Hidden Desires

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Tawna Eddington doesn’t do one night stands. 

Or, rather, she didn’t do them.

Except, apparently, with tall, dark and handsome nerds who have a dominant streak that is right up her ally.

Only Quinton Palmer isn’t quite what he seems to be, and although he knows all the right moves and just what to say to send a shiver up her spine, and can make her tingle with a scolding look, she isn’t at all sure he is the right one for her.

And Quint is determined to prove her wrong…

Publisher’s Note: This steamy contemporary romance includes elements of power exchange.

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Chapter One 


What the fuck are you doing here? 

It was a lazy Saturday afternoon, and I was holed away in my apartment, cleaning, because that was what I did when I was anxious and unhappy—clean.  The cats had already gone running at the sound of the vacuum cleaner as I viciously attacked the carpet and even did the walls. 

This was some serious mental anguish, here. 

And the reason for my upset was standing blithely on my doorstep in faded to almost ripped jeans and a skin tight black t-shirt. How was it that he managed to wear the most casual of outfits as if he was in a ten-thousand-dollar handmade Italian suit? His huge arms were crossed over that amazing chest of his, long, thick runners legs in that wide legged stance that managed to take up just about as much space as possible.  

Even the distortion of the peephole couldnt ruin that man, nor could what I had thought might have been my drink addled impression of him, dammit. He looked just as imminently fuckable as I remembered. 

Which meant that I was in truh-bull. 

Hed had to bang on the door hard enough to practically knock it down in order to be heard over the vacuum and the stereo, which was blaring Halestorms I Miss the Misery as I caterwauled along with it. Luckily, for me, this was an older building and they hadnt skimped on the sound proofing. At least none of my neighbors had complained yet, anyway. 

To say that I didnt want to see him was the understatement of the millennia. We’d had a nightone nightalmost two weeks ago after meeting at a local bar. 

I didnt usually do that kind of thing. 

I dont usually do that kind of thing. 

In fact, Id never done it before in all of the thirty-mumph years of my life. Casual sex just didnt do it for me. I needed to be emotionally attached to the person I was withat least have known them for more than a minute and a half. I dont condemn how anyone else lives their lifemore power to them, in fact. I just had known all my life that that kind of encounter would hold absolutely no interest for me. 

Boy, was I wrong. 

The things Id let him do to methe way Id let him handle metalk to mewhen he took me back to his place still made me blush fire hydrant red. Even two weeks later. 

And now, there he was, in all of his glory. 

Damned if it wasnt pretty damned fine glory, too. He was almost everything Id ever dreamed ofphysicallyin a manwell over six feet, black hairedalthough it was a bit long for me, waving slightly down to just rest on his shouldersbuilt like the proverbial shithouse. 

And dominant with a capital D. 

There were some things about what happened that night that I knew I didnt want to remember, frankly. I was drunker than I ever allowed myself to get in public, and he was very adept at turning my noes into yeses without ever making me feel threatened. 

It was some potent trick, believe me. Up until then, Id believed that I had a highly developed sense of self preservation and security, but he proved me completely wrong, and it had rattled me more than I liked to admit. 

I stood there in front of the door for a long time, trying to decide whether or not I wanted to even let him know I was home. Id been outright avoiding him for the past two weeks and I had the voicemails and textswhich had started out as sextson my phone to prove it. Although, granted, they had died off kind of abruptly a few days ago. Why I hadnt just deleted them, Ill never knowperhaps because it had been a long, dry spell and it was feeling kind of nicein a somewhat uncomfortable wayto have someone pursuing meespecially a man like him. I had to give him some points, however. At least, he hadnt descended to the lowest common denominator and sent me a dick pic, but then he hadnt struck me as a crass kind of a guy at all. 

Quite the opposite, which was surprising, considering the prurient nature of our encounter. He had to have been some smooth operator in order to get me to fall for him. I was not an easy target for any man. Although the fact that he hadnt sent me a picture of his endowment made me wish I had had the presence of mind to take one myself, especially when its massive presence was mere inches from my face. 

Apparently, patience wasnt one of his virtues. 

That velvet soft but iron hard voice drifted through the door to me, soft but with a bit of power behind it. I know youre home, Tawna. Your cars in the parking lot. 

Fuck me. 

Less than a minute later, I heard, And you turned down the music as soon as I started knocking. 

Son of a bitch. How much of an idiot could I be? 

Seconds later. And youre standing in front of the door right now, trying to decide whether or not to open it. 

I bit my lip, frowning fiercely. He sounded so damned smug! 

Do the smart thing and open it, he almost crooned through the door, as if he was pressed up against it the way he wanted to be pressed up against me. So that I dont have to break it down. 

With an irritated sigh, I did what he said, knowing Id have to guard against that becoming a habit with this man. His demeanor was altogether too commanding, as if he was quite used to barking orders. 

And I had a distinct weakness for dominant men. 

Considering what I knew about him, I figured it was best to go on the offensive as soon as I got it opened. What the fuck are you doing here? 

His smile really wasnt distinguishable as one, not much more than a mere upturn of the ends of those full, sensual lips. He took off his sunglasses and looked down at me at the same time he moved forward, and I was caught, mesmerized by his slate grey eyes, and before I knew it, he was standing in my apartment, closing the door behind him and dropping his sunglasses into the key bowl on the small phone stand I kept right there for convenience. 

And then, he simply began to walk towards me. Nothing really more threatening than that, although the man was so naturally intense, never breaking eye contact with me once as he danced me back into my living room. 

I stopped and put my hand out as he took a step forward and my palm landed on his chest, just above his heart. It was like touching a blast furnacecompletely unyielding and hot enough to practically melt my hand into his skin. 

Suddenly, I remembered that, at one point that night, I had gotten cold. Hed risen immediately to adjust the heat, then had come back to bed and surrounded me with his warmth. Hed pressed his lips to that spot where jaw became neck, murmuring, I think you run a little cold, honey, but thats okay. I run hot enough for the both of us. 

A whimper wanted to escape my mouth at the memoryand all of the accompanying sensations that flooded through mebut I managed to bite down on it. Somehow, I didnt think this man needed any encouragement at all. 

To his credit, he did stop as soon as I touched him, waiting more patiently than I would have thought he could, frankly, for me to say something. 

No came to mind, of course, but I couldnt seem to get it past my lips. Mewls, whimpers, and moans, yes. They were all crowded in there, anxious to be born, to encourage him to create more of them within me. But anything that would stop himor even just something intelligent like, Why dont we sit down and have some coffee and get to know each other a bit before I end up under you again?“—completely eluded me in the face of his proximity to me and the memories that continued to flood back into my mind like scenes from a sizzling porno. 


Well, that was at least something that was more neutral that most of what I wanted to say. 

His eyebrows went up expectantly, but there wasnt any more. 

There was no more of me, just visceral visions of him with me that I knew would be burned into my mind for the rest of my life. 

His big paw came up to grasp my wrist, cuffing it, his long, thick fingers easily overlapping around it. He used that careful grip to give what I recognized, for him, was a gentle tug, but it still sent me crashing to him, mashing my body up against his. He abandoned my arm in favor of sliding one of his around me, not my waist but my mid back, hand splaying there firmly, and I knew that now I couldnt move away from him, even if I wanted to. 

And I knew I should want toif just on general principles. I didnt know him. He didnt know me. I didnt do this kind of thing, I kept repeating to myself like some refrain from a song I couldnt get out of my mind. 

But, apparently, I did. 

With him, anyway. 

His head lowered and I thought he was going to kiss me, but he merely pressed his mouth to mine and growled, Mine. 

I knew he heard my sharp intake of breath at that bold statement. 

With that, he simply lifted me, using the arm that was already there to clutch me to him, and heading unerringly for my bedroom. It was a small place and good guess on his part, since hed never been there before. 

My bed was a mere queen, and I wondered fleetingly if he was going to even fit on it. And then he put me down, his hands going immediately to the hem of my old, clean but stained, threadbare t-shirt, landing on my tummy and making my breath hiss into my lungs from that very abruptand possessivecontact. His hands were so damned big that they covered more than all of me as they glided up, deliberately touching every bit of me they could on their way. 

Look at me, Tawna. 

I responded to that husky order much more readily than I wanted to, hearing myself panting heavily as I did so and hating myself as well as his self-satisfied look as my eyes found his. 

For several days after our…encounter, I was mortified to realize that I couldnt recall his name. I knew that I knew itI blushed to remember that he had made me say it at different points during the night and that I screamed it uncontrollably more often than that. 

Quinton Palmer. Quint, hed said with a broad smile when hed introduced himself to me at the bar, his hand engulfing mine completely, but what Id noticed, even in my inebriated state, was that he didnt crush my hand as we shook. 

This was a big man who knew how to temper his considerable strength. 


His palms had worked their way up to cover my breasts but failed to stop there as I wanted them to. Beyond dragging them over the tips, he didnt touch them, continuing on to insert his fingers into the collar of my shirt and, in one fluid movement, lift it off me to fall, completely unnoticed, to the floor. 

I was bare beneathI didnt usually wear underwear unless I was going out, and he surprised me by keeping his eyes glued to mine rather than staring down at my breasts as most men would have. 

But then I was beginning to discover that he was not most men. 

They were bigger than they should have been for my frame, a happy genetic accident and one of the few physical qualities with which I was satisfied. 

He squatted in front of me, making me feel somehow even smaller than I was, to tug my elastic waist shorts down, and I heard a low rumble of appreciation from his chest at the fact that I was bare beneath, although he didnt stare there, either, and I began to wonder if he was some sort of gentleman dom, but then that really didnt jibe much with what had already happened between us. 

Goddamn, woman, he groaned as he rose slowly, his eyes finally overtly appreciating various areas that greeted themalthough he didnt touch anything, much to my dismay, until he stood once again to cup the back of my neck, forcibly tilting my head back even further than it was just so that I could look at him, I had thought I— He cut his statement off abruptly and I was left very curious about what he had started to saynot that he let me dwell on it at all. 

Instead, he lifted me as if I was a rag doll, holding me helplessly over him for a long moment. I could see the muscles working in his jaw and a vein throbbing in his temple just before he lowered me to the bed, flipping me onto my tummy, then dragging me back by my hips up onto my hands and knees, plastering my bottom up against the bulge in those jeans that I had already noticed looked as if they were going to split open around himin several spotsat any moment. He ground himself against me, his own breath coming in great gusts already, teasing himselfand meas my body wept its tribute to what he was doing to me, dampening the material over his cock. 

I feltand heardhim lower his zipper, his fingers brushing unapologetically against my privates, making me try to press myself even harder into him. 

But, as I felt him come to rest, not inside me, but occupying the whole areaand morebetween my lips, the full, thick length of his shaft keeping me spread open from my bottom flower to where the tip claimed several inches of my mound. 

He chuckled at my eagerness, then reached down and caught the back of my neck in one hand, pressing my cheek a bit more than firmly into the mattress and making me have to bite back a groan, only with only partial success, I was mortified to realize. 

How the fuck did he know just what I wanted? Just exactly how to handle me? 

Another knowing chuckle from above me. 


He proceeded to rock his hips slowly, almost gently, which served to drag his cock over my clit as it strained ever upwards, hoping to catch my entrance, although Quinton kept it well away from there, preferring to tease and tempt me with what I wantedhim filling mehard and fastto the point of discomfort and his fingers manipulating my clit as he did so. 

Suddenly, I felt a monstrous swat to my bare behind as he pulled back a bit more than he had been, and a full-fledged yelp exploded from my mouth. I clenched my teeth together, hoping to prevent any further totally embarrassing outbursts, but the second smack was harderif that was even possiblethan the first, and I knew Id be wearing his crimson handprints on my ass for quite some time to come. 

Someone is going to get a spanking. 

I automatically tried to raise my head to look back at him and protest vehementlyI remembered what his spankingspankingswere like. Vividly, more so than I remembered most of that night, and more than enough that I knew I never wanted to be on the receiving end of another of them. 

He knew how to control his strength, all right, and he also knew how to use it too damned well! 

As he continued to scourge my ass, bringing me immediately to the point of tears, what should have been a vociferous complaint at his declaration became much more of a breathy, muted mewl. 


I was glad I couldnt see what had to be his annoying grin of triumph. 

His transition from punishment to possession was an admirably seamless one. One moment, I was receiving a spanking I wasnt at all sure I could take much more oflike I had a choiceand the next, I found myself speared by him in one smooth, gasp inspiring motion. He wasnt at all shy about making absolutely sure that I took every single tremendously imposing inch of him, either, to the point that he used his own knee to knock minewhere they were positioned at the edge of the bedcallously apart, then arched himself and stretched out over my back, so that I was completely surrounded and occupied by him, trapped helplessly beneath him, my wrists held above my head by a hand that was still warm from having laced into my behind. 

I was whimpering, with no way to stop itor him—I knew. Large parts of meparts I didnt often confrontadored every single bit of him making me feel so undeniably submissive and subjugated. There was another part of my brain, though, that had already sounded the alarm, noting that I was in danger, acknowledging the fact that this man was more than big and strong enough to make me do anything he wanted me toand to do anything at all to me that struck his fancy. But that only added to my desire, instead of triggering any sense of self-preservation. 

Had I been in my right mindwhich didnt seem to be possible around him for longer than it took for him to take me in his armsI would have protested. I would have fought him. I would have done somethingextricated myself somehow and fled to safety. 

But I didnt want to do that. My body sang and hummed and tingled in all the right places and I didnt think I could live if it stopped. 

Besides, any fantasies I had about getting free of him were just exactly thatfantasies. I had just about as much possibility of getting away from him as I had of being able to lift a house off of me. 

As he curled himself over me, which had the side effect of pushing that unyielding column of flesh up into me even further, he pressed sharply down on my neck, once, as if to remind me of his hold as he began to fuck me and talk to me at the same timewhat was a truly combustible combination for me. 

Oh yes, and you are going to get your bottom striped by my belt, too, when were done here, young lady. How many times did I call you? How many texts? To say nothing of the fact that you hightailed it out of my place without so much as a peck on the cheek that morning. 

My firstautomaticimpulse was to want to explain to him why I had done what Id donethat Id felt so overwhelmed by what had happened between usthat I still held firm to the idea that I couldnt do something like that, even though I obviously hadthat I needed some time to sort things out and get my head around him and how almost eerily well he seemed to know what I wanted. 

But the rebellious side of my nature rose up at that idea, and even if I had been physically capable of saying all of thatwhich I most certainly was not, considering my positionI wouldnt have. I didnt owe him anything. He was a one-night stand. Nothing more, nothing less. 

Wasnt that supposed to be the essence of the whole encounterno accountability on the part of either partner? Apparently, he hadnt read the fine print. 

The fact that I had been obsessing over him for the past twelve days did not enter into the equation. Neither did the fact that, when I masturbatedwhich I did about ten times more than usual latelyhe was the impetus for each and every time. I had replayed everything I could remember about what wed done, and the potent combination of shame at my actions and the remembered passion had gotten me off in record time, every damned time. 

He varied his rhythmat times pumping into me so hard and fast, I felt my bones shakesometimes accosting me slowly, making me feel every inch of me was thoroughly possessed by him. And he continued to talk to me, which was very nearly worse. 

I want more. I will have more of you than I am even having right now. I will have your mind and your heart and your body and your very soul. I will own you completely, punish you strictly, cherish you tenderly and fuck you savagely. 

For what seemed like forever, he held me totally immobile and took me, in the barest sense of the word, his cock driving into me so hard that I had to practically scream at every thrust, which only seemed to spur him on. 

And when he could somehow tell that I was close, he loosened my handsthat he knew I would have no strength to lift against him anymore, anywayand brought his between my well splayed legs to press and swirl the enormous pad of his thumb over my clit as I felt my arousal dripping down onto those fingers. 

Come, baby. You know you want to. You know Im not going to let you get away from it. Theres nothing you can do to stop me from bringing you off. 

As much as his words excited meand they didI still did my best to try to shake my head, the only overt movement I madeI was able to makein answer to his challenge. Somehow, he sounded so sure of himself, so arrogant, and it annoyed the crap out of me. And, surprisingly, because of that, I had another defense that kicked in automatically, even though I knew I was just delaying the inevitable. I wouldnt be able to put it off indefinitely, but I could defy him for a short while longer and, regardless of the way my body was clamoring for the release I knew only he could give me, my stubborn side won out and kind of turned all of those sensations offor rather diverted them for a bitso that things werent anywhere near as acute as they had been. 

I could tell that he was surprised when my moans died down a bit in volume because he actually paused for a nanosecond, and then he immediately redoubled his efforts. 

I knew it was futile to try to resist him, and I lost the battle in a depressingly short amount of time as my passions came raging furiously backas if pissed off for having been sublimated, even for that short amount of timewresting control away from me and seizing my bodyintellectually and physically. 

It was here. It was seconds away. 

No! I cried on an agonized moan that rose in volume as I hit the bliss full body on. No, no, nopleeeeaassee! 

Yes, little girl, he hissed. I will always make it yes for you. 

That first spasm nearly knocked me completely out. I had to fight to retain consciousness as the rest of them piled onto and over me, my body shuddering and shaking in his arms so badly that if I hadnt heard him shout, I wouldnt have known whether or not hed comeI was too overtaken by the way ecstasy was raging violently through me. My eyes were wide open and I was having to drag great gulps of air into my lungs and it wasnt enough. 

Nothing would ever be enough again after this but this. 


14 reviews for Hidden Desires

  1. Stats23

    This new short story by Ms. Faulkner is a fast paced spanking romance that may be a bit more than the casual fan of the genre desires. The story itself is quite sweet, with Tawna first meeting Quinton (?) when she is quite drunk and with her defenses down admits to many of the dark desires she harbors within. Turns out she is a secret submissive who desires to be completely and explicitly dominated by a man and Quint is equally determined to be that man. He dishes out very severe disciplines but she wants even more. There are some very graphic sex scenes intertwined with some erotic spankings but mostly with severe disciplinary ones and even anal punishments. Not for the squeamish, but certainly for those looking for some hot spice and an HEA. 5 Stars
    I voluntarily reviewed an advance reader copy of this book.

  2. Lillie322

    I voluntarily reviewed an advance reader copy of this book. I love Carolyn Faulkner books. They are raw and beautiful. Tawna meets her Dom in a bar and then runs. Luckily for her, he follows. The kind of Dom women in the life look for. Strict, tender, protective. Spanking, anal. Hot.

  3. Nancy Hughes

    I found this to be a dark erotic story, with non consensual submission. Lots of punishments, not for the faint hearted. I voluntarily reviewed an advanced reader copy of this book.

  4. Pico1

    A short story about a couple, Tawna and Quinton, who meet at a bar and fall into a passionate and sex-filled affair. He is a Dom, and she wants to be a submissive for the right Dom %u2013 and Quinton fills the bill. The relationship is filled with various punishments that they both enjoy, as well as the sex. Both are interesting and intelligent people and the story moves quickly through various problems as the relationship develops.

  5. Southern Lady

    This book will get your gears shifted and your rear twitching. Power-Play at it’s best. I love Carolyn Faulkner’s tell it like it is style, including her anal side which left me breathless and ready for some decadent fun of my own.

  6. Tami

    Hidden Desires is another captivating read from Carolyn Faulkner. I fell in love with Tawna and Quinton right after they met in the bar for the first time. He is the Dom Tawna always dreamt about, and Quinton is more than willing to fulfill all of her desires. They are such a great couple, the intimate scenes are combustive and I enjoyed reading the book very much.

  7. Michele Pietra

    Tawna meets a hot guy in a bar and winds up having the best night of her life with him. She%u2019s a bit drunk and uninhibited, and winds up blurting out many of her secret fantasies to him. All of which is more than happy to engage in. In fact, he%u2019s so creative and sexy in the sack, that she decides its best to never see him again. But Quinton has other ideas and show up at her place, unannounced, to remind her exactly how well suited they really are. Can she trust this giant, dominant man who has wormed his way back into her life? Although its one thing to fantasize about being dominated – it quite a another to experience it for the first time and Tawna is both terrified and aroused by Quint. I don%u2019t want to give up the plot – but what ensues is a very satisfying rediscovery on Tawna%u2019s part as we all get to know Quinton a little better.

  8. Margaret Corcoran

    I enjoyed reading this book. It’s very well written and described. The characters are well done. The relationship between Tawna and Quinton is wonderful and sweet. There are some spankings and hot spicy sex. This is one of this wonderful authors very sweet stories. I received an ARC copy of this book and I highly recommend it. A very nice way to spend a couple of hours.

  9. Rhonda

    Intense story

    I think Carolyn Failkner is an excellent writer. Hidden Desires was a little darker than I anticipated. I had a problem with how Quint and Tawna first hooked up which put me off the story from the start making this an average read.
    I received an advance reader copy.

  10. Goldie Nut

    Meet Tawnda and Quinton Palmer. She has a long standing rule when it
    comes to dating and she breaks when Quinton Palmer shows up in all
    his dominance and caring male. She is blown away literally when they
    meet at a bar and she is quite definitely drunk which seems odd they
    seem to meet after she has been drinking. Their relationship seems to
    be advancing just fine when she finds out he’s not whom he claims to
    be. Will their relationship survive this bombshell? You will have to
    read to find out.

  11. rjr

    Tawna and Quinton meet one night in a bar when Tawna gets very drunk. She spills her secret desires and he is delighted to make them come true. Unfortunately, one of these two people is harboring a secret that will break the trust between them. This is a short, powerful novella that includes steamy interludes and some serious punishments. It was a little rough in that department for me, but both characters are fleshed out and interesting and I was rooting for their relationship to succeed.

  12. Toni L

    I’ve read a few books now by this author & have always found them a great read. Considering the average length of her books, she manages to fit a full relationship story without it feeling rushed or shallow. This story is no exception. In real life, I would have issues with how this relationship started, but it is a story, so I can live with it. Quint is a great character who I adored – I love a strong man that knows who & what he wants & works until he achieves it. That he’s a good guy is icing on the cake. The only reason for 4 instead of 5 stars – the punishment scenes went a little further than I felt comfortable with.

  13. Sam

    I wasn’t thrilled with how the two characters started their relationship but as the book continued, I really enjoyed it. The punishments are more harsh but clearly something the characters enjoy. The author did a great job once again.
    I received an ARC.

  14. Kitty Ranma

    Intense, not for the faint hearted.
    Shortish, a very quickly read story. I think I would have loved it had it started with their drunken one night stand. I want to say more about this story but I absolutely hate spoilers, so I won’t go into details.
    Reasons I enjoyed this book:
    Happily Ever After, Romantic, Wonderful characters, Page-turner, Great world building, Unpredictable, Original, Easy-to-read, Entertaining, Sexually Action-packed, Twisted, Steamy.
    adult, bdsm, bondage, contemporary, dom-sub, domestic-discipline, panty-wetting, romance, series, short, spanking.
    I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

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