do recommend this book.

  31. Tara (verified owner)

    Wow, I couldn\’t even finish the story, the writing was so incredibly florid and overwrought. Editing was awful, too, with numerous typos and misspellings that made it through.

    Did I read a different story than everyone else, or are my standards too high, or…? I don\’t know, but I was just very very disappointed by this piece. It takes a lot for me to give a one-star review, but it was merited in this case.

  32. Tara (verified owner)

    Wow, I couldn’t even finish the story, the writing was so incredibly florid and overwrought. Editing was awful, too, with numerous typos and misspellings that made it through.

    Did I read a different story than everyone else, or are my standards too high, or…? I don’t know, but I was just very very disappointed by this piece. It takes a lot for me to give a one-star review, but it was merited in this case.

  33. J. Jones (verified owner)

    This is a really intense look into the life of a slave. If you’re into discovering the innermost feelings of a woman becoming a slave, this is for you. Richly detailed and intense.

  34. J. Jones (verified owner)

    This is a really intense look into the life of a slave. If you’re into discovering the innermost feelings of a woman becoming a slave, this is for you. Richly detailed and intense.

  35. Margaret Corcoran (verified owner)

    Well written. Hot. Intense. Lots of discipline as all learn what is involved in becomming a slave. Brilliant. Well worth buying it.

  36. Margaret Corcoran (verified owner)

    Well written. Hot. Intense. Lots of discipline as all learn what is involved in becomming a slave. Brilliant. Well worth buying it.

  37. Barbara (verified owner)

    Oh dear, I really don\’t know what to say about this book. The story might have been OK but the nonsensical use of English was constantly distracting. The writer frequently uses the wrong word. This isn\’t just a typo or a misspelling but a completely erroneous word. Occasionally this has hilarious results but more often means that the text is incomprehensible. My advice to L.A. Cloutier is to buy a good dictionary and learn to use it.

  38. Barbara (verified owner)

    Oh dear, I really don’t know what to say about this book. The story might have been OK but the nonsensical use of English was constantly distracting. The writer frequently uses the wrong word. This isn’t just a typo or a misspelling but a completely erroneous word. Occasionally this has hilarious results but more often means that the text is incomprehensible. My advice to L.A. Cloutier is to buy a good dictionary and learn to use it.

  39. Cristena (verified owner)

    Excellent story line well defined character

  40. Cristena (verified owner)

    Excellent story line well defined character

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