Another story of turning a girl into a submissive, because her dad is not going to cut her off. There have been better books written about this subject. If the girl is submissive and wants this relationship that's fine, but turning her into this because she is in love with you and about to loose everything is not. The humiliation her puts her through is awful. I don't see any real caring from him, other than this is what he wants. After he had sex with her and then sent her from his bed, had fuckbuddy/slut/prostitute written all over it. Not caring for you and wanting you to be with me. The dad, who caused all this in the first place should be the one who is punished, he created this. His rules were the worst. Good grief! Also, lastly, to end it that way making it look like there is so much more to happen, so you buy the next story is wrong.
I really enjoyed reading this book. I specially liked how Dante was able to take, the spoiled brat, Kate in hand and was able to completely turn her around, what I didn't enjoy too much were the BDSM parts... I really loved the way she ended the book...
I liked this book and would recommend it as a good read.
I liked this story a lot. Little rich girl met her match and lived happily disciplined.
This book was okay, I thought it would be a lot better. Dante was more than dominant sometimes he was really cold and I think Kate yielded to quickly, this story needed more excitement.
The Billionaire's Daughter by Maggie Carpenter is basically about the extremes taken to keep a young lady safe-----at the pain of spankings on a bare bottom!
Not necessarily one of my favorites, but a standard storyline to be sure---falling in love with lots of spankings!
Rather shocked at the last review. It's not War and Peace but I found the characters appealing and believable, and the sex and spanking scenes were imaginative and extremely well written. Let's face it, we read these books because of the 'nature' of them and this book definitely delivers when it comes to that side of things. I would recommend this to a friend.
Decided to go with the more positive reviews. Shouldn't have. Was disappointed with the characters, the plot, the whole thing really.
Definitely agree with the other reviews - it ended way too quick. It was actually a really great start but the characters weren't as well developed as they could have been. I can tell that this would be a big hit if it were twice as long.
Kate's had a crush on Dante for years and now she's got his attention. Kate isn't really bad but she doesn't seem to have control or direction. Dante is more then willing to step in and lend a hand to the situation.
I am not that fond of this story. Kate is a spoiled little girl. Her parents made her that way. Eventually, her father tires of bailing her out and gives Dante 48 hours to turn her around. Dante not only tries to tame her, he wants to make her his submissive. I did not like the kneeling in front of him at all. But, the spankings were good and the story is a good length.
I kindof felt cheated at the end of this story. I felt like I was left hanging. The basis of the story was good... rich girl out of control made to heel by close family friend.
Great read - couldn't put it down even though it was late at night.
Reviewer: lani girl
Kate, the spoiled daughter of an ultra rich man learns to take care of herself and some manners thanks to Dante, a family friend she's known for a long time. This story was ok. The plot seemed unrealistic, the characters under developed and it just moved too fast. Didn't seem to have much substance to it.
Reviewer: Sally B.
Oh, yeah! The long version is way better! More character development. Stronger story. Really pulls you in. Love it! sexy, charming, believable. Dante is the ultimate Dom!
The story was a little hokey for me. I've read this same schtick before. It was just the same old same old for me.
Fun, sweet story, though it had some issues. It was a bit short, or at least too short for what it was trying to accomplish. The heroine gave in too quickly, and the overnight reformation was a bit much, given how she had behaved previously. Not that I wanted more bratty behavior, don’t get me wrong. I just think it would have been more believable had she started out more misunderstood, or acting out to get attention, or some such, rather than being as self-centered as she was in the beginning. But I did like the characters, and the relationship. Somewhere between a 3 and a 4 star rating, but since I can't give 3.5...
A great story all around showing how a few well meaning spankings can really change a girls attitude. The characters were real and the story flowed nicely. Hopefully we will be seeing a book 2.
Kate, the spoiled, undisciplined daughter of a very rich man, can't hold a job or do anything for herself meets up with Dante. Dante has known her since she was a child and decides it is time to take her in hand. She has to learn to accept his discipline and it is a hard lesson for her to learn. Enjoyed these characters a lot.
Reviewer: Su Lin
The female protagonist is certainly spankable, but her transition from spoiled brat to totally willing submissive is quite rapid and not very believable. Her Dom is almost too self-assured. The spanking scenes are very entertaining; the story needed more time to grow.
I really enjoyed this book and hope, based on the ending, that there will be a book 2!
This was an exciting story whose lessons were taught with sexiness and discipline. Both characters were fully developed and very enjoyable.
didn't quite have enough action
This book has a great plot and is well written I gave 3 out of 5 stars because I felt it ended just when it truelly started Left me feeling I had started a great story will be watching to see if there is a second book
Reviewer: Sally B
What an incredible story. It has all the elements...this book sizzles! And the end is perfect! I want a Dante in my life, too!! You won't be able to put it down!!!!