Being Obedient

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Three ladies in a town full of men…

The quiet little town of Golden River, California, has been a man’s haven since the beginning of the Gold Rush. And that’s the problem. Other than Faith Bartlett, an older widow who lives outside town, there are no other women there. But all that’s about to change the moment saucy Obedience Bartlett steps off the stage along with two younger mail-order brides.

Keeping three mischievous ladies safe from a town full of men who have not had their arms around a woman in years? Tobias Madison is the man saddled with the responsibility. The adventures begin.

And the settled little town of Golden River is about to become quite ‘unsettled’

Publisher’s Note: This steamy historical romance, set in the days of the Gold Rush, contains power exchange themes.


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January 25, 1854

Deputy Caleb Matthews’ footsteps echoed as he walked up the stairs of the courthouse. He had heard about the spur of the moment meeting and wondered at the urgency implied. Things were quiet at the sheriff’s office. No one sat in the jail at present, and the traveling judge wasn’t due to pass this way for at least a few more months. Mayor Blackaby had requested all available men to be there; he wanted to discuss a matter of utmost importance, and he’d once again picked a time when Sheriff Madison wouldn’t be available.

Caleb wondered what the mayor was up to this time.

He entered the top floor of the building to see nine men sitting on wooden benches inside. Blackaby stood before them, trying to look impressive in his suit. Caleb smiled. The mayor owned the only suit in the whole of Golden River, California. He’d bought it with him when he traveled here ten years before in the 1840s.

“Mayor.” Caleb nodded at the men. “Gentlemen.”

The mayor studied him uneasily. “Where’s Tobias?”

“Out to check on Faith Bartlett.”

“Good.” Blackaby’s voice sounded relieved as he took in Caleb’s blank stare before continuing. “I’d like to keep this a secret until it’s done.”

Caleb frowned. “You do realize if he asks me, I’ll tell him what this is all about.”

Blackaby stopped pacing long enough to scowl. “Then perhaps I made a mistake by including you. You can leave.”

Caleb looked over the group of men studying him to see how he would react and leaned back against the wall with his arms folded across his chest. His brow rose. “No. I believe I’ll stay.”

“Then be quiet and let me explain. And listen closely. I have an idea that will save Golden River.”


Chapter One



April 14, 1854, Traveling west…

Obedience Bartlett was miserable, trying to sit up straight in the coach as it jolted its way westward. They had traveled all night long and her neck and shoulders ached. She longed to lie down and relax, rather than worry about falling asleep and bouncing out into the floor of the coach.

This was the day they should reach Sacramento, and Aunt Faith had promised to send someone to fetch her at the stage depot. Perhaps the journey from Sacramento to Golden River wouldn’t be too long, and she could nap when she got there.

For the second time that morning, she took the letter from Aunt Faith out of her reticule and read it, growing more excited, but more curious as well. The closer they came to Sacramento, the more anxious she became.

Aunt Faith’s handwriting had grown choppy of late. But with this letter, it had smoothed out and was as it used to be. Obedience wondered if there was more going on with her than she was letting on. Uncle Oliver had passed away five years ago, and Obie had offered to come and help out with the ranch and keep her company. In the letters that followed, Faith had penned she was considering selling the ranch. The subsequent ones said she couldn’t bring herself to do it. But she had sold the cattle off, little by little.

What’s the use of having a ranch if you don’t use it? Obie thought.

She lowered her eyes once again to the letter.

Dear Obedience,

I had hoped not to have to ask you to do this, but it seems I must. You have, on more than one occasion, offered to come, and I have purposely neglected to ask. Now, however, I need you.

When Oliver passed, I planned to keep the ranch and continue to run it. It was his wish. Sterling, our old friend, stayed on for a long time and helped me after the others went to stake their claims in and around Golden River. Eventually, there was little for him to do, so he left as well. He does still come to check on me and look after the house. So does the sheriff. But the gold rush seems to be dying out, from what I hear, and along with it, Golden River, as people give up and leave to return home.

I hated to see the men go. At the same time, I’m the only female in the population surrounding Golden River. It’s a rough town on the surface, Obie, but the men seem to have big hearts and are friendly and kind to me. Rough as it may be, I’m not afraid for my safety. When I do go to town, they are all very polite and helpful, but I’ve grown incredibly lonely out here by myself.

I wandered out into the pastures this morning, staring out at the empty barn, the empty fields. This place used to be full of activity. I regret terribly selling off the herd and allowing the men to go find other jobs. Oliver always encouraged me to carry on after he was gone, and I promised I would. There is only one cattle ranch in operation near Golden River now. Ned Rains owns it.

I miss Oliver so. I’ve let him down.

The past five years, I’ve dwelt in grief and self-pity and thought of nothing else but my loneliness. I suppose all wives do when they lose their husbands. But I’ve taken a good look at myself now. Golden River needs me. The men who have given up on their claims need a place to work. If I don’t hire them, they’ll go somewhere else.

The town needs me, and it needs you. What can the two of us do together to bring it back to life? I’m not sure. But employment is certainly a start.

What I want to say to you, dear Obie, is that I want to see this place teeming with life and activity again. I have plans, and I need you to help me carry them out. I want to buy more cattle, a few horses, and bring the ranch back to its glory. I want to see Sterling and bend his ear a bit. But I’ll wait until you arrive, so he doesn’t perceive me as a crazed old woman.

If I hire men back, I’m capable of handling the cooking. But there will be other things I’ll need you to supervise. You have a fine brain; you’re good with figures. I’ve let the place go a bit in the past few months. Fences will need mending; the barn roof needs patching—and, no, you cannot do that, my dear. I’ll need to hire the men—and you’ll need to help supervise. I heard someone in town say the other day that Sterling was thinking of leaving. That would break my heart. I’d love to hire him back and get him to help me run this place.

I know this is a lot to ask of you. You’re a widow yourself, so I know you understand what I’ve gone through. And you’ve only just reached your thirtieth birthday. Your life must be busy. I realize you probably are constantly bothered with suitors who want to ask for your hand, but if you aren’t already committed, I must beg of you to come. I need you, Obie.

There is money to do all these things I have mentioned. What I’ve lacked, in the years since Oliver died, is the heart to do it.

The funds for the stage journey are included. I wish rail was here in the west, but perhaps it won’t be too long. They say the journey is so much faster that way.

I look forward to seeing you very soon.

Your Aunt Faith

Obie, as her aunt had called her since she’d married into the family, folded the letter up once again and tucked it into her reticule. She looked across at the two girls who had joined her on the journey several weeks ago. They were still sleeping, and she leaned her head back against the seat and closed her eyes, knowing sleep would once again elude her.

How would she manage to help run a ranch? Even the prospect of it sounded overwhelming. Interviewing ranchers, who almost certainly knew what they were doing? What was she supposed to ask them?

She thought of her own five-foot frame standing in front of a six-foot tall rancher and saying, “Are you sure you’re knowledgeable enough to work on a ranch, sir?” and laughed out loud. Of course, she couldn’t say that. How absurd.

Jeddah and Daniella, sleeping across the coach, stirred, and for a moment, Obie thought she’d awakened them. Jeddah was a beautiful twenty-year old, with golden blonde hair and dark golden-brown eyes, and Daniella was nineteen and just the opposite, with her dark eyes and hair. She had no idea she was so adorable. Both girls had answered an ad for a mail-order bride in the tiny town of Golden River, California. What a coincidence that it was the same place Obie was going. She couldn’t imagine the idea of marrying someone she’d never met. Daniella had been encouraged to answer the ad by her father, although her mother had been heartbroken at her leaving.

Jeddah’s story, however, was different. She had nearly been thrown out by her family and made to do it. She’d wanted to marry a young man whom her family disapproved of. She admitted she hadn’t really loved him, but her home life was difficult. When they forbade her to marry and threatened to cut her off from the family, he’d walked away. Her words to Obie had been, ‘Now I don’t feel loved by anyone.” The ad in the paper had given her a way out, and her family had not objected. She’d felt she had to leave.

Obie sighed. That seemed an incredibly cruel thing to do to a child. And Jeddah was only twenty.

Twenty. Only ten years younger than I am, Obie thought. It seemed an eternity had expired since Obie had been that age. John Joshua had swept her up that same year and married her, and she’d been too naïve to realize what marriage meant. She’d been too young to make a lifetime commitment. John Joshua had money, and when he died suddenly from heart failure four years later, she’d been plagued with a long line of who, she was sure, only courted her for her fortune. After the last one and a particularly nasty experience, she’d decided it was time to stop seeing callers.

That was several years ago. If all men were this way, she’d never marry again. When Aunt Faith’s letter had arrived asking her to come, she’d been ecstatic.

A wave of happiness washed over her. She had to admit she didn’t feel thirty. She felt, as they approached Sacramento, as young as the two girls seated across from her.

Resting her hand on her reticule, she thought about what Aunt Faith had said in her letter. She had mentioned Obie handling the finances. How was she supposed to do that? What if the ranch didn’t pay or wasn’t successful? Would she be responsible for firing all the ranchers she had previously hired? She wondered who the sheriff was; her aunt had mentioned him in more than one of her letters, explaining how he checked up on her frequently and saw to her safety. Once, Aunt Faith had said he was almost like a son to her.

And Sterling. Was he more to Aunt Faith than a former employee at the ranch?

“Obie, you’re frowning. What’s wrong?” Daniella’s voice spoke from across the coach.

She smiled. “Just thinking. You’re awake. How did you rest?”

“Like a girl who’s been riding in a coach for two months. How do you think?” A giggle followed.

“Be nice, Danny.” Jeddah had opened her eyes and was struggling to sit up.

“Obie knows I’m teasing. Is it today or tomorrow we’re supposed to arrive in Sacramento? I’ve lost track.”

Obie looked out the window. “It’s today. Are you ready?”

“Yes.” Danny’s excitement was obvious.

Jeddah’s, however, was not. “No,” she said, a worried crease of her brow making dimples at the bridge of her nose. “I’m scared to death. What if they don’t come and get us in Sacramento? Where will we stay when we get there? What if they expect us to choose who to marry right away? We could make a terrible mistake. And I want my pick of the men. I won’t just accept any of them.”

Daniella shook her head. “You’re a worrier, Jeddah. They said they’d take care of us, didn’t they? I, for one, think it’s terribly romantic to be able to have my choice of men. Oh! Jeddah, I hope we don’t pick the same one.”

Jeddah laughed, the musical sound filling the coach.

But Danny’s delightful chatter kept on. “It’ll be nice to meet men who are actually interested in having me. The suitors Papa dragged in when I was at home all seemed to act as if they thought it was against their better judgement.” She paused and sighed. “But perhaps they were right. Mother says I’m far too much a tomboy to attract a man.”

Obie was laughing softly at her. “Danny, I can’t imagine that any young man would fail to be interested in you,” she added. “But remember, both of you. if you get lonely, you can always come out and visit Aunt Faith and me.”

“We will.” Danny’s eyes sparkled with mischief. “Of course, we’ll be pretty busy seeing suitors.”

Things settled down as they began to make the last few miles of the journey. She leaned her head back once again, and this time, she fell asleep to the gentle rocking of the coach.

11 reviews for Being Obedient

  1. Stats23

    When reading this lovely western saga I couldn%u2019t help but think of John Wayne and the classic movie McLintock. The character development in this story is so well defined and refined that you come away feeling that you really know these people and can truly relate to their situations and decisions. It has a cast of strong dominant alpha men (the type you had to have to survive in the wild west) and submissive but sassy women who tested their mettle. The town of Gold River is dying on the vine and in desperate need of women (wives) to keep the men in town and in line. The mayor comes up with a plan to bring in some mail order brides, and the fun begins. With one older widowed rancher already in town, and her niece and two mail order brides arriving together, the area now has four women and a multitude of men with high hopes. A recipe sure to create havoc and all kinds of dangerous situations for the Sherriff, our hero Tobias, to prevent as best he can. The fact that he has designs on the niece, Obedience, just complicates matters and adds to the mayhem. There is lots of tender love in this story along with some dangerous situations and some laugh out loud shenanigans. Toby and Obedience have a relationship as fiery as John Wayne and Maureen O%u2019Hara had, with just a bit more spankings. A lovely read, sure to be enjoyed. 4 Stars.

  2. Dyane

    I enjoy a romance novel with multiple storylines, and this is a good one. Set in the Old West, there are plenty of strong men to keep order and sassy women to challenge them. This novel has interesting characters, humor, passion, adventure and discipline, easily entertaining the reader. I am looking forward to reading the rest of the series. I voluntarily reviewed an advance reader copy of this book.

  3. JigsawGirl

    fairly long historical western. It was ok. Not a fast paced book. 3 women. Two coming to town as mail order brides. 4 women total in a town of miners and ranchers.

    There were dominant men, good guys, and villains in the book. The women, who were considered city girls, seemed to adapt to the wild, western environment quickly. There was spanking and an HEA. I also imagine there will be a couple of other books in the series.

    I voluntarily read and reviewed the Advanced Reader Copy.

  4. Tami

    Being Obedient is a saga about several women, among them mail order brides, who are going to live in Golden River. The main couple is Tobias and Faith – how they fall in love with each other. All couples are practicing domestic discipline.

    As much as I enjoy books of Pippa Greathouse and Ruby Caine, this book was a bit confusing with all the characters and the names you are supposed to remember. There were times when I struggled to place each couple. I think it would have been better to maybe focus on two couples. Nevertheless it was an entertaining read. 3.5 stars from me.

  5. Charlotte Huelsemann

    Being obedient by Pippa Greathouse
    This is the story of Caleb Mathew the deputy and Tobias . The mayor of the town sends for two women to come to a town that had no women. It was a dying mining town. Obedience Bartlet is traveling to her aunts home to help her with the ranch. She is also traveling with two girls that are headed for Golden River. Tobias is the sheriff and he worries about having a town of men running after two women. This story is full of adventure and mischievous girls. I cannot believe what these girls can get into. It has danger and mystery and just plain funny when it comes to what the girls get into. I found the story endearing and enjoyable. It was easy to read, and I stayed interested throughout the whole book.

  6. LuCinda Beebe

    Get ready for a heart stopping journey as Obedience (Obie) meets two mail order brides, Jeddah and Daniella (Danny) on her way to her Aunt’s ranch by Golden River. Tobias Madison the sheriff for Golden River meets the stagecoach in another town and there starts the sparks of attraction for Obie. I think each of the women, Obie, Jeddah, and Danny are intelligent, thoughful women, albeit Jeddah and Danny are young and naive at the start. The men, Tobias the sheriff, Caleb the deputy, and Noah the minister are strong, handsome, and very opinionated, they each play apart in this hisorical western spanking romance story. I thoroughly enjoyed this story even though there was alot of characters to keep track of. You won’t regret picking up this book to read because it is beautifully written and engaging.

  7. Redrabbitt

    What a great start to a new series by two very talented authors, Ms. Pippa Greathouse, and Ms. Ruby Caine. The town of Golden River in California is dying, a mining town with only men. The only female is widow Faith Bartlett who has a ranch outside of town. With the death of her husband Oliver, she has let the ranch go but decides it is time to bring it back and sends back east for her niece, widow Obedience Bartlett.

    The plot will have the scheming mayor, Blackaby, coming up with a plan to bring in women by placing an ad for mail-order brides. He will convince the miners to put money into bringing women to the area. The ad will have two ladies respond, and the coach fare is sent to bring in nineteen-year-old Daniella Abcott and eighteen-year-old Jeddah Cromwell. Sheriff Tobias Madison, who didn%u2019t know what the mayor had done, was sent to Sacramento to pick up the two mail-order brides, but instead, there will be three women. When he can%u2019t convince them to return back east, the best plan is to take the three women to Faith Bartlett%u2019s place for safe keeping.

    Faith Barlett has decided to move forward from her five years of mourning and bring the ranch back to life with the help of Obie. She convinces Tobias to contact Sterling and place a notice that the ranch is once again hiring. Faith is tutored on questions to ask during the interview process, Sterling will be ranch foreman again, but Tobias will sit in on the interview process and give his input. Two men set off alarms with everyone, Stanley Winstaff and Damian Forsythe. (Both will play roles later on.)

    The story has a great and vast cast of characters and has several stories in the works that intertwine. There is an attraction, animosity, angst, flirtation, secrets, mystery, suspense, danger, all taking place while the men are doing their best to keep three young women safe, start up a ranch, and keep the miners in town from causing problems.

    There is the story and longtime friendship of Sterling and Faith that will play out. He has cared for her and looked out for her well-being for years, even pining after her after the death of her husband, Oliver. Then Sheriff Tobias Madison, who is against the women, can%u2019t help but feel an attraction for Obie, loaded with angst at her attitude. Deputy Caleb and Minister Noah will come in contact with mail-order brides, Danny and Jeddah when they steal their clothes while the men are bathing in the river. It doesn%u2019t take long for them to know that these to hellions need a firm hand to keep them safe.

    The story includes Tobias going up against the mayor and miners, getting them to work on the hotel, and him staying at the ranch, along with Caleb and Noah, to help protect the women. Sterling will instruct the new hires on their duties to also keep an eye out for the brides, plus their ranching duties. The men all claim that Faith%u2019s cooking is a big bonus working for her, getting to see and know the three new woman is another plus.

    The story has animals, including the girls taking care of an orphaned bull calf and treating it like a pet. It will add to the story, and to the girls getting into trouble. Danny is a wild-child who was raised as a tomboy and looks at the west as an adventure, but her skills will play a critical role in the story. Jeddah believes all she needs is a wealthy man, his looks don%u2019t matter, but maybe that isn%u2019t what will be best for her. She is a follower of Danny and her antics. Faith is kept busy keeping up with her three new charges, plus cooking meals for the ranch hands. Obedience has yet to live up to her name. She is strong-willed, stubborn, but has a good heart. Coming west to be with Aunt Faith is turning out to be more of an adventure than she had anticipated.

    Come along for the adventure of revitalizing Golden River by bringing in brides, and hopefully turning the town into one growing with families. There is plenty of antics to keep the pages turning, and the three newcomers will never allow for a dull moment. I look forward to the new book in this series. While two marriages will take place, the sex is not overly explicit. It is more the journey along the way%u2014oh, and of course, with naughty, disobedient girls; there will be some spankings%u2014 well-deserved spankings!

  8. rjr

    What a terrific start to a new series! Golden River is a dying town. The gold mines have dried up and miners are looking for other work or leaving town. The sole woman in Golden River is Faith, a widow living on a ranch on the outskirts of town. The mayor’s latest scheme is to have a group of men put in funds to bring to mail order brides into town. His idea is that although the brides get to determine which man they will choose, he hopes it will be one of the men who put in money for their trip. On the same stage as the mail order brides is Obedience Bartlett. She is Faith’s niece and is coming out to help Faith in her efforts to restart her ranch. Tobias, the sheriff, is tired of the mayor’s schemes and thinks this idea is nothing but trouble, however, he is determined to keep the ladies safe. There is a pretty large cast of characters but they are well written and fleshed out. The book has a great deal of humor, banter, flirting and minor disasters. There is also some real danger and some compelling passion. I just loved the book and was glad there were no cliffhangers. That said, I can’t wait to see what the author’s have in store for the next book in the series!

  9. Nancy Hughes

    A cute historical western of 3 bratty women, and lots of cowboys. Men were taught to take charge and protect, which you see here. Of course you have an enemy, good vs evil theme. An easy read, ending predictable, but none the less, a good read. I voluntarily reviewed an advanced reader copy of this book.

  10. Ajjmb

    Pippa Greathouse and Ruby Caine have co-authored another great story in Being Obedient I absolutely loved this new book. Tobias is a strong, dominant man who is ready to love again and he is instantly drawn to Obedience. She seems such a gentle soul but she is always mango g to find trouble. Tobias is only willing to put up with so mush of her shenanigans before he put her over his knee. And let%u2019s not forget about Danny and Jeddah and how they have their own trouble. This was a funny and romantic tale. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I voluntarily reviewed an advanced copy of this book.

  11. Joanie M

    I loved this well written book! There are so many well developed characters, it’s like reading more than one book. There’s sweet romance, suspenseful mystery and danger, and plenty of loving discipline for the ladies. The plot is compelling and extremely entertaining. I laughed out loud at times. I highly recommend this book.

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