Becky’s Last Chance

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Becky Thomas has been spoiled terribly by her Dad since her mother’s death when she was six, and her discipline problems at school keep getting worse.  After Becky is caught slashing the tires of Tracy Dean, her school principal, her dad realizes that he doesn’t have it in him to do anything to change her behavior.  Seeing it as his only option, he decides to send her away to a boarding school for girls.  Before she is sent away, Becky gets one last lecture from her friend (and secret crush) Ryan, and his warning that she is in real need of a long, hard spanking both haunts and excites her.

While Becky is away for her final year of school her Dad falls in love, with Becky’s arch-enemy Tracy Dean no less, and he plans to marry her in the near future.  Knowing that Becky won’t accept his new relationship right away, and that he won’t be able to resist spoiling her if she lives with him, Becky’s Dad decides to move to New York along with Tracy.  He leaves his house for Becky… with a catch.  Becky may live there in the house as long as she would like, but her old friend Ryan (who is also her father’s business assistant) will be in charge.

Becky comes home after graduation expecting to find her Dad and her old life but instead finds things very different.  She quickly learns that Ryan has a MUCH firmer hand than her Dad, and he isn’t afraid to use it on her pretty bottom when she behaves like a naughty girl.

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  1. DNF

    DNF (verified owner)

    The short story is enjoyable to read, the characters are well developed even if the conclusion is accelerated, leaving a void concerning the evolution of life of Becky, if she went to college, the relation with her father and her relationship with Ryan. I hope that there will a sequel with the adventures of two friends.

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  2. Susan

    Susan (verified owner)

    Good read

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  3. Chelsea Fan

    Chelsea Fan

    I so love your written work. The visual pictures your words paint in my mind as I read are just so awesome.

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  4. Maria

    Maria (verified owner)

    Very cute

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  5. Maria

    Maria (verified owner)

    Very cute

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  6. AJF

    AJF (verified owner)

    Sweet story, with interesting characters. Ryan has always been in love with Becky, despite her being a spoiled brat, and after she graduates, he\\\’s left in charge by her dad and sparks fly.

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  7. AJF

    AJF (verified owner)

    Sweet story, with interesting characters. Ryan has always been in love with Becky, despite her being a spoiled brat, and after she graduates, he’s left in charge by her dad and sparks fly.

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  8. Alicia

    Alicia (verified owner)

    This is a story about a spoiled brat who gets just what she deserves by a man who really loves her and wants her to be a better person. Becky has to learn to grow up fast if she ever wants to be able to sit down comfortably again.

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  9. Alicia

    Alicia (verified owner)

    This is a story about a spoiled brat who gets just what she deserves by a man who really loves her and wants her to be a better person. Becky has to learn to grow up fast if she ever wants to be able to sit down comfortably again.

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  10. Miss contrite

    Miss contrite (verified owner)

    I enjoyed this book I could really see necks point of view I think I would have felt betrayed in her position! Loved the character of Ryan good strong male ready to take her on

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  11. Miss contrite

    Miss contrite (verified owner)

    I enjoyed this book I could really see necks point of view I think I would have felt betrayed in her position! Loved the character of Ryan good strong male ready to take her on

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  12. Susan

    Susan (verified owner)

    Good read

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  13. Sam

    Sam

    I expected a fun read because of the ohter reviews. Everything seemed overbearing and overdone.

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  14. CAR

    CAR

    AWSOME STORY. I LOVE THIS CAHRACTER AND CANT WAIT FOR A SEQUEL

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  15. Sam

    Sam

    I expected a fun read because of the ohter reviews. Everything seemed overbearing and overdone.

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  16. Laura

    Laura (verified owner)

    I did not like this book. Becky is an absolute spoilt brat whose dad leaves her in Ryan\\\’s capable hands. Even after finishing this book I could not like Becky. If I had been Ryan I would have left or better yet – I would have smothered Becky.

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  17. Laura

    Laura (verified owner)

    I did not like this book. Becky is an absolute spoilt brat whose dad leaves her in Ryan’s capable hands. Even after finishing this book I could not like Becky. If I had been Ryan I would have left or better yet – I would have smothered Becky.

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  18. JC

    JC

    I enjoyed this story. The characters are fun. Becky its spoiled and needs to learn the lessons they Ryan has to teach her.

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  19. JC

    JC

    I enjoyed this story. The characters are fun. Becky its spoiled and needs to learn the lessons they Ryan has to teach her.

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  20. Mark

    Mark (verified owner)

    A very well written and entertaining story. The initial set up of the story takes a while but after that the dynamic between the spoiled and bratty eighteeen year old Becky and the mature and no-nonsense twenty three year old Ryan resultes in some old fashioned spanking as well as genuine romance and love. Highly recommended!

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  21. Mark

    Mark (verified owner)

    A very well written and entertaining story. The initial set up of the story takes a while but after that the dynamic between the spoiled and bratty eighteeen year old Becky and the mature and no-nonsense twenty three year old Ryan resultes in some old fashioned spanking as well as genuine romance and love. Highly recommended!

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  22. KatD

    KatD (verified owner)

    I liked this story was well written.

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  23. KatD

    KatD (verified owner)

    I liked this story was well written.

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  24. Denise

    Denise (verified owner)

    I liked the story line and concept, but there were some things i thought were off. Firstly, she was that way, because her father made her that way. She didn\’t know any better, so all of a sudden she is shipped away with nuns! When she graduates, he leaves her again with a note. I would be so angry with my dad, i couldn\’t think straight. Now, she is done with school until the fall and has lost her house (in paper only or not, it\’s still the same). I didn\’t like the Ryan character that much, but really liked Kendall. Would have liked the epilogue to be after college, not during. Also, his rules were geared more towards dd, which he had no right to do. I will get the sequel though.

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  25. Chelsea Fan

    Chelsea Fan

    I so love your written work. The visual pictures your words paint in my mind as I read are just so awesome.

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    CAR

    AWSOME STORY. I LOVE THIS CAHRACTER AND CANT WAIT FOR A SEQUEL

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  27. DNF

    DNF (verified owner)

    The short story is enjoyable to read, the characters are well developed even if the conclusion is accelerated, leaving a void concerning the evolution of life of Becky, if she went to college, the relation with her father and her relationship with Ryan. I hope that there will a sequel with the adventures of two friends.

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  28. TG

    TG (verified owner)

    This was an amazing story! Very well written. Loved the characters.

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  29. Nicole R.

    Nicole R. (verified owner)

    This book was pretty good, I enjoyed it very much. I would love to read a sequel. My only complaint is how her father kind of ditched her. I really felt sorry for her but overall, a good read. Good job to a new author! Can\\\’t wait to read more.

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  30. Nicole R.

    Nicole R. (verified owner)

    This book was pretty good, I enjoyed it very much. I would love to read a sequel. My only complaint is how her father kind of ditched her. I really felt sorry for her but overall, a good read. Good job to a new author! Can’t wait to read more.

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  31. SH

    SH (verified owner)

    This was a good story but it felt like it became rushed. I enjoyed the characters and am hoping that there will be a sequel.

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  32. SH

    SH (verified owner)

    This was a good story but it felt like it became rushed. I enjoyed the characters and am hoping that there will be a sequel.

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  33. cls

    cls (verified owner)

    Good new author. Becky is so spoiled and thinks she can get away with anything. Ryan is left in charge of her and her money and she balks big time. She leads Ryan on a merry chase but he is determined to win. Fun story about coming of age whether she wants to or not.

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  34. cls

    cls (verified owner)

    Good new author. Becky is so spoiled and thinks she can get away with anything. Ryan is left in charge of her and her money and she balks big time. She leads Ryan on a merry chase but he is determined to win. Fun story about coming of age whether she wants to or not.

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  35. angelia

    angelia (verified owner)

    This had a very good plot and was great to read I had trouble putting it down It was very hard to believe this was a new author the story did not go off in all diffrent directions It was very nicely written

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  36. angelia

    angelia (verified owner)

    This had a very good plot and was great to read I had trouble putting it down It was very hard to believe this was a new author the story did not go off in all diffrent directions It was very nicely written

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  37. RF

    RF (verified owner)

    I seriously enjoyed the ending which made the entire book worth it! Becky is a great character very relatable.

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  38. RF

    RF (verified owner)

    I seriously enjoyed the ending which made the entire book worth it! Becky is a great character very relatable.

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  39. TG

    TG (verified owner)

    This was an amazing story! Very well written. Loved the characters.

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  40. dc

    dc

    great story. love the characters and the style of writing so talented

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  41. KArc

    KArc (verified owner)

    Becky has never been so angry. The principal, who won’t allow her to go to prom, catches Becky slashing her tires in retribution. Her father doesn’t know what to do with her anymore so sends her to boarding school. She finally graduates to come home and find out that her father married the principal, signed the house and her trust over to Ryan, the ranch foreman and now she has to follow his rules or pay the consequences with her bottom.
    I enjoyed Becky’s escapades. It’s amazing how quickly she gets herself in so deep she doesn’t have a chance of getting out with her bottom unscathed.
    I would love to see a sequel with Mike and Kendall.

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  42. KArc

    KArc (verified owner)

    Becky has never been so angry. The principal, who won??t allow her to go to prom, catches Becky slashing her tires in retribution. Her father doesn??t know what to do with her anymore so sends her to boarding school. She finally graduates to come home and find out that her father married the principal, signed the house and her trust over to Ryan, the ranch foreman and now she has to follow his rules or pay the consequences with her bottom.
    I enjoyed Becky??s escapades. It??s amazing how quickly she gets herself in so deep she doesn??t have a chance of getting out with her bottom unscathed.
    I would love to see a sequel with Mike and Kendall.

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  43. cc

    cc (verified owner)

    I liked this story but felt it was incomplete without answering her problems with her Dad. I do look forward to a sequel with her girlfriend and Mike.cc

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  44. cc

    cc (verified owner)

    I liked this story but felt it was incomplete without answering her problems with her Dad. I do look forward to a sequel with her girlfriend and Mike.cc

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  45. Jackie

    Jackie (verified owner)

    I really like this story and all the characters and even though it was a nice length it still felt unifinshed. I would have liked to see what happened with Becky and her dad. I would have also liked to see the in between of Ryan and Becky\\\’s relationship.

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  46. Jackie

    Jackie (verified owner)

    I really like this story and all the characters and even though it was a nice length it still felt unifinshed. I would have liked to see what happened with Becky and her dad. I would have also liked to see the in between of Ryan and Becky’s relationship.

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  47. Rae Rae

    Rae Rae (verified owner)

    This story had a overdone plot line and a bit of an issue with characterization. It was slightly disappointing after the intriguing intro chapter. I did love the epilogue, too!

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  48. Rae Rae

    Rae Rae (verified owner)

    This story had a overdone plot line and a bit of an issue with characterization. It was slightly disappointing after the intriguing intro chapter. I did love the epilogue, too!

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  49. carlacipo

    carlacipo

    awsome! great decision her dad made. cant wait for the sequel

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    carlacipo

    awsome! great decision her dad made. cant wait for the sequel

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  51. dc

    dc

    great story. love the characters and the style of writing so talented

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  52. Denise

    Denise (verified owner)

    I liked the story line and concept, but there were some things i thought were off. Firstly, she was that way, because her father made her that way. She didn’t know any better, so all of a sudden she is shipped away with nuns! When she graduates, he leaves her again with a note. I would be so angry with my dad, i couldn’t think straight. Now, she is done with school until the fall and has lost her house (in paper only or not, it’s still the same). I didn’t like the Ryan character that much, but really liked Kendall. Would have liked the epilogue to be after college, not during. Also, his rules were geared more towards dd, which he had no right to do. I will get the sequel though.

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