Reviewer: Pamela
05/05/2013 04:21pm 
Wow, what can I say, about this but, it was a great read. It had some interesting angles in the plot and it didn't end as I had expected, but that was part of the pleasure of reading this book.
Reviewer: Pamela
05/05/2013 04:20pm 
Wow, what can I say, about this but, it was a great read. It had some interesting angles in the plot and it didn't end as I had expected, but that was part of the pleasure of reading this book.
Reviewer: Brandy
05/04/2013 07:07pm 
This story was not what I had expected, but I had a very hard time putting it down. It gave so much insight into the world of age-play. I only wish the book didn't end so abruptly, all in all a very good read. I am looking forward to reading more books from this author.
Reviewer: angelia
03/10/2013 08:16pm 
This started with a great plot but I felt the story ended half way throw and had no real plot after that It just read of the things that where done which is why I gave three out of 5 stars
Reviewer: anon
03/09/2013 08:01pm
This age play story adheres well to the traits of the era it is written in. Women had so little say in how they married and lived out their lives. Patrick decided on Rebecca and there was no one to stop him. The training was definitely harsh for me, but Patrick made no pretense he wanted anything softer. He warned and he delivered. I think this is what makes the story different from the standard nanny stories. I found Rebecca's passive resistance interesting. Shame she got caught and had to pay such a high pain price. For myself, I'd never want to have a birthday if I got a birthday spanking like Rebecca's. Ouch! I enjoyed the story and it felt complete. Nice going.
Reviewer: Margaret
03/07/2013 11:44am
Wonderful book. Un-putdown-able (I think that is a word), but it was, so unexpected. Thank you
Reviewer: Margaret
03/07/2013 11:41am
Wonderful book. Un-putdown-able (I think that is a word), but it was, so unexpected. Thank you
Reviewer: KArc
03/07/2013 10:39am
This is a very intense historical age-play story. It started off good but got lost in the discipline and deliberately took out the caring aspect when the husband/papa discovered he screwed up. I was disappointed that this story had no surprises but just followed the same plot I have read in other historical age-play stories
Reviewer: Karen
03/03/2013 04:06pm
Rebecca's life has gone through so many changes she isn't sure what to expect next. When she seems to be rescued from the cruel school she is torn. She finds herself married and being treated as child which leaves her more and more confused. While parts of her treatment seemed extreme she seems to find a peace and a center with her new life.
Reviewer: Joellen
03/02/2013 12:19pm
"""A very good ageplay story centering on a woman who goes through some trials and ends up with a guy who is her Papa as well as her husband. There is the requisite Nanny who is female who also disciplines and spanks - although in this one there is not real explicit f/f action as far as sex. The normal teasing. I cannot believe I am saying this but this trope is already fully fleshed out in this genre - the guy with the female nanny who trains little's so I actually deducted a star because this is now becoming so common it doesn't have a freshness to it. On the other hand the punishments are harsh, fairly well described, and the sex is really well written.
I am a huge fan of characters who can talk and tell the submissive/little/etc what is happening, why it is happening, and who make the sub say back things that would cause them to blush or be humiliated. Something about wording just does it for me. That is distinct from a Dom/Top who calls the sub a bitch, whore, slut which I hate and which automatically pulls me out of the story. This is different - because the thought of being helpless, being told what is happening and what is going to happen, just ratchets up the tension so well when it is done well. This one has it in spades."""
Reviewer: Dawn
03/01/2013 08:00am
Becoming His by Maggie Ryan is about Rebecca finding her place. First as a well of boarding school student, then as a peniless servant, and finally as a wife (kind of...) Liked the age play elements!!! And the idea of someone having a school to train the girls...
Reviewer: DT
02/24/2013 10:26pm 
I was drawn into this story for the first couple of chapters. However after that the story just dwindled away for me. It was way to harsh for me and no love. Having said that Age play is not the type of story I enjoy. I couldn't finish reading this story.
Reviewer: Star
02/24/2013 05:44am
This story was a great age play story. Kind of reminded me of Carolyn Faulkners book the submissive wife only not as harsh. There was a nice balance in the way the wife was treated by her husband/daddy and her nanny
Reviewer: ET
02/23/2013 06:41pm
I am so glad I didn't read this book when it first came out. Now I don't have to wait as long for the sequal!! A very good story line, interesting characters and Sexy men. Now, I've got to say that I didn't like the primary female character at the beginning of the book. so if this happens to you, stick with it, because she gets much more likeable.
Reviewer: SH
02/23/2013 02:41pm
This was a good story and very well written and I definitely appreciate the length. I, however, would have appreciated some expressions of love between Patrick and Rebecca. They each told themselves how much they loved the other but we didn't really get to read them expressing that to each other. This lack makes the non consensual aspect difficult for me. I have read several age play stories and I really feel this one was missing love and consideration.
Reviewer: DNF
02/22/2013 09:47pm
The story is fluently and enjoyable to read, however Patrick seems selfish, the novel contains too many scenes of punishment at the expense of the description of the couple's relationship.
Reviewer: Charlotte
02/20/2013 11:49am
This was a well written book. The language flows nicely and the story stays on track. However, albeit a bit more consensual and a little bit less harsh, to me it felt as if I was re-reading A little miss or The submissive bride by C Faulkner. I'm sure it's unintentional, but I couldn't keep from comparing.
Reviewer: Victoria
02/20/2013 01:48am 
Awful story! Couldn't finish it. I love age play stories, but those referring to supportive men helping their loved's inner child. This story was pure degradation of a young, unprotected girl. Where is the sane, safe and consensual part? I wouldn't give it any star at all.
Reviewer: Tammy
02/19/2013 02:52pm
Good story and the characters are well developed. I only wish that there had been more affection and comfort between the Daddy and Little Girl. Seemed too harsh at times.
Reviewer: Alisa
02/19/2013 11:08am
Read this as I love historical age play. It didn't disappoint except for the same old nanny which we read in so many other age play themes. I was hoping the story would focus more on the relationship developing between the daddy and Rebecca. Alas he seemed to be absent for the most crucial part of her training. For that I'm giving it a 3 star.
Reviewer: Dawn
02/18/2013 07:20pm
Looking forward to more from this author!!
Reviewer: Houstonlyn
02/18/2013 11:39am
"""Great historical age play story. Much more realistic since set in Victorian time where women had no rights and orphans had no place to go other than the streets. Well written. Loking forward to more of her books. Would like to read one about the school for little girls."""
Reviewer: april
02/17/2013 09:47pm
Ms Ryan is a very good story teller with just the right amount of naughty!
Reviewer: Evelyn
02/17/2013 12:07pm
Great story with some truly interesting characters and a plot that deals heavily with ageplay but in a very tasteful manner. Great length so you really get to know the characters and feel what they are feeling. Hope to see more from this author soon especially with more books like this one.
Reviewer: Peggy
02/17/2013 11:48am
I thoroughly enjoyed this book. Age play is the main theme which I'm not really into but the book held my interest and I just couldn't put it down. I would like to see more from this author.
Reviewer: Alicia
02/17/2013 11:32am
Awesome novel especially for a first time author. The stroy was very well developed and had some truly good characters that you really get to know. I loved the length of the story as it was a great asset to the plot.
Reviewer: Jim
02/17/2013 08:56am
Loved this book. It tells a great story about a young woman who discovers that deep inside herself she craves submission. The story is set in the victorian age and the author does a wonderful job in describing her characters until you feel as if you know them. Very well written and a great buy. It is nice to have a longer story to read and enjoy. I would purchase another novel by this author as her first offering was very pleasurable.
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